10 lines mini 20 max
No biting,swaying,recycling,dicking,hating
Due at 7 o clock on the 19th day of january
I'll drop first good luck
10 lines mini 20 max
No biting,swaying,recycling,dicking,hating
Due at 7 o clock on the 19th day of january
I'll drop first good luck
ight... checkin in.............................
so there r crew votes? (but no bullshit ones - right?)
well, legit ones....if i see somethin like.....'Neek didnt have any multis' then thats bullshit....here we go
This eyeful-neek, is a primal-beast, similar to the one the bible-speaks, every rival-shrieks, when there vitals-bleed!/
If i ever catch an 'L' expect the night-to-cease, time-to-freeze, and jesus make his return VIbrantly/
This pompous-star, get stomped-and-harm'd, only carried 'heat' placing his burner in a shopping-cart!/
I'm truthfully the diligent-sort,killin-of-course,in militant-wars using the tactics of villains-and-force/
only powered by my cerebal hemis-phere, every seconds-weird,its like in my mind the holocaust and Heavens-here/
I might-be-arrogant,but you aint dope or slightly-harion, wouldnt get feedback with a 'dear osama' versed viewed by ninety-arabics/
my structure-is-awsome,you just suffered-a-loss-son,its either no show or forfeit..someone shoulda read this fucker-his-options/
Neek'
2004
u didnt have like any punches on me lol...
so i just keyed this up o'well - without ur lack of punches I win...:
I got you short of credits, like u battled without voting
you couldnt win, if u were the leader of ur own vote-ring!!
Your below average, like valve's of visa' debits
after posting his & readin my verse.. we see "Neek edits"...
Becuz your worthless punches cant & wont phase-me..
mine as well make a "LoCo Rhymes" nick.. only way
.... the people will think ur flow is crazy!!!
Your heart and line rate, droped like u were spittin eighty
he ate his own punches, and threw em up.. and got hit back
^^^^ & yet he still ask's why he spits wack!!
Fuck callin this shit punches.. ur puny.. so ill say im on my 11th smack
.... give u a bat.. and still u couldnt hit a home run on me!!
Ill brace my self up against the wall.. - only way ur holdin me
ur rhymes got caught between.. and u fell wit em..
now bitch, dont lie.. dont ask - ^^^ that tells u why ur blowin me
uppp for votes.... good battle, lets get some votes.. pz
Uppin
Viscosity took this
Punches - Viscosity
flow - tie
personals - Viscosity
Multi's - neek
over all Viscosity took this it wasnt a home run for him but i juat was feelin his verse more
Vote gone.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 19th, 2004 at 06:53 PM
hey yo wow.. nice vrese neek
punchlines- neek
multies- neek
structure- neek
personals - viscosity
overall vote- neek
Vote gone.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 19th, 2004 at 06:53 PM
^forgot to poll vote..........................
its 1-0 right now.. me
Thanks man.....1-1 uppin for more
LOL @... his structure was wack compared to mine
lil dick sucking going on?
Stfu homo....cant handle an l...fuck you and ur soft focus boyfriends...
Neek
2004....brush off them dickriders
and now theres NO CREW VOTES because your not going to like me =)
no shit no crew votes... oh and - thats a dickride vote
we'll see what the mod's say kiddie
neek - ok structure..........flow fell off al lil..........vocab was good.........multis were tight......metas were nice........had some good punches.........no real personals
viscosity - good structure..........flow was on target.........vocab was pretty good.........some multis........ok metas.........i was feelin some of the punches........ok personals
conclusion - neek takes this in mulits, metas, and punches, so he gets my vote
VOTE - NEEK
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947
much appreciated..........
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