Aight pictureperfect2, spit fast.
10 lines max.
You're new to this, i'm new to this, so let's just do this.
Aight pictureperfect2, spit fast.
10 lines max.
You're new to this, i'm new to this, so let's just do this.
pictureperfect, go fetch a camera
film this shit, ima take ya sister and ram her
in yo own house, in yo own bed
dont question me, cuz i know you heard what i said.
you just a youngin, a weakling, a bitch
ima take ya back to old school, but i'm new to this!
i've got what? five posts at max?
you aint spittin shit, you just fixin yo tampax
get some vagisil, because ima make ya burn
i just spit dog, now take ya turn
no one talks bout my sister that way this battle goin make u pay
i'd rather do this in person, but by the looks fo that name
i doubt das sumin u'd be searchin, so lyrically i'll discontort u into some pain
wit my punches imma have his face rearranged, not ta mentions how my wordplay's
ganna spin u more than marry go round, leave this cat st8 clowned
ya lookin for your senses now its mentioned beattin whitey aint no question.
u aint got a rep just comin in* sposed ta get smarter each battle u just dumbin*
well for u i got sumin*
(jump and reach for it), u want it, i jus found it,
sorry bout this (shorty) u and this battle i just clowned it,
cats be in the back like snoop in the wash laughin be like "powwnd it"
hahah
sorry this shit took so long i jus found it when i searched my name. get a vote on this anyway drop a link i tend ta repay the favor
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1RST OFF..RETURN AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLES, SEEING THAT I'M TAKING THE TIME TO VOTE FOR YOURS, PLEASE.
wiggaspitta..your verse was funny as shit, but you had no personals or wordplay..your verse was simple..and the vocab was like a 5 year old's..no hate, just telling you what i thought..
pictureperfect..your flow wasnt all that great at all, but your flow was better..your punches actually hit LYRICALLY..way better then wiggaMan's..you had Much better Vocab which is why i thought you took this with ease..
Vote-picture..
PLEASE DROPPA VOTE ON MY BATTLES. THEYRE GETTING MAD SLEPT ON.
me VS lyrical-03
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113705
me VS oliverclohsoff
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
pictureperfect, go fetch a camera
film this shit, ima take ya sister and ram her
kinda sick, but I guess that would be a punch
in yo own house, in yo own bed
dont question me, cuz i know you heard what i said.
Fill
you just a youngin, a weakling, a bitch
ima take ya back to old school, but i'm new to this!
shitty
i've got what? five posts at max?
you aint spittin shit, you just fixin yo tampax
no intelligence there
get some vagisil, because ima make ya burn
i just spit dog, now take ya turn
again, no intelligence, at least it was a close tho
no one talks bout my sister that way this battle goin make u pay
i'd rather do this in person, but by the looks fo that name
Feedin a bit there, but it wasn't in the rules
i doubt das sumin u'd be searchin, so lyrically i'll discontort u into some pain
wit my punches imma have his face rearranged, not ta mentions how my wordplay's
word play on wordplay, how punny
ganna spin u more than marry go round, leave this cat st8 clowned
ya lookin for your senses now its mentioned beattin whitey aint no question.
u aint got a rep just comin in* sposed ta get smarter each battle u just dumbin*
well for u i got sumin*
Weak
(jump and reach for it), u want it, i jus found it,
sorry bout this (shorty) u and this battle i just clowned it,
cats be in the back like snoop in the wash laughin be like "powwnd it"
I don't even get it, but aight
Dont dick ride at the end anymore pic, you didnt need it anyway. This was an honest vote for pic, not cuz he said that he would return tha favor.
"wigga splitta", some people on here are white...and those people are votin, so not a good name, but this isnt based on that. You didnt have one good punch. Pic didnt really either, but he had a lil less filler. Both need to think a lil more about what they are sayin. Think about some more wordplay, different rhyme schemes, betta punches/personals n shit, aight?
vote - pictureperfect
pictureperfect, go fetch a camera
film this shit, ima take ya sister and ram her
Wow that was awful
in yo own house, in yo own bed
dont question me, cuz i know you heard what i said.
Whack.,.no punch
you just a youngin, a weakling, a bitch
ima take ya back to old school, but i'm new to this!
bad
i've got what? five posts at max?
you aint spittin shit, you just fixin yo tampax
Pleas elevate
get some vagisil, because ima make ya burn
i just spit dog, now take ya turn
no punches in this whole verse
no one talks bout my sister that way this battle goin make u pay
i'd rather do this in person, but by the looks fo that name
try not to feed off his verse
i doubt das sumin u'd be searchin, so lyrically i'll discontort u into some pain
wit my punches imma have his face rearranged, not ta mentions how my wordplay's
ok
ganna spin u more than marry go round, leave this cat st8 clowned
ya lookin for your senses now its mentioned beattin whitey aint no question.
no rhyme...kinda weak
u aint got a rep just comin in* sposed ta get smarter each battle u just dumbin*
well for u i got sumin*
ok
(jump and reach for it), u want it, i jus found it,
sorry bout this (shorty) u and this battle i just clowned it,
cats be in the back like snoop in the wash laughin be like "powwnd it"
hahah
not bad
sorry this shit took so long i jus found it when i searched my name. get a vote on this anyway drop a link i tend ta repay the favor
dopest line in both verse lmao
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Yeah...Picture took this easy..he had some decent punches while Whihha had...ummm....none...lol...Picture..try and shirte ya lines...other than that...nice drop...
Please drop an honest vote here! I took the time for you..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978
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Pictureperfect had a betta flow cuz he had sum nice rhymes in there with a gud wordplay, his punches came thru hard and his personals absolutely killed spitta, his structure could be betta tho, you also had sum nice multis in your verse, you probably can work a bit on your openings
Wigga Spiita your flow was weak I din'tsaw any gud rhymes in there, it had no variation, no gud wordplay, elevate man, your punches came thru weak and you barely had personals, you have to have perzsonals, your structure was aight i suppose, you need to work on punches personals multis......everything
Vote picture, return the favor man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
uppin drop a link get me these last two votes so i can open another battle, if u votin on this and wanna battle message me...................
go white poeple
Uppin this battle...
I already voted here, mind droppin a vote?
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up dem feet, bout ta make 'er skeet, came prepared wit da plastic sheets.......................................
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