Barburyin (1-0) vs Archileez (1-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 3

yup 3rd week of season

last weeks no shows are gone

2 more weeks and belts will be introduced

boot matches also as the league is too big currently

As for this week same rules as previous weeks

Check by wednesday drop by friday

no fucking around

Good Luck

[Archilleez]

check, lets go 14

[Barburyin]

check ,coo

[Archilleez]

If u wanna drop early let me know...
Ill drop same day as u, no point waitin until friday for the win its only 14 lines.

[Barburyin]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post3586907
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post3586935
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post3597215
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...21#post3597221

[Barburyin]

seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez

[Archilleez]

Originally Posted by Barburyin
$10 and i will get u a name wit a 20-0 record just tell me da name u want

Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.

[Marvelous_]

seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
-weak attempt here.
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
-too simple. n weak
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
-nah, not feelin this.
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
-noweight shit are played, n this is toooo weak.
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
-uhh best line so far for you.
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
-naah.. weak
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
-umm, another weak attempt, not the best way to close up ur verse.

vs.

Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
-weak punch..
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
-uhh ok..
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
-kinda played concept, but atleast tried to punch.
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
-weak punch here.
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
-alright decent i guess.
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
-haha best line so far from u.
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
-lol decent closer here.

barburyin came waaaaaaaaayy weak.. i didnt like one line of his at all.. all of his shit were weak attempts at punches.. none connected at all.. gotta come better in this league.. and archileez wasnt too great.. but atleast he attempted to make some punches, n actually connected on some.. arch definitely had more wordplay.. which helped his case alot.. he started off real slow.. somewhat picked it up in the middle n closed up his verse solid in his last four lines.. barburyins verse was verrrrrry weak.. n needs to step up, I think i seen your work before n i know you can do better..

v/arch

[A. Know-phistage]

seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
no
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
no
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
ok
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
personal but naw
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
heh
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
naw
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
naw

vs__________________

Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
no
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
......^wtf that say lmao naw wack anyways
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
naw
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
wtf @ the bolded letter are you quoting him or you lmao diss ya self lmao how u know wahat they smell like :ROFL:
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
ok could of came not basic but ok
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
no
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
no gay/sex/faggish shit is played

b-wow you came wack wtf happened like u rushed or somthen most of the punches wasnt hitten at all your verse got boring after the first couple punches dunno what you was doing not came direct structre was straight though id give yuo that and one punch made me chucky "touch yo lips"

arch-you came just as wack in your verse wtf you keyed it yeah i know still wasnt good should of tried you stated shit and nothen came direct but the out of this league line other then that err thing was basic and wack and i thought i was finn give it to you after i read his verse and left feed then i got to your verse came worse nothen dope n it at all

v/b for having like a bar that was ok. nothen else in each verse though both came superb wack

[Archilleez]

^^

Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
wtf @ the bolded letter are you quoting him or you lmao diss ya self lmao how u know wahat they smell like

I was saying he sucks, and it was his breath that i couldnt stand the smell of...hence the line after it... but nvm

You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
......^wtf that say lmao naw wack anyways

And whilst means, u are doing one thing "whilst" doing another...

Thanks for the vote anyway

[A. Know-phistage]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254563
both hit up the link

[>Inertia>]

seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
(Wack.)
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
(Naw, not really.)
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
(Eh.)
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
(Dude..no.)
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
(Lame.)
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
(Igh)
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
(Hell no.)

vs. Achileez

Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
(Nope.)
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
(Ugh.)
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
(Eh.)
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
(Played.)
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
(Ight.)
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
(Naw.)
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
(Ug)

/v Archileez. Just came better and more complex IMO.

[Archilleez]

2-1 Uppin

[Token Muslim]

V/arc................i'll edit with my vote l8r

[Archilleez]

3-1
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