Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

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Thread: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

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    Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh

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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh

    I'll have my verse tonight forgot bout this

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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh

    Damnohoh



    Kill U in a knife fight.... so stop it U joke
    Don't even think to raise a blade, or I'll have one lodged in your throat
    You fuckin faggot... no one cares how this lame work
    Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward
    Plus Ur love a huge slut.... for my dick she work her ass off
    This a dark day to the point I gotta leave a light on for U out side while I'm giving her back shots
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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

    DamOhOhOh

    I customise diets for this vegetarian
    I give him fresh beef when it’s served like a true American

    Weak line, but it was the most intelligent/hard hitting one you had. I feel like you are still trying to grasp writing, which is fine, but try to be more direct with your opponent. Try to come a little more complex as well, as you will quickly find out, text battles are more or less "poetry-diss" battles. Come wordier. Better vocabulary. More direct punchlines.

    Bomb Bard

    You fuckin faggot... no one cares how this lame work
    Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward

    Some wittiness there. Your other four actual bars were much stronger than your opponents, though I have to comment and say, your last bar is horribly stretched. You simply came more direct with your lines.

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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

    v/ bomb

    dam's bars are too short and more written in poetry format.
    bomb's are structured better. nothing crazy, but easy W
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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

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    Re: Bomb Bard vs damohohoh [open for votes]

    Damn


    I impose with speed 
    Exceeding bombard smoking weed
    I customise diets for this vegetarian
    I give him fresh beef when it’s served like a true American 
    Basic language grades here’s a lesson
    Go study questions class is in session 
    Breakfast time his drinking soda
    like eating junk i'll lead his life to being over 
    i'm valuable like assets 
    he is financial crisis bank debts

    I felt this whole drop here gave me an audio battle vibe it was simple punches not to much creativity as it would be in a text battle formatted verse. The beef line was ok. U have to come more creatively in text battles so lines stand out use metaphores wordplays nameplays if u cant some personals that include humor factor.

    Bomb


    Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward
    Nice metaphorical comparison
    Plus Ur love a huge slut.... for my dick she work her ass off
    This a dark day to the point I gotta leave a light on for U out side while I'm giving her back shots
    Lmao

    Bomb is just more knowledgable in the text format he took this comfortably

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