The Tale of Satan Spawn in a Game of Chess

[Nigma]

The Tale of Satan Spawn in a Game of Chess



"He possessed a power stronger
than the power of money, or terror,
or death - the invincible power to
command the love of man kind."

i sit atop the highest peaks. its scenic, you know.
lived the times when Egypt was still gleaming in gold
i seen the rise of hell and all the demons it holds
and i've seen Orions Belt utop the Giza Plateau

Who am I?

i'm the...
face of David when gazing into Goliaths eyes
survived and scribed into the tale that tells the rise of Christ
crumbled morales. died that night. rule the world. despise my life
i'm a cloudless genie, proud to be me. to these people, i'm like a giant
a higher life devout of meaning; wisdom. i am life and science
a business minded pirate whose clients both aroused and screaming
my interests combine to chose a spokesman, it's my valued teacher
and im proud to lead such a sound regime, leave you tied to trees
confined to leashes like brides allegiance when vows are reading
the founding king of a thousand leagues leaving mountains leaning
too indecisive to pick a side so i bounce between them
dipped my mind in egyptian science and light unleashes
feeling grim.. and with my sythe beside me i ride to eden
slits for eyes, im cheeched, my horizons bleak with its cloudy features
glimpse, it hits my eyes through the hidden vines of a browning region
i see a sky of leaves from a dying tree that is out of seasons
its a crying plea for the diety in the skies existance
its a rivalry between day and night, between shade and light
it's the pain, the price, its the graves of mayans whose minds predicted the fabled rise of reichs and their crimes commited
the sign addictions alive within them, the wisest whisper their valued secrets
its the mixing of life elixers, a knifes incision to scalp its features
as if you take a schitzo's brain, misdirect confession thoughts of his
suppress his talking lips and dissecting his second conciousness
deflecting his lobbing fists and injecting his neck with a calming bliss
and when the end results are in, we're directing it at the populace

[Tempest]

This was pretty nice man. I really liked the wording and the creative concept behind it. It's always good to see writers from other sites come over with their different styles and contribute to the forums. I believe I'd like to have seen it longer (no homo, wait, is it still legal to say that) but for what you had it was a great and enjoyable read. Thank you. Nominated.

[Celph Taut]

Dope, Nigma. Really nice wording, subtle messages and nice story line throughout the entire piece. Carefully paced material and I liked the concept behind it, too! Nice complex wording, the structure was really uniformed, and it had nice readability! Overall, I can't complain, Nigma. Knocked this out of the park!

[AFox]

Damn

Well, that's probably the most coolest read I've gotten today. It's so...gah, there are literally no words to explain the excellence in this piece. Major respect and props to you for creative writing!

[SELF ACTIVATE]

Dope piece...I actually wrote something relatively similar to this topic. The wording was very crisp. The flow was steady. The idea was intriguing. And the imagery was spot on. skillfully written. Enjoyable from beginning to end.

[Nigma]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ned-to-the-sun
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...il-s-Testimony

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oops, these are the links for the one you asked for links for in @King Soul