[CHAMP MATCH]: Salamander (10-2) [vs] Alphabet (8-3) [Salamander WINS]

[Amen]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 15

Champ Match 16-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm EST
verses due THURSDAY 12:00 Midnight EST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.

@Salamander & @Alphabet


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[Salamander]

Round 3?

20 it is.

[Alphabet]

Check. I'll show if I can.. Net got cut off due to my landlord being a retard and he is outta town ATM. That's why I haven't been around btw

[Salamander]

Leather will fly w/ a left to level the side of his head.
One shot'll flip Alphabet backwards quicker than a successful sobriety test.
Whether it's a temple, an eye or the chest.. he ain't returning fire.
Almay be bringing some heat, but it's just their latest curling iron.
Faggot should retire, I'm 2 wins to zip w/ this funny choda.
If he thinks the third time's a charm, he's getting bit by the fucking cobra.
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.

you got any dirt/personals on orc?

got him in the NBL this wk and would love to get the dub, and i know you know your shit.

... I refuse to help a known flipper/recycler.

"B-b-b-but if I would've known". Bitch, you wouldn't go back dude.
Last week you used a Sweet 16 line, are you gonna sugarcoat that too?
I'm GONNA blow past you. Your shit is stupid & sitting through it hurts.
That's why I'm calling all your played references, then giving you the work.
King, Tettris, Neighbor...You can't handle the writers that Sally breaks.
The amount of greenhorns you battle could make any bicycle rally safe.
My W's are riveting & heavy, yours are the epitome of sketchy calls.
You win in such a Crooked Manner, you should consider me a wrecking ball.
This'll be contested? Naw. Your mess isn't testin' me.
Yeah, you got away w/ 1-2.. unfortunately the ref didn't get to 3.
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.

20 @Alphabet

[Alphabet]

allllllll riiiighhhttttyyyyy thennnnnnnnn...

ALL FACTS

every L u get u cry & bitch, that last robbery was on some tyrant shit
ANYONE who votes for u this time PROVES their a faggot who rides ur dick
i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
i got that veteran conditioning, the best w/ the fists cause b i'm fuckin dope
after one round u'll watch saltire..then me hang his corpse from one of those
u thinkin ur dope is laughable cause actual fact is ur an awful geek
oxymoron dropped this wk..
when u drop the voters feel like they od'd on oxy & want to fall asleep
trust this nerd is a nuisance, a herb who is stupid and a fuckin curse
i'll toss this pestacide & make him drink gallons of that til his stomach bursts
ur lifes spent on the net, it's lame & pathetic so dames pay no attention
u drop early & it rivals ur sex life..no wonder u girl wants to take my extension
i'm an alpha, bet that sal a beta. a fag whose plain, this lame can't hang
dimes i fuck know i'ma primate..every girl sal fucks looks like an orangutan
faggot we can trust ur the whackest, every verse i bust is a classic
& anyone saying saliva deserves to be drowned in a bucket of that shit
u got clowned off NC for biting & tried to comeback as rid don't lie it's a fact
in ur career u've bitstrips..ur the kind of fraudulent fag we'd find on that app
archives are what u need, you study text like it's the bible u fuckin geek
ur under the influence of vets, and evry verse resembles a drunken butler key

20.

[EDIT]: Pasted verse @Alphabet requested I edit in. Done - TM

[Alphabet]

@Salamander @Trademark

-Open For Votes & Good Luck Broseph

[Alphabet]

need that edit put in @Trademark

posted without proofing

[Packed Graves]

Leather will fly w/ a left to level the side of his head.
One shot'll flip Alphabet backwards quicker than a successful sobriety test.
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.
"B-b-b-but if I would've known". Bitch, you wouldn't go back dude.
Last week you used a Sweet 16 line, are you gonna sugarcoat that too?
King, Tettris, Neighbor...You can't handle the writers that Sally breaks.
The amount of greenhorns you battle could make any bicycle rally safe.
My W's are riveting & heavy, yours are the epitome of sketchy calls.
You win in such a Crooked Manner, you should consider me a wrecking ball.
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.

---Some nice lines I expected you to stay personal with him based on his history on here & over at NC.

vs


i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
trust this nerd is a nuisance, a herb who is stupid and a fuckin curse
i'll toss this pestacide & make him drink gallons of that til his stomach bursts
i'm an alpha, bet that sal a beta. a fag whose plain, this lame can't hang
dimes i fuck know i'ma primate..every girl sal fucks looks like an orangutan


--Lots of your lines stemmed from old concepts and wordplay, even one I quoted was just based off a fresher flip to it. I can tell you rushed this a lot, because you have came WAYYYYYYY better then this. for me to only quote 6 lines out of 20 was shocking for me, just wish you put in more effort.


Vote-Sal again.

[Capcom]

Decent Battle here but I gotta agree with Graves. Alph u came much harder the 1st time you battled him, but this time ya lines was lackin that sting bro. The Primate/Orangutan was dope so was the Drop early/extension bar...Bitstrips could've been worded better.
Sal's verse was his usual...Dude definitely thinks outside the box, but sometime it be too far, so I understand your passion of referrin him to a geek lol the Almay/Curling Iron bar..-__- prime example LoL But it hits tho if u go by Net/RB standards. Sweet 16 line was dope, green horn/bike rally, cemented/concepts, the personal with the quote...not sayin it was his best either but it was enough to get the job done. Better Luck next time Kid

V-Geico

[Lawd]

Opener, tips 2 beat orc, sweet 16, greenhorn, paved the way

Vs.

Primate

This was 1 sided as fuck hof naw especially off alpha verse most it was played 2 death concepts like, broken record, pesticides is played as fuck who haven't flipped that name play like damn onlt seen 1 thatz was iight ur last battle with sal was wwwwaaaayyyy better, u came shitty this go round, sal took this easil had wwwwaaaayyyy more quotes, more direct with the punches

V/sal

[KnowP]

Leather will fly w/ a left to level the side of his head.
One shot'll flip Alphabet backwards quicker than a successful sobriety test.
Whether it's a temple, an eye or the chest.. he ain't returning fire.
Almay be bringing some heat, but it's just their latest curling iron.
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.
-BURN!!!!
I'm GONNA blow past you. Your shit is stupid & sitting through it hurts.
That's why I'm calling all your played references, then giving you the work.
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.


vs

i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
trust this nerd is a nuisance, a herb who is stupid and a fuckin curse
i'll toss this pestacide & make him drink gallons of that til his stomach bursts
faggot we can trust ur the whackest, every verse i bust is a classic
& anyone saying saliva deserves to be drowned in a bucket of that shit
u got clowned off NC for biting & tried to comeback as rid don't lie it's a fact
in ur career u've bitstrips..ur the kind of fraudulent fag we'd find on that app



close battle. to me it all came down to execution. Alph had a few bars that woulda landed but wording got choppy and derailed the punchline. good shit from both though.


vote sal

[Packed Graves]

Alpha are you vm and pm'ing them to?

[Smog]

Re: [CHAMP MATCH]: Salamander (10-2) [vs] Alphabet (8-3)
Leather will fly w/ a left to level the side of his head.
One shot'll flip Alphabet backwards quicker than a successful sobriety test.
Lol, visualizing myself doing that in my teenage years

Whether it's a temple, an eye or the chest.. he ain't returning fire.
Almay be bringing some heat, but it's just their latest curling iron.
Ouch dope shit nice flow
Faggot should retire, I'm 2 wins to zip w/ this funny choda.
If he thinks the third time's a charm, he's getting bit by the fucking cobra.
Lol ok hit
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.
If fact that's dirty
Originally Posted by Alphabeti
you got any dirt/personals on orc?

got him in the NBL this wk and would love to get the dub, and i know you know your shit.
... I refuse to help a known flipper/recycler.

"B-b-b-but if I would've known". Bitch, you wouldn't go back dude.
Last week you used a Sweet 16 line, are you gonna sugarcoat that too?
Lol pretty nice
I'm GONNA blow past you. Your shit is stupid & sitting through it hurts.
That's why I'm calling all your played references, then giving you the work.
Damn nice shit
King, Tettris, Neighbor...You can't handle the writers that Sally breaks.
The amount of greenhorns you battle could make any bicycle rally safe.
Fuck ur on some shit

My W's are riveting & heavy, yours are the epitome of sketchy calls.
You win in such a Crooked Manner, you should consider me a wrecking ball.
Lol, pretty nice
This'll be contested? Naw. Your mess isn't testin' me.
Yeah, you got away w/ 1-2.. unfortunately the ref didn't get to 3.
Lol that's funny, well done
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.
Lol, damn


Vs....


every L u get u cry & bitch, that last robbery was on some tyrant shit
ANYONE who votes for u this time PROVES their a faggot who rides ur dick
I wouldn't agree but nicely worded
i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
Lol, that's dope
i got that veteran conditioning, the best w/ the fists cause b i'm fuckin dope
after one round u'll watch saltire..then me hang his corpse from one of those
Lol, nice
u thinkin ur dope is laughable cause actual fact is ur an awful geek
oxymoron dropped this wk..
when u drop the voters feel like they od'd on oxy & want to fall asleep
Lol, pretty nice
trust this nerd is a nuisance, a herb who is stupid and a fuckin curse
i'll toss this pestacide & make him drink gallons of that til his stomach bursts
That's nice
ur lifes spent on the net, it's lame & pathetic so dames pay no attention
u drop early & it rivals ur sex life..no wonder u girl wants to take my extension
Lol, that's funny, door hit
i'm an alpha, bet that sal a beta. a fag whose plain, this lame can't hang
dimes i fuck know i'ma primate..every girl sal fucks looks like an orangutan
Lol that's tight too
faggot we can trust ur the whackest, every verse i bust is a classic
& anyone saying saliva deserves to be drowned in a bucket of that shit
Ok hit,
u got clowned off NC for biting & tried to comeback as rid don't lie it's a fact
in ur career u've bitstrips..ur the kind of fraudulent fag we'd find on that app
Pretty nice
archives are what u need, you study text like it's the bible u fuckin geek
ur under the influence of vets, and evry verse resembles a drunken butler key
Pretty dope..

Pleasurable battle to read, I feel alpha came in an attack mode good punches good words IMO nice scheme, but on the other hand sals also a beast with his shit, tough for me to vote on these but do gotta say sals execution was a tad bit cleaner witch that's what this boiled down too... Punches were even though, good shit from both

Vote salamander

[Mimic]

Leather will fly w/ a left to level the side of his head.
One shot'll flip Alphabet backwards quicker than a successful sobriety test.
decent opener..
Whether it's a temple, an eye or the chest.. he ain't returning fire.
Almay be bringing some heat, but it's just their latest curling iron.
cool..
Faggot should retire, I'm 2 wins to zip w/ this funny choda.
If he thinks the third time's a charm, he's getting bit by the fucking cobra.
okay.. pretty clever..
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.
LOL. Nice.
... I refuse to help a known flipper/recycler.

"B-b-b-but if I would've known". Bitch, you wouldn't go back dude.
Last week you used a Sweet 16 line, are you gonna sugarcoat that too?
Nice personal.
I'm GONNA blow past you. Your shit is stupid & sitting through it hurts.
That's why I'm calling all your played references, then giving you the work.
ehh.. decent but didn't hit for me..
King, Tettris, Neighbor...You can't handle the writers that Sally breaks.
The amount of greenhorns you battle could make any bicycle rally safe.
okay..
My W's are riveting & heavy, yours are the epitome of sketchy calls.
You win in such a Crooked Manner, you should consider me a wrecking ball.
nah..
This'll be contested? Naw. Your mess isn't testin' me.
Yeah, you got away w/ 1-2.. unfortunately the ref didn't get to 3.
nah..
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.
nice closer..

Vs

every L u get u cry & bitch, that last robbery was on some tyrant shit
ANYONE who votes for u this time PROVES their a faggot who rides ur dick
okay..
i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
cool..
i got that veteran conditioning, the best w/ the fists cause b i'm fuckin dope
after one round u'll watch saltire..then me hang his corpse from one of those
wasn't feeling this...
u thinkin ur dope is laughable cause actual fact is ur an awful geek
oxymoron dropped this wk..
when u drop the voters feel like they od'd on oxy & want to fall asleep
nah..
trust this nerd is a nuisance, a herb who is stupid and a fuckin curse
i'll toss this pestacide & make him drink gallons of that til his stomach bursts
pesticide concepts are pretty played bro..
ur lifes spent on the net, it's lame & pathetic so dames pay no attention
u drop early & it rivals ur sex life..no wonder u girl wants to take my extension
eh..
i'm an alpha, bet that sal a beta. a fag whose plain, this lame can't hang
dimes i fuck know i'ma primate..every girl sal fucks looks like an orangutan
lol..
faggot we can trust ur the whackest, every verse i bust is a classic
& anyone saying saliva deserves to be drowned in a bucket of that shit
eh..
u got clowned off NC for biting & tried to comeback as rid don't lie it's a fact
in ur career u've bitstrips..ur the kind of fraudulent fag we'd find on that app
okay..
archives are what u need, you study text like it's the bible u fuckin geek
ur under the influence of vets, and evry verse resembles a drunken butler key
eh closer..

All though my vote SEEMS a little harsh I thought this was a nice battle.. Both had some good personals and witty concepts. I also felt like both had some misses. This was VERY close to me. Sal had the LOTB with his Orc personal which I thought was pretty slick.. I felt his verse came off weak but ended strong here. Alpha had some nice hits too and the orangutan line was funny shit but I felt he wasn't as consistent here.. both had good verses but MVGT Sal based off consistency..

V/Sal

[Letterman]

Whether it's a temple, an eye or the chest.. he ain't returning fire.
Almay be bringing some heat, but it's just their latest curling iron.
Faggot should retire, I'm 2 wins to zip w/ this funny choda.
If he thinks the third time's a charm, he's getting bit by the fucking cobra.
You claim I robbed a victory? That means SHIT to me, sport.
I dunno what's better...
The fact that I served you, or that a week later you wanted Tips to beat Orc.
I'm GONNA blow past you. Your shit is stupid & sitting through it hurts.
That's why I'm calling all your played references, then giving you the work.
You a pest sittin' next to me, calling you a veteran is nonsense.
Guys like Hens paved the way. Only thing you've cemented is his concepts.

Vs

i'm a giant kid - ur just a lyin snitch if u claim text isn't ur life u prick
u'd commit suicide if u broke ur record..i'll use a piece of it to slice ur wrists
i got that veteran conditioning, the best w/ the fists cause b i'm fuckin dope
after one round u'll watch saltire..then me hang his corpse from one of those
ur lifes spent on the net, it's lame & pathetic so dames pay no attention
u drop early & it rivals ur sex life..no wonder u girl wants to take my extension
u got clowned off NC for biting & tried to comeback as rid don't lie it's a fact
in ur career u've bitstrips..ur the kind of fraudulent fag we'd find on that app

This was a cool battle for a champ match. Lol surprised there were as many nameplays and personals considering that this is the 3rd time you've battled, not including 1-2. Sal had more standout bars imo. Alpha's primate and pesticide wps are both played. I didn't get get Sweet 16 line from Sal, I guess I missed something there. All in all, good battle but Sal gets the vote here.

v/Ridley