LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 11
Champ Match 16-20 lines
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@.Allen Knight. & @Alphabet
Last edited by Amen; January 27th, 2014 at 03:36 PM
Wattup, going 16
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
sounds good.
@Allen Knight
You have till Midnight EST tonight to post, bro.
@Alphabet
Same with you bro.
Aka hank mccoy aka biter aka gave u punches aka everyone in project rhyme dipped on
20
Any beef ur in u pussy out faggot, while I get brutal
wen it comes to fights Alfredo & his backbone's weaker than a wet noodle
Yea my aka is mag but im dope, ur trash n wont grab the belt
Cuz magazine all the top punches & ur not there like the min after u ask to help
al Been pimpin ur slut, I put down the mack every way
wen it comes to any chick that Betrayal, is fucking me behind his back everyday
Remember wen u pm'd me for bars, n don't act dumb u asshole
I gave ur bum ass a hand out & my spare change the whole out come of ur battle
Ur infamously known as a biter, this pussy got dumb crimes
w/ the rap sheet u have u stole more shit than all of the ocean movies combined
U robbed the shit Outta switch, 3-2 wow u suck slut
u beat ese' way even gang members Jumpin in homies would consider fucked up
Ur all about sucking dick faggot, there's no doubt in ur soul
Cuz betsey johnsons more than drunk bitches getting trained out in her clothes
Everyone in PM fucked ya moms, left after we gone & beat
On the weekend that bitch got more crew love than a drake song on repeat
u don't wanna fight the gawd, my fist'll leave u dead gone
& give H-2 hooks that'll make'em feel like he got hit by a hummer head on
Gotta beretta locked & loaded, pull the gun on u lethal
shots to the chest has Mccoys bullet holes running faster than the one on the egales
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
allen knight aka mag aka rides the nut sack of every vet to get attention
when i'm ready to shoot, it's through ur head to enter ya brain
scrawny junky..when ur ready to shoot it's some herion into ur veins
have ya'll seen this fag?! no wonder his world is dead
i kill at break neck speed, ur so frail u'd do that turning ur head
u use fake personals n forced worplay, u can't please the crowd
but i will when i drop mag faster then the one that's released from gow
ur weak as a feeble child.i'll fuck ya girl & no way u can harm me
i'll tear ur sluts pussy up so bad it'll resemble roast beef from arbys
i hang w/ mobsters that'll cut up ur body & beat ur head w/ bats
so if algae...i'll leave his corpse rotting in a swamp collecting that
ur creativity is shit, obviously this faggot needs to puff some dosia
cus everything u write is such a gay stretch u could teach couples yoga
ur always digging in the archives stealin vets lines, don't lie u dork
u've always bin a burden to text esepecially when biting lines from orc
n just recently u got ur face smashed in great fasion, don't lie cus dude
u wanting hushs's dick in ur mouth isn't the only time he's silenced you
ur constantly puffin off vets beggin for respect, its pathetec so stop it
albie shore ur a faggot....when singing killing me soflty stuck in the closet
it's sad how ur life is text, if he loses he'll get depressed cry and bitch
& have a nervous breakdown reading ones from voters who don't ride his dick
Dope battle. I shall return and vote. Everyone in the league MUST VOTE on this.
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Anyone else outside of the league is welcomed to vote as well. Appreciate the participation!
al Been pimpin ur slut, I put down the mack every way
wen it comes to any chick that Betrayal, is fucking me behind his back everyday
Ur infamously known as a biter, this pussy got dumb crimes
w/ the rap sheet u have u stole more shit than all of the ocean movies combined
Ur all about sucking dick faggot, there's no doubt in ur soul
Cuz betsey johnsons more than drunk bitches getting trained out in her clothes
Everyone in PM fucked ya moms, left after we gone & beat
On the weekend that bitch got more crew love than a drake song on repeat
Gotta beretta locked & loaded, pull the gun on u lethal
shots to the chest has Mccoys bullet holes running faster than the one on the egales
vs
have ya'll seen this fag?! no wonder his world is dead
i kill at break neck speed, ur so frail u'd do that turning ur head
ur weak as a feeble child.i'll fuck ya girl & no way u can harm me
i'll tear ur sluts pussy up so bad it'll resemble roast beef from arbys
i hang w/ mobsters that'll cut up ur body & beat ur head w/ bats
so if algae...i'll leave his corpse rotting in a swamp collecting that
ur creativity is shit, obviously this faggot needs to puff some dosia
cus everything u write is such a gay stretch u could teach couples yoga
ur always digging in the archives stealin vets lines, don't lie u dork
u've always bin a burden to text esepecially when biting lines from orc
it's sad how ur life is text, if he loses he'll get depressed cry and bitch
& have a nervous breakdown reading ones from voters who don't ride his dick
sick ass bars from both. dope cham champ match fellas. nothing really to critique. I just felt more bars from Alpha than AK who missed me with a few forced wp. alpha had a few too but I think he had one more nice flip.
v. alphabet
Any beef ur in u pussy out faggot, while I get brutal
wen it comes to fights Alfredo & his backbone's weaker than a wet noodle
Decent opener, nice nameplay1.5/2
Yea my aka is mag but im dope, ur trash n wont grab the belt
Cuz magazine all the top punches & ur not there like the min after u ask to help
lol nice personal1.5/2
al Been pimpin ur slut, I put down the mack every way
wen it comes to any chick that Betrayal, is fucking me behind his back everyday
At first I thought you meant al like alphabet, then I realized it was like allen, anyways, nameplay was decent, good punch1.5/2
Remember wen u pm'd me for bars, n don't act dumb u asshole
I gave ur bum ass a hand out & my spare change the whole out come of ur battle
hmm, if this is true then Alphabet should be very ashamed. start calling him moody cai. Anways, assuming this is true, decent punch and personal1.5/2
Ur infamously known as a biter, this pussy got dumb crimes
w/ the rap sheet u have u stole more shit than all of the ocean movies combined
decent1.5/2
U robbed the shit Outta switch, 3-2 wow u suck slut
u beat ese' way even gang members Jumpin in homies would consider fucked up
cool wordplay, the S for switch is alittle forced, but still decent1/2
Ur all about sucking dick faggot, there's no doubt in ur soul
Cuz betsey johnsons more than drunk bitches getting trained out in her clothes
lol nice nameplay2/2
Everyone in PM fucked ya moms, left after we gone & beat
On the weekend that bitch got more crew love than a drake song on repeat
lol drake is redundant as fuck. decent punch1/2
u don't wanna fight the gawd, my fist'll leave u dead gone
& give H-2 hooks that'll make'em feel like he got hit by a hummer head on
not bad, nameplay a little bit forced but still decent1/2
Gotta beretta locked & loaded, pull the gun on u lethal
shots to the chest has Mccoys bullet holes running faster than the one on the egales
not bad, mostly flexing though1/2
Allen you get a 13.5/20\
when i'm ready to shoot, it's through ur head to enter ya brain
scrawny junky..when ur ready to shoot it's some herion into ur veins
concept was meh imo, not bad though1/2
have ya'll seen this fag?! no wonder his world is dead
i kill at break neck speed, ur so frail u'd do that turning ur head
lol, this actually made me laugh, nice punch2/2
u use fake personals n forced worplay, u can't please the crowd
but i will when i drop mag faster then the one that's released from gow
well dropping a mag faster than gow isn't much of a diss.. haha jk but seriously not bad at all1.5/2
ur weak as a feeble child.i'll fuck ya girl & no way u can harm me
i'll tear ur sluts pussy up so bad it'll resemble roast beef from arbys
mostly shit talkin, but its iight1/2
i hang w/ mobsters that'll cut up ur body & beat ur head w/ bats
so if algae...i'll leave his corpse rotting in a swamp collecting that
i find it hard to believe you hang with mobsters, nameplay was iight but concept was mehh1/2
ur creativity is shit, obviously this faggot needs to puff some dosia
cus everything u write is such a gay stretch u could teach couples yoga
ehh the dosia line was a weak set up imo, punch was alright though1.5/2
ur always digging in the archives stealin vets lines, don't lie u dork
u've always bin a burden to text esepecially when biting lines from orc
not much substance here, concept was meh, but a punch nonetheless1/2
n just recently u got ur face smashed in great fasion, don't lie cus dude
u wanting hushs's dick in ur mouth isn't the only time he's silenced you
Decent personal1.5/2
ur constantly puffin off vets beggin for respect, its pathetec so stop it
albie shore ur a faggot....when singing killing me soflty stuck in the closet
ohh decent name play/personal, your spelling is horrendous tho lol1.5/2
it's sad how ur life is text, if he loses he'll get depressed cry and bitch
& have a nervous breakdown reading ones from voters who don't ride his dick
damnn thats fire, set up was nice, and boom glass jawed him here with this punch2/2
Alpha you get a 14/20
This battle was close as fuck. I got alphabet coming a little bit harder with a couple of his punches. That nervous breakdown line was fire.. 1 extra walloping punch is the deciding factor here for me. Good battle
v/Alphabet
Ur infamously known as a biter, this pussy got dumb crimes
w/ the rap sheet u have u stole more shit than all of the ocean movies combined
Ur all about sucking dick faggot, there's no doubt in ur soul
Cuz betsey johnsons more than drunk bitches getting trained out in her clothes
Everyone in PM fucked ya moms, left after we gone & beat
On the weekend that bitch got more crew love than a drake song on repeat
Gotta beretta locked & loaded, pull the gun on u lethal
shots to the chest has Mccoys bullet holes running faster than the one on the egales
vs
have ya'll seen this fag?! no wonder his world is dead
i kill at break neck speed, ur so frail u'd do that turning ur head
i hang w/ mobsters that'll cut up ur body & beat ur head w/ bats
so if algae...i'll leave his corpse rotting in a swamp collecting that
ur always digging in the archives stealin vets lines, don't lie u dork
u've always bin a burden to text esepecially when biting lines from orc
n just recently u got ur face smashed in great fasion, don't lie cus dude
u wanting hushs's dick in ur mouth isn't the only time he's silenced you
ur constantly puffin off vets beggin for respect, its pathetec so stop it
albie shore ur a faggot....when singing killing me soflty stuck in the closet
it's sad how ur life is text, if he loses he'll get depressed cry and bitch
& have a nervous breakdown reading ones from voters who don't ride his dick
v/alphabet
cool match ..i think he came alot more consistent. allens first couple bars were meh, then he picked it up n started bringing some hits..alpha didnt have any 'fire' lines but he was throwing some solid hits n they were landing
v/BOTW easily. Nice read, fellas. Now on to the Breakdown.
Any beef ur in u pussy out faggot, while I get brutal
wen it comes to fights Alfredo & his backbone's weaker than a wet noodle
Seemed forced to me. Concept in my opinion was weak as well, tho.
Yea my aka is mag but im dope, ur trash n wont grab the belt
Cuz magazine all the top punches & ur not there like the min after u ask to help
I think you could have worked with this a little. Still ok'ish personal, tho.
al Been pimpin ur slut, I put down the mack every way
wen it comes to any chick that Betrayal, is fucking me behind his back everyday
Eh, this was kind of IFFY, IMO. Betray Al, I get it. But not really feeling the bar, IMO.
Remember wen u pm'd me for bars, n don't act dumb u asshole
I gave ur bum ass a hand out & my spare change the whole out come of ur battle
Ok'ish if in fact a true personal.
Ur infamously known as a biter, this pussy got dumb crimes
w/ the rap sheet u have u stole more shit than all of the ocean movies combined
Nah - Think you could have expanded on this. I think you could have used the rap-sheet concept and flipped it differently to land more of an impact.
U robbed the shit Outta switch, 3-2 wow u suck slut
u beat ese' way even gang members Jumpin in homies would consider fucked up
Ok'ish.
Ur all about sucking dick faggot, there's no doubt in ur soul
Cuz betsey johnsons more than drunk bitches getting trained out in her clothes
Eh, cool concept. Weird execution, IMO.
Everyone in PM fucked ya moms, left after we gone & beat
On the weekend that bitch got more crew love than a drake song on repeat
Nah.
u don't wanna fight the gawd, my fist'll leave u dead gone
& give H-2 hooks that'll make'em feel like he got hit by a hummer head on
Ok'ish.
Gotta beretta locked & loaded, pull the gun on u lethal
shots to the chest has Mccoys bullet holes running faster than the one on the egales
Concept there but IMO, lazy execution. Could have been worked with to land nicely.
[vs]
when i'm ready to shoot, it's through ur head to enter ya brain
scrawny junky..when ur ready to shoot it's some herion into ur veins
Seen these concepts before, decent flip tho.
have ya'll seen this fag?! no wonder his world is dead
i kill at break neck speed, ur so frail u'd do that turning ur head
Lol, provided a visual. Nice execution.
u use fake personals n forced worplay, u can't please the crowd
but i will when i drop mag faster then the one that's released from gow
Lol, cool personal.
ur weak as a feeble child.i'll fuck ya girl & no way u can harm me
i'll tear ur sluts pussy up so bad it'll resemble roast beef from arbys
Seen the Arby concept used a few times, decent flip.
i hang w/ mobsters that'll cut up ur body & beat ur head w/ bats
so if algae...i'll leave his corpse rotting in a swamp collecting that
Eh, ok'ish concept, good execution tho.
ur creativity is shit, obviously this faggot needs to puff some dosia
cus everything u write is such a gay stretch u could teach couples yoga
Nah - Seen the "Stretch" concepts a lot, in fact just read one in FL from SKully Hendrix, I believe. I think you could have flipped/executed it differently tho. Added some kind of humor/harshness.
ur always digging in the archives stealin vets lines, don't lie u dork
u've always bin a burden to text esepecially when biting lines from orc
If true, cool personal.
n just recently u got ur face smashed in great fasion, don't lie cus dude
u wanting hushs's dick in ur mouth isn't the only time he's silenced you
Lol, direct shot. Nice personal.
ur constantly puffin off vets beggin for respect, its pathetec so stop it
albie shore ur a faggot....when singing killing me soflty stuck in the closet
Nah - Seemed forced, IMO. Could have executed differently. Don't think Al B Sure even sang that song? Lol. Maybe, I'm wrong.
it's sad how ur life is text, if he loses he'll get depressed cry and bitch
& have a nervous breakdown reading ones from voters who don't ride his dick
Lol, cool personal.
Overall - Nice battle, dudes. I think Alpha takes this, IMO. Overall - His concepts were just a little more effected and he executed them well. AK struggled to execute some of his concepts. Some forced but all in all, for the most part, his executions weren't as clean as Alphas. Some of his bars lacked harshness as well. Came off a little statement'ish where it left me thinking, "Thats it?." I think it was how you executed the concepts you had going. Set ups were decent, but executions were iffy at times. Overall, nice battle but IMO, I got Alpha here.
BOTW
v/Alpha
U can close it an give it to alp no motivation to write for this site.
an that betrayal bar suppose to be bet-rail so u didn't get it
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Still forced. And I did get it Bet-Rail doesn't sound anything like Be-TRAY-YALL. So I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt w/ Betray-Al. No need to close tho, I will let the voting finish, bro. Calm down, smh.Originally Posted by .Allen Knight.
suht it and sign him out
tired of hearing that no motivation for this site shit from alot of these cats
this the only site really doing shit right now and will continue to do so
AK
Alfredo is forced, Magazine is kind of forced but it kind've works, decent hit, Bet rail is forced, spare change is dope, rap sheet missed, I hate one letter initial nameflips so ese' missed, Betsey Johnsons was dope, weekend is played, H2 missed, closer seemed like filler.
Alph
Shoot heroin opener is played, break neck speed is cool, mag played, Arby's missed, Al G was decent, stretch is played, Burden missed/too simple, same with Hush's dick, kind of corny TBR, Albie Shore was dope, breakdown is played.
Honestly this was disappointing IMO. I didn't see a good battle. I pulled 3 hitters (out of 10) from both of you, which is very inconsistent. No hate, I normally enjoy your stuff. Y'all already know that, just like I know you're both more than capable of dropping more consistent, less played and less forced.
After comparing the 3 from each, I GTG with AK. His hit a little harder IMO. Spare change and Betsey Johnsons in particular. Close, but again.. disappointing.
V. Allen Knight
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