LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 10
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Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
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Last edited by miracle; January 22nd, 2014 at 12:13 PM
Gotta drop in the am, I keyed a verse on nc an save it but nc is down right now
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Miracle aka fgr aka played concept faggot
Smashin ur ol girl all over the crib, freak loves to get merked
Fuck FX on so many open windows, she could have a time slot on a tv network
Saw ur pic LOL u enormous pig, hos wouldn't bang this soft bitch
have sucha beer gut, niggas waiting in line wit red cups & to do keg stands off it
U roll w/ a bunch of faggots, that rather get there ass pound n groped
Cuz wen it comes to dick Culminate the most they could fit down there throats
Got twin auto-mattics loaded, aiming at ur head n lung son
& give F-22 shots till his tops ripped open like emergency ejecting from one
ur concepts played as fuck, w/ that shit i doubt ur lethal
sucha bum ass style u pick up & reuse shit thats already been worn out by people
U force urself on girls n they fight u off, must reflect ur home life
Tried to get in there circle & got more elbows to the bone than a jon jones fight
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
My fist stronger than steel, im fucking stoompin this fag out
Uppercut till I leave Colston more than a helmet to helmet hit runnin a bad route
Ur wifey has an obsession for old dudes, they smash n whore the bitch
pussy filled w/ so many prehistoric bones indiana jones fucked her to get a tour of it
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Miracles VERSE
top 3 best on rb?
.
ALLEN KNIGHT! ALLEN KNIGHT! ALLEN KNIGHT! lol j/k..that makes a shitty list
his sigs fucked,
he didn't mean 'on' he ment 'from' along w/ his PUNCHES/FLOW n WITTYNESS
allen can't get a legends aproval..even newbies think ur the worse
if someone hears his rhymes and nods, they feel asleep during ur verse
you said something here people can relate to.. ^this causes me to gloatOriginally Posted by .Allen Knight.
cuz when allen promises fresh lines, every1 reading ur verse is thinking this quote
the text game is not that easy. having to be creative w/ every hit..
and if there's room for error, allen must have a 10 car garage full of it
your bars are stretched like yoga.. there's always something wrong
they say all good thing come to a end..
.........................no wonder why ur sentences keep runnin on
i can see your shook against me. palms sweating, can't catch ur breath hardly..
BITCH FAGGOT is written all over your face like passing out at a party
punch after punch will bash you.. my skills are universal
fist will connect with your face so well,
..............match.com will advertise it in a commerical
in school i was a bully.. catch you in the halls, then your done!
the type to beat your ass halfway home, then fuck your mom thats living in one
when al was little his daddy split. it was hard for him to act fine..
but that seperation was nothing compared to what im doing to ur neck n spine
Smashin ur ol girl all over the crib, freak loves to get merked
Fuck FX on so many open windows, she could have a time slot on a tv network
Got twin auto-mattics loaded, aiming at ur head n lung son
& give F-22 shots till his tops ripped open like emergency ejecting from one
ur concepts played as fuck, w/ that shit i doubt ur lethal
sucha bum ass style u pick up & reuse shit thats already been worn out by people
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
vs
allen can't get a legends aproval..even newbies think ur the worse
if someone hears his rhymes and nods, they feel asleep during ur verse
in school i was a bully.. catch you in the halls, then your done!
the type to beat your ass halfway home, then fuck your mom thats living in one
cool battle, I def seen better n more consistency by both in the past, Al still did his thing tho. some cool quotes, from both but my problem wit Miracle was most of his lines were extremely played. room for error, good things must come to an end, connect, separation, I seen most of those concepts done to death tbh, too cliche, props to both but I got AK
v/AK
Smashin ur ol girl all over the crib, freak loves to get merked
Fuck FX on so many open windows, she could have a time slot on a tv network
Saw ur pic LOL u enormous pig, hos wouldn't bang this soft bitch
have sucha beer gut, niggas waiting in line wit red cups & to do keg stands off it
U roll w/ a bunch of faggots, that rather get there ass pound n groped
Cuz wen it comes to dick Culminate the most they could fit down there throats
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
My fist stronger than steel, im fucking stoompin this fag out
Uppercut till I leave Colston more than a helmet to helmet hit runnin a bad route
vs
can see your shook against me. palms sweating, can't catch ur breath hardly..
BITCH FAGGOT is written all over your face like passing out at a party
punch after punch will bash you.. my skills are universal
fist will connect with your face so well,
..............match.com will advertise it in a commerical
Good battle overall i got AK taking it no shame either miracle you came well but i have to agree with Barcotic I have seen some of those concepts before your wording to them was refreshing but in a match such as this even fresh wording to a played concept can lead to an L...AK had some good nameplay even though sometimes it seemed a bit of a reach still worked out in the long run either way good battle and worth the read good job keeping my interest
mvgt AK
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DEAD^^^
Opener, f-22, 9 planets, colson
Vs.
Halfway house, nod
Iight battle was expecting more, seen better from ak but he cam his usual consistent opener had me rollin lol, but expected more from mir most of his verse were extremely played shit
V/ak
Obviously I ain't been on this site long so played concepts ain't been seen much yet from me,
Smashin ur ol girl all over the crib, freak loves to get merked
Fuck FX on so many open windows, she could have a time slot on a tv network
Lacking something here
Saw ur pic LOL u enormous pig, hos wouldn't bang this soft bitch
have sucha beer gut, niggas waiting in line wit red cups & to do keg stands off it
Lol, funny but not that great
U roll w/ a bunch of faggots, that rather get there ass pound n groped
Cuz wen it comes to dick Culminate the most they could fit down there throats
Ok hit
Got twin auto-mattics loaded, aiming at ur head n lung son
& give F-22 shots till his tops ripped open like emergency ejecting from one
Don't like the wording
ur concepts played as fuck, w/ that shit i doubt ur lethal
sucha bum ass style u pick up & reuse shit thats already been worn out by people
Lol nice punch
U force urself on girls n they fight u off, must reflect ur home life
Tried to get in there circle & got more elbows to the bone than a jon jones fight
Lol pretty good hit
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
Lol good punch not great wording
My fist stronger than steel, im fucking stoompin this fag out
Uppercut till I leave Colston more than a helmet to helmet hit runnin a bad route
Lol ok hit
Ur wifey has an obsession for old dudes, they smash n whore the bitch
pussy filled w/ so many prehistoric bones indiana jones fucked her to get a tour of it
Lol pretty nice
Vs....
allen can't get a legends aproval..even newbies think ur the worse
if someone hears his rhymes and nods, they feel asleep during ur verse
Ok hit
Quote:
Originally Posted by .Allen Knight.
Is it happening now? Or next week?
you said something here people can relate to.. ^this causes me to gloat
cuz when allen promises fresh lines, every1 reading ur verse is thinking this quote
Uh ok I guess
the text game is not that easy. having to be creative w/ every hit..
and if there's room for error, allen must have a 10 car garage full of it
Lol pretty good
your bars are stretched like yoga.. there's always something wrong
they say all good thing come to a end..
.........................no wonder why ur sentences keep runnin on
Good punch
i can see your shook against me. palms sweating, can't catch ur breath hardly..
BITCH FAGGOT is written all over your face like passing out at a party
Ok, lol
punch after punch will bash you.. my skills are universal
fist will connect with your face so well,
..............match.com will advertise it in a commerical
Um not to good
in school i was a bully.. catch you in the halls, then your done!
the type to beat your ass halfway home, then fuck your mom thats living in one
Lol pretty good
when al was little his daddy split. it was hard for him to act fine..
but that seperation was nothing compared to what im doing to ur neck n spine,
Ok,
This a pretty good battle IMO, obviously I'm not the greatest text battle rapper yet, lol but I felt miracles verse was off by a punch or so, Allen's had flaws too but had a couple that were better than miracles best, I gotta role wit Allen on this, good battle y'all
Vote allen
Saw ur pic LOL u enormous pig, hos wouldn't bang this soft bitch
have sucha beer gut, niggas waiting in line wit red cups & to do keg stands off it
Got twin auto-mattics loaded, aiming at ur head n lung son
& give F-22 shots till his tops ripped open like emergency ejecting from one
ur concepts played as fuck, w/ that shit i doubt ur lethal
sucha bum ass style u pick up & reuse shit thats already been worn out by people
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
vs
allen can't get a legends aproval..even newbies think ur the worse
if someone hears his rhymes and nods, they feel asleep during ur verse
i can see your shook against me. palms sweating, can't catch ur breath hardly..
BITCH FAGGOT is written all over your face like passing out at a party
This was a battle of fresh vs played. still an alright battle overall, but allen just came with more witty and fresh concepts. miracle, your opener could have had a better set up and structure and goes for some of your other lines too. lines referring to room for error and good things coming to an end are quite played out and is not the standard you should be bringing to a champ match but good attempt in general but just think outside the box a little more.
v/allen
AK
Smashin ur ol girl all over the crib, freak loves to get merked
Fuck FX on so many open windows, she could have a time slot on a tv network
lol nice wordplay flip here
Saw ur pic LOL u enormous pig, hos wouldn't bang this soft bitch
have sucha beer gut, niggas waiting in line wit red cups & to do keg stands off it
funny but could've polished the wording better
U roll w/ a bunch of faggots, that rather get there ass pound n groped
Cuz wen it comes to dick Culminate the most they could fit down there throats
ok good wordplay again
Got twin auto-mattics loaded, aiming at ur head n lung son
& give F-22 shots till his tops ripped open like emergency ejecting from one
cool direct hit
ur concepts played as fuck, w/ that shit i doubt ur lethal
sucha bum ass style u pick up & reuse shit thats already been worn out by people
lol nice flip
U force urself on girls n they fight u off, must reflect ur home life
Tried to get in there circle & got more elbows to the bone than a jon jones fight
lol nice hit good metaphore
Sharp straight up beat u, pm'img for votes a wack mockery
Losing no way 9 planets jus all of'em musta been aligned for u to win that robbery
ok personal but affected wording
My fist stronger than steel, im fucking stoompin this fag out
Uppercut till I leave Colston more than a helmet to helmet hit runnin a bad route
ok
Ur wifey has an obsession for old dudes, they smash n whore the bitch
pussy filled w/ so many prehistoric bones indiana jones fucked her to get a tour of it
lmao
miracle
ALLEN KNIGHT! ALLEN KNIGHT! ALLEN KNIGHT! lol j/k..that makes a shitty list
his sigs fucked,
he didn't mean 'on' he ment 'from' along w/ his PUNCHES/FLOW n WITTYNESS
nah wording could've been better
allen can't get a legends aproval..even newbies think ur the worse
if someone hears his rhymes and nods, they feel asleep during ur verse
played flip
Quote:
Originally Posted by .Allen Knight. View Post
Is it happening now? Or next week?
you said something here people can relate to.. ^this causes me to gloat
cuz when allen promises fresh lines, every1 reading ur verse is thinking this quote
nah on the personal
the text game is not that easy. having to be creative w/ every hit..
and if there's room for error, allen must have a 10 car garage full of it
lol nice flip
your bars are stretched like yoga.. there's always something wrong
they say all good thing come to a end..
.........................no wonder why ur sentences keep runnin on
played
i can see your shook against me. palms sweating, can't catch ur breath
hardly..
BITCH FAGGOT is written all over your face like passing out at a party
ok lol
punch after punch will bash you.. my skills are universal
fist will connect with your face so well,
..............match.com will advertise it in a commercial
ok lol
in school i was a bully.. catch you in the halls, then your done!
the type to beat your ass halfway home, then fuck your mom thats living in one
ok good flip
when al was little his daddy split. it was hard for him to act fine..
but that seperation was nothing compared to what im doing to ur neck n spine
nah played
Felt miracle had a lot of played content had like 3 quotes that were cool though but he rushed his verse. Allen Knight good wordplay nameplay flips overall creativity.
v/allen knight
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Damn looks like you dropped the ball on this one Mir. Used to seein way more dope shit from ya, Allen verse was pretty good but he did have some long bars tho, a lil forced wordplay, but like Barcotic said Mir came wit some old concepts that cost em.
V-AK
Opener..F22, 9 planets..
Vs
Halfway house..Nod
Liked these from both yall the best imo..Overall i like Ak got this because more consistent i thought and better punches in this battle, Miracle thought some of yours was played a little, i know you could have came harder..but overall ak with the better punches i thought..
v/Allen Knight
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