FL HW CHAMPIONSHIP!
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FL HW CHAMPIONSHIP!
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Check In's due Wednesday @ 11:59 PST
Verses due Friday @ 11:59 PST
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Last edited by A.T.; August 29th, 2011 at 06:42 AM
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Last edited by King; September 8th, 2011 at 06:14 PM
The Last Level
yeah
Just went 12 dude. gl
If we go by accomplishments its clear that this kid is crushed
He's got three medals...n thats only cuz someone forgot to take off the 50+
Dudes dumb n lame, fat redneck faggots are all the fucking same
You need to take your pic down, like ya girl does before we run a train
Your mediocre at best, all the elites would fucking crush you
Mir wrote the book on staying mid tier...n the wording in that sucked too
He cant even compare, look at the numbers. this faggots rattled
Ya record says a lot, like how I have 8 more Champ wins in half the battles
I named him emcee of the week n this fag thought he had scored
He took it as a compliment to him, but tbh its more of an insult to the board
You look like a mall Santa in the off season you broke slob
I saw 'Miracle On 34th Street'...in a dress charging fags $5 per blowjob
next
The Last Level
something is wrong w/ kings brain..cuz against me he'll have nothing to gain
thinking you'll win is like charles manson jerking off, your just seeming insane
no one thinks this kid stands a chance.. n i can garentee you'll lose bitch
cuz against me......i'll blow u out the water like hookers on a cruise ship
this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning
dudes concept's never work. he plays tough but is small at heart
n his gameplan is like old people decaying... meaning i've seniors, fall apart
yah whack dude. his name makes no sense seeing how he brings nothing xtra
fact is you couldnt be the king on this board double stacking checkers
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
King
1. Bleh
2.ehh ok
3.ehh ok
4.Ehh
5.unoriginal
6.would have been a dope bar if the set up was better. Ok
Mediocre verse tbh.
Not great or special stood out.
1kinda forced. Ehh ok
2u kinda said u would suk his dick lol also forced but it was ight
3could hAve bgeen better but it was ok
4It was ok still forcing
5Ok at best
6Ehh
Mir u had some nice concepts some unoriginal some ok
Although forced most of them u had a better verse
More entertaining polished n creative
Step yo dick up.
King
If we go by accomplishments its clear that this kid is crushed
He's got three medals...n thats only cuz someone forgot to take off the 50+
good attempt at personal could have hit harder
Dudes dumb n lame, fat redneck faggots are all the fucking same
You need to take your pic down, like ya girl does before we run a train
wasnt feeling the finisher no hate
Your mediocre at best, all the elites would fucking crush you
Mir wrote the book on staying mid tier...n the wording in that sucked too
nice flip with nameplay reference
He cant even compare, look at the numbers. this faggots rattled
Ya record says a lot, like how I have 8 more Champ wins in half the battles
ok punch
I named him emcee of the week n this fag thought he had scored
He took it as a compliment to him, but tbh its more of an insult to the board
not feeling finisger again nice attempt at personal though
You look like a mall Santa in the off season you broke slob
I saw 'Miracle On 34th Street'...in a dress charging fags $5 per blowjob
lmao
Miracle
something is wrong w/ kings brain..cuz against me he'll have nothing to gain
thinking you'll win is like charles manson jerking off, your just seeming insane
not feeling finisher
no one thinks this kid stands a chance.. n i can garentee you'll lose bitch
cuz against me......i'll blow u out the water like hookers on a cruise ship
lol nice metaphore concept
this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning
nice wordplay
dudes concept's never work. he plays tough but is small at heart
n his gameplan is like old people decaying... meaning i've seniors, fall apart
again nice wordplay
yah whack dude. his name makes no sense seeing how he brings nothing xtra
fact is you couldnt be the king on this board double stacking checkers
ok nice nameplay reference
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
nah
V/Miracle
Reason: Miracle had a better choice of concepts along with creativity such as wordplay and metaphores that just hit better. King had an ok attempt at the personals but just too many misses in some parts.
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Dudes dumb n lame, fat redneck faggots are all the fucking same
You need to take your pic down, like ya girl does before we run a train
I named him emcee of the week n this fag thought he had scored
He took it as a compliment to him, but tbh its more of an insult to the board
You look like a mall Santa in the off season you broke slob
I saw 'Miracle On 34th Street'...in a dress charging fags $5 per blowjob
Vs.
this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
^these were cool
Decent battle, but I think King edged it with one more quotable and harder hits.
^ this was cool
If only you knew...
Dudes dumb n lame, fat redneck faggots are all the fucking same
You need to take your pic down, like ya girl does before we run a train
I named him emcee of the week n this fag thought he had scored
He took it as a compliment to him, but tbh its more of an insult to the board
You look like a mall Santa in the off season you broke slob
I saw 'Miracle On 34th Street'...in a dress charging fags $5 per blowjob
Vs.
this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
^these were cool
Decent battle, but I think King edged it with one more quotable and harder hits.
^ this was cool
If only you knew...
Alright,
King I see where you're going w the 50+ line it just didn't work for me, I mean its ok jus nothin special. Pic down line was humorous but not much sting, still liked it tho.....book on mid tier was nice, half the battles n insult to the league were nice aswell. Didn't like the close, too corny. Mir sorry if ily feels like I'm bein harsh on ur verse here but after reading it felt like u rushed it. Tbh, champ pain almost hit but that's not even how u pronounce it and that made it forced. Other then that I really thought all the lines were mediocre.
V king
Alright,
King I see where you're going w the 50+ line it just didn't work for me, I mean its ok jus nothin special. Pic down line was humorous but not much sting, still liked it tho.....book on mid tier was nice, half the battles n insult to the league were nice aswell. Didn't like the close, too corny. Mir sorry if ily feels like I'm bein harsh on ur verse here but after reading it felt like u rushed it. Tbh, champ pain almost hit but that's not even how u pronounce it and that made it forced. Other then that I really thought all the lines were mediocre.
V king
I actually noticed this earlier, decent personal.. ok punchOriginally Posted by King
Set up was good, punch was actually a let down
Yes it did...
Eh...
Would have been better without "to him"
Not something I want to imagine.
No...
Eh...
[quote=Miracle]this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning[/qutoe]
Decent concept, not feeling the follow up
No...
No...
Set up was worded weird, made the punch less affective
Overall, I was a bit disappointed. I've seen better from King and this is by far not even close to his best. Miracle's verse seemed a bit boring to me while King had a few personals and decent punches.
Vote - King
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If we go by accomplishments its clear that this kid is crushed
He's got three medals...n thats only cuz someone forgot to take off the 50+
Your mediocre at best, all the elites would fucking crush you
Mir wrote the book on staying mid tier...n the wording in that sucked too
vs
no one thinks this kid stands a chance.. n i can garentee you'll lose bitch
cuz against me......i'll blow u out the water like hookers on a cruise ship
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
This was a fairly decent battle but I've seen both dudes drop a lot better stuff than this. I thought both had a lot of misses but I found King's to miss less overall.
v/ King
If we go by accomplishments its clear that this kid is crushed
He's got three medals...n thats only cuz someone forgot to take off the 50+
lol not bad
Dudes dumb n lame, fat redneck faggots are all the fucking same
You need to take your pic down, like ya girl does before we run a train
dece
Your mediocre at best, all the elites would fucking crush you
Mir wrote the book on staying mid tier...n the wording in that sucked too
okay punch
He cant even compare, look at the numbers. this faggots rattled
Ya record says a lot, like how I have 8 more Champ wins in half the battles
good hit
I named him emcee of the week n this fag thought he had scored
He took it as a compliment to him, but tbh its more of an insult to the board
ehh
You look like a mall Santa in the off season you broke slob
I saw 'Miracle On 34th Street'...in a dress charging fags $5 per blowjob
very disturbing
vs.
something is wrong w/ kings brain..cuz against me he'll have nothing to gain
thinking you'll win is like charles manson jerking off, your just seeming insane
okay opener
no one thinks this kid stands a chance.. n i can garentee you'll lose bitch
cuz against me......i'll blow u out the water like hookers on a cruise ship
ehh
this belt is mine...mainly because my visicous punches leave you spinning
when my hits provide the champ pain...then raise a glass to me winning
not bad
dudes concept's never work. he plays tough but is small at heart
n his gameplan is like old people decaying... meaning i've seniors, fall apart
not feelin this to be honest, no hate man.
yah whack dude. his name makes no sense seeing how he brings nothing xtra
fact is you couldnt be the king on this board double stacking checkers
okay nameplay
mir will beat him untill he cant move..i'll make it so u cant fight others
leaving him so black n blue..even his names fading into the sites color
ehh closer
v - king. for having a better consistent piece. no hate.
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