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On a previous look dude has no Tec-nique wit his Rhyne Schemes/
couldnt get shit started if injested tons of mexican fry beans/
-previous battles-
On a previous look dude has no Tec-nique wit his Rhyne Schemes/
couldnt get shit started if injested tons of mexican fry beans/
-previous battles-
Quit your vote bitchin, grandma win some lose some stop it/
Battles texted out wit Nintendo Ds still wouldnt have game in your pocket/
On some `personal hype` Im not scared of Human Horror movie/
Nonsence wit `fictional type` laugh at your B-Rated shit it doesnt move me/
Goin green for enviroment right after this clash/
Its Saturday tho I gots swifter CU next tuesday trash/
Swifer mop will have troubles even equip`d wit sails catch my drift/
Im outta here like someone broke wind did you catch a wift/
iRhyme could change his name to Nile and he still wouldn't have flow
I heard he gets a lotta head, but that’s only 'cause his rhymes blow
That wack style, those played-out punches, please abort 'em hoe
Your rhymes could run Pillsbury and still wouldn't be makin' doe
While writtin' this verse, I filled all these blank spaces unintentionally
So I'm murderin' you accidentally, a lot like the death scene of Brandon Lee
You got shitted on by Jeffry, and now you wanna come and test me?
No pun intended, but in a few ticks, best believe I'mma make this pest flea
I'm skippin' over A, B, C, D, and DD, goin' straight to E's/ease
'Cause my style's like big titties, the way iRhyme won't be coverin' my steeze
Fresh Hallows, joeboston, and tyga woodz, don't vote on this battle. Nobody wants your wack opinions.
On a previous look dude has no Tec-nique wit his Rhyne Schemes/
couldnt get shit started if injested tons of mexican fry beans/
Quit your vote bitchin, grandma win some lose some stop it/
Battles texted out wit Nintendo Ds still wouldnt have game in your pocket/
vs.
That wack style, those played-out punches, please abort 'em hoe
Your rhymes could run Pillsbury and still wouldn't be makin' doe
While writtin' this verse, I filled all these blank spaces unintentionally
So I'm murderin' you accidentally, a lot like the death scene of Brandon Lee
You got shitted on by Jeffry, and now you wanna come and test me?
No pun intended, but in a few ticks, best believe I'mma make this pest flea
iRhyme, you got potential and you couldve came better. Elevate my man, throw harder punches next time. You have good references but the setups don't connect with your punches. Elevate my man. Swift came harder in this one, had better overall punches too. Both gotta elevate, good battle here.
v - swift.
appreciate if u bring it to me. a vote is a vote man some u win some u lose
flow - iRhyme
punches - Swifty
nameplay/wordplay - N/A
creativity - Swifty (none really but between both, shifty attempted some complexity)
complexity - Swifty (for same reason^)
vote - Shifty
rhyme had the better polished flow no doubt, was easier to read. only thing was u didnt have punches on the flip side of it, which obviously hurts alot if ur not swingin at all. swifty didnt have a good drop overall but it was stronger in this case..no hate to either but u still got elevatin to do. swifty, i dont see the improvement yet, but u'll get there hopefully when u rack up more battles under your belt. anyways..it was an easy choice in my eyes. g'luck to both in the near future.
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Uppin'.
Well can i fucking vote on this one so at least we get some activity in this motherfucker?????
IRHYME:
On a previous look dude has no Tec-nique wit his Rhyne Schemes/
couldnt get shit started if injested tons of mexican fry beans/
-previous battles-
Is this ur openerr???????
Quit your vote bitchin, grandma win some lose some stop it/
Battles texted out wit Nintendo Ds still wouldnt have game in your pocket/
ok but needs to be reworded diffrently kinda through punch off
On some `personal hype` Im not scared of Human Horror movie/
Nonsence wit `fictional type` laugh at your B-Rated shit it doesnt move me/
good vocab usage here not relly feeling punch though
Goin green for enviroment right after this clash/
Its Saturday tho I gots swifter CU next tuesday trash/
ok punch again just how u set it up throws it off a bit
Swifer mop will have troubles even equip`d wit sails catch my drift/
Im outta here like someone broke wind did you catch a wift/
weak closer
Swift
iRhyme could change his name to Nile and he still wouldn't have flow
I heard he gets a lotta head, but that’s only 'cause his rhymes blow
good flip off the concept on the 1st line lol at second nice opener
That wack style, those played-out punches, please abort 'em hoe
Your rhymes could run Pillsbury and still wouldn't be makin' doe
again good setup nice concept flip kinda basic but good attempt
While writtin' this verse, I filled all these blank spaces unintentionally
So I'm murderin' you accidentally, a lot like the death scene of Brandon Lee
nice multi setup here good vocab choice second line shouda reworded differently but good punch
You got shitted on by Jeffry, and now you wanna come and test me?
No pun intended, but in a few ticks, best believe I'mma make this pest flea
nice concept flip good creativity
I'm skippin' over A, B, C, D, and DD, goin' straight to E's/ease
'Cause my style's like big titties, the way iRhyme won't be coverin' my steeze
I like the creative attempt u came with here and the concept but i think its needs to be reworded styles and steeze are the same concept
Im Overlooking Double DD's and going straight to EE's/Ease
Cause my styles like Big Tittles, IRyhmes gettin a face
full let em Breathe!!!
not trying to flip ur idea but hopefully u get the concept
MVGT: SWIFT
IRhyme u have it down u just need to setup ur punches better to make them have more impact. Swift I can see ur making an improvement flipping concepts and using overall creativity and thats what made you win this battle.
-swiftYou got shitted on by Jeffry, and now you wanna come and test me?
No pun intended, but in a few ticks, best believe I'mma make this pest flea
I'm skippin' over A, B, C, D, and DD, goin' straight to E's/ease
'Cause my style's like big titties, the way iRhyme won't be coverin' my steeze
nuff said....better flow, punches and personals....
eh....punches were weak and lines werent as creative as they could've/should've been for text battles...Quit your vote bitchin, grandma win some lose some stop it/
Battles texted out wit Nintendo Ds still wouldnt have game in your pocket/
On some `personal hype` Im not scared of Human Horror movie/
Nonsence wit `fictional type` laugh at your B-Rated shit it doesnt move me/
vote swift
Ehh, average FL battle here alot of misses w/ on a hand full of decent concepts between the two. iRhyme had mostly misses and I wasnt really feeling anything from his verse.... SS had some played concepts but nontheless he had some hits so I feel he gets the win for that. MVGT-SS
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iRhyme
Swifer mop will have troubles even equip`d wit sails catch my drift
Im outta here like someone broke wind did you catch a wift
your best bar but really tho its nothing to quote. its irrelevant to your opponent, the punches that can be aimed at anyone but it didnt carry any sting to it
vs
Swifty Shifty
You got shitted on by Jeffry, and now you wanna come and test me?
No pun intended, but in a few ticks, best believe I'mma make this pest flea
weak attempt in incorporating the personals but the 2nd line punch was ok-ish..not too strong, not too weak, but average
Verdict
i didnt really like the punches both came with in this battle to start off, the originality and fresh factor wasnt to be seen because i noticed weak creativity and personal jabs that werent connectin 100%. i felt swifty's 1 jab i came across as to irhymes 0 connects. nothing that stood out but between the 2 it was clear swifty had somewhat a better verse.
Vote-> Swifty Shifty
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