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H.McCoy
Jeffry
McCoy banned for biting
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check...
check brah.
g'luk
g'luk jeffy.
i'm a fiend for the piff,herion,sess & speed,lovin coke,meth & e
so theres no doubt that i'll roll it up...& in one hit i'll be smokin jeffry
i'm the best,a beast.ur depressed,a geek.die now u lame fuck
sad thing about my set up..ur whole life ya parents told u the same stuff
fag,duck..ur a stressin noob so quickly i'm severin ur head in two
ur a pedophile,a molestor..so i bet touchin kids is ur idea of protect the youth
jackass,u never get pussy but i bet u seek hard like a swinger
jeffy's got that jonny knoxville swag.when he played the retard in the ringer
& it's fact ur a virgin,tryna hide in the woods for a rape
if u ever snatched a bitch.u'd try & chop off her leg so she couldn't escape
this is a disgrace,the voters'll hate u after readin ur verse
chanting die faggot,never txt again & mccoy put this fuckin dweeb in a hearse
what u preach is obsurd,whack as fuck & it's fact u can't fight
u vs me is like comparing vag to an ass hole...ur not even that tight
i'll smash mics leavin the cord around ya neck.i slay txt dweebs
with ppl hoping that when i pull the line tight it's @ a break neck speed
quick!get this fag to the greek,i'd kill u but u dont flex G
ur just the harmless neighbor down the street..that friendly bloak jeffry
& if we had a wager on this battle.i'd be takin the skrilla,the money
faggot i woulda smashed u in 2 lines..........but instead i've killed u in 20
#thatkeynkoswagson
ok....
thats terrific.....
I peeped at your battles, I saw you body Mac. and CbjbKD..............WOW!
A 35 year old has been, for once your doin somethin with your life, bet ya dads proud
H. McCoy I'm sick of your shit fool, you're wack so just face it man,
He couldn't calculate a winning piece against me - never got outta basic math
Global Warming? We know McCoy should step up, he gave some emissions,
Search and Destroy this fool like Vietnam U.S.A. army green beret missions,
With ya bleach blonde hair, blue eyes, how could I not see you?
It's funny, Even Hitler wouldn't accept this bitch into the Nazi Youth,
This dude was on my ass beggin like a bitch for 10 lines......shitty,
You got the swag of a bitch like Mac. I'll body you like Swift Shifty,
Ya heard i was beatin down your block so you bubble wrapped your windows,
I knew this lame was soft, but I buttered his girls ass with leftover Criscoe,
I'm strong like an angry mad man, tougher than Hitlers fists,
I'd play you like a piano man, but you were that dead guy in Schindlers list
I ain't a Nazi bitch, naw I don't stride for power,
I can see why you're so angry, your ex-wife's pussy was so sour!
I'm a slap this faggot, 5-star all over his face, real soon
Knock him into outer space so he and kid cudi can be both man on the moon
But I knocked your bitch up! Your gunna soon be a Daddy!
I told her to take the pill, but she said she never thought of a plan b.
FML. keystyled this shit. FML FML FML
ready for votes,will drop links
i'm the best,a beast.ur depressed,a geek.die now u lame fuck
sad thing about my set up..ur whole life ya parents told u the same stuff
fag,duck..ur a stressin noob so quickly i'm severin ur head in two
ur a pedophile,a molestor..so i bet touchin kids is ur idea of protect the youth
& it's fact ur a virgin,tryna hide in the woods for a rape
if u ever snatched a bitch.u'd try & chop off her leg so she couldn't escape
quick!get this fag to the greek,i'd kill u but u dont flex G
ur just the harmless neighbor down the street..that friendly bloak jeffry
vs
This dude was on my ass beggin like a bitch for 10 lines......shitty,
You got the swag of a bitch like Mac. I'll body you like Swift Shifty
'm strong like an angry mad man, tougher than Hitlers fists,
I'd play you like a piano man, but you were that dead guy in Schindlers list
But I knocked your bitch up! Your gunna soon be a Daddy!
I told her to take the pill, but she said she never thought of a plan b.
overal i think mccoy came with cooler ideas and ahrder connections.. uhm jeff you had some cool set ups but the punch let up.. that opener coulda been dope with the set up but the wording hurt you a bit. no hate but i think mccoy got this one with better hits and wording. good battle
vote mccoy
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i'm the best,a beast.ur depressed,a geek.die now u lame fuck
sad thing about my set up..ur whole life ya parents told u the same stuff
jackass,u never get pussy but i bet u seek hard like a swinger
jeffy's got that jonny knoxville swag.when he played the retard in the ringer
& it's fact ur a virgin,tryna hide in the woods for a rape
if u ever snatched a bitch.u'd try & chop off her leg so she couldn't escape
quick!get this fag to the greek,i'd kill u but u dont flex G
ur just the harmless neighbor down the street..that friendly bloak jeffry
i lol'd at that^
I'm strong like an angry mad man, tougher than Hitlers fists,
I'd play you like a piano man, but you were that dead guy in Schindlers list
good concept, wording is way off tho no hate
V- McCoy he just had the better verse, jeffry your gettin there, work on your wording and avoid played concepts
upp
bump
i'm the best,a beast.ur depressed,a geek.die now u lame fuck
sad thing about my set up..ur whole life ya parents told u the same stuff
botb
fag,duck..ur a stressin noob so quickly i'm severin ur head in two
ur a pedophile,a molestor..so i bet touchin kids is ur idea of protect the youth
quick!get this fag to the greek,i'd kill u but u dont flex G
ur just the harmless neighbor down the street..that friendly bloak jeffry
vs
This dude was on my ass beggin like a bitch for 10 lines......shitty,
You got the swag of a bitch like Mac. I'll body you like Swift Shifty
'm strong like an angry mad man, tougher than Hitlers fists,
I'd play you like a piano man, but you were that dead guy in Schindlers list
I saw this as pretty one sided, J you didn't really have the personals with as much sting, I saw threats and self-hype in the only real quotables and McCoy was solid and consistent punches, good wit and funny while he was landing pretty hard. Decent job to both, flow was alright here for jeffry theres improvement, McCoy just hit more and stung more. I'd agree with others J work on wording and sting, but aight verse
v/McCoy
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