FL HW Champ Match: King vs Ah.Rhyze

[The Incredible Hulk]

Check in by wed 11:59pm eastern
Verses due by fri 11:59pm eastern.
12-20 lines, agree or match who drops first
FL rules

[iLL sPoKeN.]

Check, how many links do I need to post?

[King]

Going 12 lines. Good luck

[King]

no links necessary for champ matches

[King]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison
Whole board'll laugh him out cuz of this beatin' n his dumb rhymes
They all know Kings got jokes...it's easy for me to get AhRyze outta Front Lines
Throw in the towel bitch or I'm coming out punching
Ya makin' it known you're 11-0<--I'm known for turning nothing to something
Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth
Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you
Dude aint capable of being real so any Straight talk is a no go
Let me put it in words you can understand...is this better you fucking homo?!?!

[iLL sPoKeN.]

Up your English skills……….. before I bust your teeth and grill….
You couldn't get your writing in gear if you stuffed ur cleets with quills
Ur homo meta's have been used more than a slutty college bitch’s snatch..
That's ur style? switch tracks cuz 'diss' isn't a battle, it's a fuckin' mis-match

Bar from Hush to King: I don’t blame u for biting when your rappings the worst
the first nigga to ask a dentist to fill his cavaties with a Spitacular verse

Apparently King bit from Spitacular..

U got them bummy writtens, bitin' to spit bars!! cuz my scripts hard while son be slippin..
Face it biter, ur the wackest herb who couldnt be "SPECtacular" with 20/20 vision..
This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles
Dude'll bring the lies..'cocky' dude TALKS BIG but not a tight thing will rise..
cuz u'd need 2 give him a L "ANN A/an' a" death sentence to compare the King & I..
Ur hyped & u cnt fkin' write, so u HUSH cuz a KO crush this dyke w/true slaughta..
& when im fire-ing lead on pussy, i'll leave this "lion/lyin" king dead" like Mufasa..

Goodluck

[Prince S.Tana]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison
nice opener, creative

Whole board'll laugh him out cuz of this beatin' n his dumb rhymes
They all know Kings got jokes...it's easy for me to get AhRyze outta Front Lines
ehh, kinda play'd..

Throw in the towel bitch or I'm coming out punching
Ya makin' it known you're 11-0<--I'm known for turning nothing to something
eck, worded bad, not hard either

Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth
okay concept, worded badly, not effective

Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you
Nice, personal and wp carried a solid punch

Dude aint capable of being real so any Straight talk is a no go
Let me put it in words you can understand...is this better you fucking homo?!?!
good closer..

vs.

Up your English skills……….. before I bust your teeth and grill….
You couldn't get your writing in gear if you stuffed ur cleets with quills
decent..
Ur homo meta's have been used more than a slutty college bitch’s snatch..
That's ur style? switch tracks cuz 'diss' isn't a battle, it's a fuckin' mis-match
concecpt there, poorly executed
U got them bummy writtens, bitin' to spit bars!! cuz my scripts hard while son be slippin..
Face it biter, ur the wackest herb who couldnt be "SPECtacular" with 20/20 vision..
decent here, but that bar from hush was NICE
This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles
lol.. cool here
Dude'll bring the lies..'cocky' dude TALKS BIG but not a tight thing will rise..
cuz u'd need 2 give him a L "ANN A/an' a" death sentence to compare the King & I..
decent wordplay, could have been worded better, still nice
Ur hyped & u cnt fkin' write, so u HUSH cuz a KO crush this dyke w/true slaughta..
& when im fire-ing lead on pussy, i'll leave this "lion/lyin" king dead" like Mufasa..
ehh.. lyin/lion is played!! weak closer


Vote: to be a champ match, i was disappointed.. Both attempts at personals were decent, King had played concepts and some strong punches throught his verse, ah nothing too much standed out, the set up was but u never saw anything that just jumped out at me, as i reading i though i was gonna take it, but come with that played wordplay at the closers ruined the whole verse, KING gets the win..

[iLL sPoKeN.]

thanks 0-1 uppin.

[Lex Have Mercy.]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison
hmm not really feeling this TBO
Whole board'll laugh him out cuz of this beatin' n his dumb rhymes
They all know Kings got jokes...it's easy for me to get AhRyze outta Front Lines
Played TBH
Throw in the towel bitch or I'm coming out punching
Ya makin' it known you're 11-0<--I'm known for turning nothing to something
NO
Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth
coulda been worded Better not a good Punch
Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you
EymSoPure said That's a Personel? when Ryze don't do audio so how does he know he cant carry a toon? IMO failed Personal IMO
Dude aint capable of being real so any Straight talk is a no go
Let me put it in words you can understand...is this better you fucking homo?!?!
good closer kinda creative!!

Up your English skills……….. before I bust your teeth and grill….
You couldn't get your writing in gear if you stuffed ur cleets with quills
ok decent Punch
Ur homo meta's have been used more than a slutty college bitch’s snatch..
That's ur style? switch tracks cuz 'diss' isn't a battle, it's a fuckin' mis-match
good concept IMO but executed Poorly IMO
U got them bummy writtens, bitin' to spit bars!! cuz my scripts hard while son be slippin..
Face it biter, ur the wackest herb who couldnt be "SPECtacular" with 20/20 vision..
NOW that is a Personal!!! FYI decent
This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles
decent ...punch
Dude'll bring the lies..'cocky' dude TALKS BIG but not a tight thing will rise..
cuz u'd need 2 give him a L "ANN A/an' a" death sentence to compare the King & I..
decent
Ur hyped & u cnt fkin' write, so u HUSH cuz a KO crush this dyke w/true slaughta..
& when im fire-ing lead on pussy, i'll leave this "lion/lyin" king dead" like Mufasa..
Lion king is kinda Old but overall decent not Hard

Punches: Ah.Rhyze with more decent Punches
Multies: Ah.rhyze
Flow: both
Personals: Ah.Rhyze
Wordplay: both but king had a few that outshined Ah.Rhyze
Nameplay: king
Originality: tie

TBH i agree with Pure about the disappoint, but overall Ah.Rhyze had a little better Verse then King, and not better punches but decent,kinga had nameplay that was slighty better then Ryze both where decent verse....

MVGt- Ah.Rhyze

TBH to be the FL HW Champ Match both verse where kinda disappointing
but it's clear who won this !! decent battle but disappointing

[Hush!!]

v/King


Vote DQ'ed not a proper breakdown

-Quest.

[Tim]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison
lol nice
Whole board'll laugh him out cuz of this beatin' n his dumb rhymes
They all know Kings got jokes...it's easy for me to get AhRyze outta Front Lines
this was alright
Throw in the towel bitch or I'm coming out punching
Ya makin' it known you're 11-0<--I'm known for turning nothing to something
alright getting tired of you using the <---- though
Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth
lol
Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you
nah and again with the <-----
Dude aint capable of being real so any Straight talk is a no go
Let me put it in words you can understand...is this better you fucking homo?!?!
alright closer

Vs.

Up your English skills……….. before I bust your teeth and grill….
You couldn't get your writing in gear if you stuffed ur cleets with quills
Nah
Ur homo meta's have been used more than a slutty college bitch’s snatch..
That's ur style? switch tracks cuz 'diss' isn't a battle, it's a fuckin' mis-match
Nah playedish
U got them bummy writtens, bitin' to spit bars!! cuz my scripts hard while son be slippin..
Face it biter, ur the wackest herb who couldnt be "SPECtacular" with 20/20 vision..
Nah weak
This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles
oh no
Dude'll bring the lies..'cocky' dude TALKS BIG but not a tight thing will rise..
cuz u'd need 2 give him a L "ANN A/an' a" death sentence to compare the King & I..
ight
Ur hyped & u cnt fkin' write, so u HUSH cuz a KO crush this dyke w/true slaughta..
& when im fire-ing lead on pussy, i'll leave this "lion/lyin" king dead" like Mufasa..
lion king punches are played on king

Overal onesided battle imo, i felt like ah came with just generic punches from the 05's that lacked sting and King came more with the gimmiks that actually worked out. For a title bout though this was meh.

Vote King

[iLL sPoKeN.]

Thanks for vote.

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[Ministry]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison

coo opener

Whole board'll laugh him out cuz of this beatin' n his dumb rhymes
They all know Kings got jokes...it's easy for me to get AhRyze outta Front Lines

meh, obvious

Throw in the towel bitch or I'm coming out punching
Ya makin' it known you're 11-0<--I'm known for turning nothing to something

pretty creative, i guess

Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth

lol, this was aight

Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you

backslid a bit, not feelin this

Dude aint capable of being real so any Straight talk is a no go
Let me put it in words you can understand...is this better you fucking homo?!?!

no, weak ender, and multiple '!' don't change that

Vs.

Up your English skills……….. before I bust your teeth and grill….
You couldn't get your writing in gear if you stuffed ur cleets with quills

not the best opener

Ur homo meta's have been used more than a slutty college bitch’s snatch..
That's ur style? switch tracks cuz 'diss' isn't a battle, it's a fuckin' mis-match

bit harder

U got them bummy writtens, bitin' to spit bars!! cuz my scripts hard while son be slippin..
Face it biter, ur the wackest herb who couldnt be "SPECtacular" with 20/20 vision..

meh, not bad, not great

This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles

lol, quite liked this

Dude'll bring the lies..'cocky' dude TALKS BIG but not a tight thing will rise..
cuz u'd need 2 give him a L "ANN A/an' a" death sentence to compare the King & I..
ight
Ur hyped & u cnt fkin' write, so u HUSH cuz a KO crush this dyke w/true slaughta..
& when im fire-ing lead on pussy, i'll leave this "lion/lyin" king dead" like Mufasa..

pretty decent wp

more or less a tie but cos King went from good to weak, and Ah weak to good, Ah had more of an impact overall/ Ah GMV

[iLL sPoKeN.]

You need 50 posts to vote bruh..

up 3

[Extortion]

Cats been antiicipatin' this drop, they wanna see the embarassment
So here's my verse, Ah.....and here's yours in comparison
Very creative, king also incorporated nameplay
Those points were a gift n ya ranking's about to go south
He heard is girl yell "Ah!", n walked in on me gettin her to open her mouth
cool, but coulda went harder
Ya future in music looks bleek, you can't rap which is sadly true
N you definitely can't carry a toon<--cuz skill-wise he's more likely to carry you
i remeber when i was using arrows, lol anyways cool punch.....misdirection was aight

vs

This mans a straight pussy w/alot of mouth but he aint the type to scuffle
Cause him playing Sonic is the only time he'll ever fight with knuckles
cool flip

King had a below par verse from past work ive seen.....
lose that arrows i guess thats my advice for you

Ah- decent verse, xcept you had some wording issues and playd concept issues......

v/king for more lands

rtf plz
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