FL HW Champ Match: King vs YungDosia(REOPENED)

[The Archetype]

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10-20 lines... agree or match who drops 1st
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[King]

Check, gl

[YungDosia]

Check. Going 20, match me.

[King]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly

I mean, you got the rules bendin more than Dosia's teeth...
As a mod, your more crooked then.... well.... Dosia's teeth

Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly

GOW gotta finish writing his verse

I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash


gl

[YungDosia]

Murder.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...29/index2.html

I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case


g/l

[Slowhands]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
- lol kinda funny but not too witty
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
- lol havn't seen this
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
- meh ok ish, but nah
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
- lol ok
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
- ROFL it never gets old to me
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
- meh
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
- meh
I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
- ok
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
- ok
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
- lol better



vs



I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
- ok
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
- seen it but ok
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
- ok but kinda worded weird
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
- more of a statement
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
- lol but the reference to other peoples been done to death
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
- again, wording held this back
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
- nah
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
- meh
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
- ok
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
- eh no homo??


Overall - pretty big let down, but considering the current state of FrontLines this is pretty fitting for a champ match. Both of you could have erased about half of your bars and still had the same effect on each other. Alot of shit thats been done before, King had more humor type played punches, with a few ones i havn't seen on certain personal aspects that might be played. Dosia had a good start, but it's like he used a different style half way through his verse and alot of wording killed a few punches. Like the Lion King reference, you made it out that "your part in the movie" was the punch, but whats hard hitting about that? Another was your "were a step behind NBA ....when we shoot freethrows" but whats the punch?? Just because there is somewhat wordplay involved doesn't make it a direct hit. I dunno, I think King took this with somewhat humor and not as much wording issues as YD had. Fuck you both for ruining the champ match.

[Novade]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
-lol good

Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
-okay

Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
-lmao

Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
-nice

There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
-lmfao nice

You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
-decent

Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
-not feeling this to much

I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
-lol nice

Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
-decent,

N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
-ok closeer


vs

I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
-nice

So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
-nice

We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
-meh, okay

For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
-nice

Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
-okay punch

Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
-nice

And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
-decent,

Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
-not feeling this much

And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
-decent here

You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
-lmao


Overall: This was a good battle, both had some quotable bars. King you came harder with personals, but dosia came with punches, both had some good wordplay and nameplay throwed in there, overall this was a fun battle to read, both verses had me crackin up.but imma give it honestly to who's verse i enjoyed more.

Vote=Dosia

[Switch.]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
Made me lol..ok opener
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
Lol not bad
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
Pretty good
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
Nah..too stretched as well
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
Decent
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
This was cool
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
No.
I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
Nah could've done better w/ the personal imo
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
personal but didnt hit hard enough for me
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
Good closer



vs


I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
Good opener
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
decent hit
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
Nah u couldve done much better with the lion king wordplay
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
Meh
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
Lol pretty good
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
Nice personal punch
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
meh
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
Good good
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
Okay
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
Nice closer

This battle was pretty tight to me..both had some real nice punches that were witty, smooth and hard hitting. It was pretty hard to piick a winner but when i read over the verses again i felt that YD was more consistent and his personals hit harder than King's. Cool battle though..could go either way. Keep it up dudes..No hate.


V/YungDosia

[4renSICK]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
^ iight
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
^ creative
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
^ nah didnt like
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
^ cool
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
^ha iight
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
^ nahhh
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
^ weak
I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
^decent
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
^ okay, wasnt a hard hit but decent
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
^good
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I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
^ decentish
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
^ha nice
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
^iight nameplay
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
^ mild
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
^ha cool
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
^ mild
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
^ wasnt feeling
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
^almost decent
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
^iight
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
^ selfhype'ish but decent

Punches: tie
Flow: king
Personals: king
Wordplay: tie
Originality: both were a lil ehh
Enjoyment: both

Vote: king
imma give it to him for better wording and funnier lines, along with personals; pretty even match

[A. Diction]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
--decent
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
--eh, you complimenting him in a way by saying he's fucking beauty, so...fail
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
--eh
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
--lulz, nice personal
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
--eh
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
--eh
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
--naa
I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
--nice
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
--nice
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
--nice

Vs

I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
--decent personal
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
--played
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
--wtf played c'mon
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
--eh
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
--eh
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
--ur just complimented nba by saying ur a step behind their lines...so, fail
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
--weaksauce
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
--whack
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
--whack
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
--so ur saying after he fucks ur, ur gonna press charges? lulz...fail

V/ King

[Mafioso.]

Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit


...vs

Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian

meh, I have to agree wit slow's gay ass....this was dissapointing especially for a cham match I expected better from both i expected both to come more agresive and witty...yd u couldve took this easily fam u jus needed to spend m ore time wit ya verse cuz ya wordin and delivery killed a lot of sting from ur verse...king u wasnt as witty as u usually are but I felt like ya verse was still enough i felt ya lines stung more and i felt ya personals more overall weak expected better from both no hate v/king

[Extortion]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
would been better as past tense
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
eh
Yung has no clue how to win, on this board he gets raped easily
Someday he might get a hunch...from being bent over n fucked repeatedly
weak
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
um statements are lame dude
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
i seen the personal coming. but jus didnt land best
You stepped up just to lose whore, can't even figure why I'm battling you for
It's a miracle ya took a shot<---it'll be more of a miracle if you survive a few more
this was a cool bar but lil stretched but still a qoutable
Come on Yung, I kill dudes that you would kill to get killed by
You talk like your fresh...I just wanna drop you off a building n see if you still fly
weak wordplay and bad wording
I'm torturing this damn jerk, n I'm sorry but even Praying can't work
But since you're on knees for God anyways, I suppose it can't hurt
no
Try n think smart kid, you shouldn't even be here let alone talk shit
It's true ya in a champ match...it's also true ya only here because Arch quit
statement
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash
ok


vs

I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
seen this flip bout pens and geeks. open shoulda went harder
So dont worry bout the due date for verses, and ur lil mini flows
Cuz we dont even need a deadline<------you spit plenty of those
lol. this was coool
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
cool wordplay/nameplay
For guys like you it must be hard to find a girl who will serve u snatch
But if she's ugly and half retarded...then you've found ur perfect match
meh
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
na
Nets Best Artist couldve been match by any crew, with yo weak flows
Cuz were only a step behind N.B.A. lines…....when shooting freethrows
ha tight personal
And ya whores got no booty or tits, damn his worlds a mess
So from one hit you'll be flat on face….to resemble ur girls chest
executed decent
Yo shit aint hot, noobies vote for u everytime on some loyal weak shit
Cuz every vet knows king aint sick........he just gets a royal treatment
wasnt feeling it for some reason. i understand what u tried
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian
seen
You probly a registered sex offender pedophile, those the facts u face
So i kno u don’t want it with yung kid…unless ur trying to catch a case
lmao dude u went fire on the closer..........ha

ima have to say i vote dosia for having one more quotable....and better delivery.....both had good personals and witty concepts

v/dosia

[G!MMiK]

Well I'm not 100% sober so I'm not gonna quote to avoid looking like n idiot

King - ur verse was pretty chock ful of played lines and such ur pinches seemingly connected buh didn't really exite me lol /nohomo
flow was decent besides a couple stretched bars and some mis wording Imo

Dosia - ur verse also had a fair share of played concepts although I do feel that ur punches landed more solid and clean ur structure was cleaner that kings buh ur wording was worse than his had u worded most of ur bars a different way u culda got this easily

in conclusion

v/ dos
more consistent punches although wording made battle super close

[Tim]

Dosia's about to get battered, drop lines n laugh as CRD scatters
Congrats on getting 50 wins...without ONE that fucking matters!
Quit rhyming jack, we're all finding that Dos is easily defined as wack
Yea this dude's Beast...n you can find me fucking Beauty behind his back
Lets start reasoning, don't hold ya breathing in thinkin' this is something he can win
How could Dosia be champ when he's getting sonned in champ matches he's not even in?
There's no mercy here Yung, I'ma throw punches that attack at heart
I got a smile made for TV...you got a smile that looks like abstract art!
N dude's a fail with women, around some pussy I don't think Dos would last
Matter of fact, the only time we're gonna see Ms. Dos<--is if Windows should crash

vs

I dismantle geeks, whack lyricist get placed on my mantle piece
And king claims he a great writer........but could barely handle ink
We can just throw blows, no need for me to spark that uzi
Cuz my punches'll leave u lion king….like you was part of the movie
Your a fuckin noobie in my opinion bitch, so trust this kid
That to us, your text and wordzworth...just about as much as his
And don’t talk bout stackin chips, when u lookin bummy and beat again
Cuz if were talking broke as a joke<------then your moneys a comedian

You both had pretty entertaining verses...I just felt like King came with the fresher punches..Dosia had some wording issues and i thought that king came a lil more polished

Vote...King

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...457/index.html

[Tim]

arts vote is dqued on the ground that him and Dosia have everlasting beef