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Last edited by King; March 20th, 2010 at 07:11 PM
Last edited by God 0f War; March 21st, 2010 at 09:13 PM
Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
We share a crew, but forget the awkward moment ya facin'
This battle will be the last time God see's himself in a Sticky: situation
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
In ya afterlife you might have fans but as of now, none
Cuz God isn't liked enough to have dickriders....but his Ghost has a ton
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
You get walked on like pavement, but its a fact ya blind to
So let King fill you in..........n try to ignore the cement truck behind you
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
Last edited by King; March 19th, 2010 at 11:48 PM
yeah
here lmao
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
and u try and sell urself as a monster, but ur product is bland faggot
cuz the only thing your verse'll retail, is how ta lose champ matches
and your a thing of the past, i dont know what u showed for anyways
because king hasnt had a shot at the top since April 4, 1968
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
and ur family is psychos, there known to get violent with force
i seen your mom go anal........for 25 dollars and a ride to the store
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
i drafted you for construct, you was suppose to have savage drops
but you get hammered and drilled so much, uve become our mascot
n ive got the best text, you shouldnt even step yet
cuz one punch;ll put king in a box on the board......chess set
Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
vs.
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
Truthfully, there was different approaches by both here. King went harder creatively i think. GoW went for the personal edge, and both did a decent job at what they went for. I felt King's lines we're more enjoyable in the end and that's what has me leaning towards him. Cuz God's punches we're good but not great and king's we're really well thought and executed nicely.
Vote - King, by a hair.
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Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
Nice, good opener
We share a crew, but forget the awkward moment ya facin'
This battle will be the last time God see's himself in a Sticky: situation
Lmao! good personal and wordplay, dope punch
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
Another creative punch, likin this shit
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
Ouch! nice again.
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
Good personal
In ya afterlife you might have fans but as of now, none
Cuz God isn't liked enough to have dickriders....but his Ghost has a ton
decent.
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
LMAO!!
You get walked on like pavement, but its a fact ya blind to
So let King fill you in..........n try to ignore the cement truck behind you
ehhh...couldve been better, ok though.
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
played concept, but flipped ok.
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
weakest bar of ur verse in my eyes, pretty played concept.
Vs.
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
lmao, nice opener
and u try and sell urself as a monster, but ur product is bland faggot
cuz the only thing your verse'll retail, is how ta lose champ matches
hahaha, this was dope! nice wordplay
and your a thing of the past, i dont know what u showed for anyways
because king hasnt had a shot at the top since April 4, 1968
ehhh, ok.
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
hahaha dope!, nice personal and nameflip. liked this!
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
Ok, felt this was good but couldve been better.
and ur family is psychos, there known to get violent with force
i seen your mom go anal........for 25 dollars and a ride to the store
lmao!!!!!!!!! hahahaa funny! nice line
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
again nice personal!!
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
Okay, good personal punch hit decent.
i drafted you for construct, you was suppose to have savage drops
but you get hammered and drilled so much, uve become our mascot
lmao, good flip on this concept didnt see where u were going at first but good flip.
n ive got the best text, you shouldnt even step yet
cuz one punch;ll put king in a box on the board......chess set
decent closer, kinda predictable but still ok
Overall: This battle was great! and a great read! Like i said in the chat room, honestly prob best battle ive read since ive been here props to both for being a part of it. As for my vote, i feel like G0W brought the personals to the table and was connecting hard and King was bringing his wordplay and creativity, both landed punches so hard to judge. But in my eyes im a give this one to King, i felt his verse was overall stronger and his punches that did connect hit a lil harder. Both verses were consistant, but i think King edged it out. I think his creativity took this one and his wordplay, G0W ur personals and wordplay were on point as well jus think King edged it with the LOTB, which to me is a toss up between his "Lookin over ur shoulder" line and the sticky situation. No hate, much respect to both for laying these verse.
Vote-King
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"Lord You Know" ft J Hanlon FIRST SINGLE OFF DOSIA UPCOMING ALBUM
[YOUTUBE]fZ8YYmc7gYc[/YOUTUBE]
Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
- eh ok, kinda weird set up to punch
We share a crew, but forget the awkward moment ya facin'
This battle will be the last time God see's himself in a Sticky: situation
- decent/original
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
- ok, kinda straight forward
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
- meh, kinda not a punch.
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
- ok
In ya afterlife you might have fans but as of now, none
Cuz God isn't liked enough to have dickriders....but his Ghost has a ton
- meh, fumble imo
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
- funny
You get walked on like pavement, but its a fact ya blind to
So let King fill you in..........n try to ignore the cement truck behind you
- nice misdirection, ok punch
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
- lol ...after i got it
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
- meh, played concept but ok punch
vs
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
- ok, punch itself not that hard
and u try and sell urself as a monster, but ur product is bland faggot
cuz the only thing your verse'll retail, is how ta lose champ matches
- ok
and your a thing of the past, i dont know what u showed for anyways
because king hasnt had a shot at the top since April 4, 1968
- meh ok
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
- lol
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
- meh
and ur family is psychos, there known to get violent with force
i seen your mom go anal........for 25 dollars and a ride to the store
- LMAO funny > clever
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
- meh, never battled him tbh
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
- decent
i drafted you for construct, you was suppose to have savage drops
but you get hammered and drilled so much, uve become our mascot
- funny
n ive got the best text, you shouldnt even step yet
cuz one punch;ll put king in a box on the board......chess set
- meh, punch itself kinda weird
Overall - nice battle guys, i liked alot of punches on each side. King came with pretty decent originality and some personals, some were a miss but not by much. GoW came with some nameflips and some humor, very close to call but I got King taking this by a flys cunt hair, my decision put me between humor < creative. GoW had some funny ass lines but King had some original punches, I'm a huge fan of humor punches but a few GoW had didn't have his normal wordplay or maybe misdirections in it, nice battle though and props on both verses.
V - King
Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
Wording is bad which makes it hard to follow. you could have left this out.
We share a crew, but forget the awkward moment ya facin'
This battle will be the last time God see's himself in a Sticky: situation
ok concept but again, the wording was bad.. your set up was irrelevant.
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
meh, could have been way better.. just not harsh enough.
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
nah, this was wack.
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
wording issues made this come out soft. but a decent concept if you look at it.
In ya afterlife you might have fans but as of now, none
Cuz God isn't liked enough to have dickriders....but his Ghost has a ton
why you talking about me?? just kidding.. lol.. I guess with better setup and wording this would have been good lol.
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
this was good.. Ive seen a lot of beg to differ lines but this one was a fresh flip.
You get walked on like pavement, but its a fact ya blind to
So let King fill you in..........n try to ignore the cement truck behind you
cool.. not too hard though but ok
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
meh, its been done a lot on him.. find something new lol.
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
wording would have made this dope.
vs
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
nah
and u try and sell urself as a monster, but ur product is bland faggot
cuz the only thing your verse'll retail, is how ta lose champ matches
This was coo.. not too hard but cool.
and your a thing of the past, i dont know what u showed for anyways
because king hasnt had a shot at the top since April 4, 1968
the concept is dope as fuck but your wording is so off that no one would ever get it unless they asked you or something.. that makes the punch super weak in the end.
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
dope.. I liked this one.
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
lmao.. this was dope.. wording on the execution could have held a bit more suspense though.
and ur family is psychos, there known to get violent with force
i seen your mom go anal........for 25 dollars and a ride to the store
meh.. its ok.
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
cool.. one of my style punches you sneaky bastard lol.
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
lol.. this was good.
i drafted you for construct, you was suppose to have savage drops
but you get hammered and drilled so much, uve become our mascot
damn.. thats fucked up haha.
n ive got the best text, you shouldnt even step yet
cuz one punch;ll put king in a box on the board......chess set
this nigga think he drake now haha.
well, when I first started reading both verses.. I kinda had my mind made up that king had this based on how weak GOW's verse started off.. but then towards the middle, he picked it up and gave me a few comical lines rather then the usual Im dope and your not lines that he packs. This was a huge deciding factor because king really didn't much to the table.. just slight consistancy.. so with GOW having better punches that actually made me not want to kill myself for reading this battle..
v/GOW
カミノコトバ
King:
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
^your only ok line. and it's only ok.
vs.
GOW:
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
^stated blandly but good hit
overall this was a landslide. King has loads of work to do on his structure and wording and concepts. the fact he is even in a champ match is shocking to me. GOW had a good verse not AMAZING but good. good structure and punches are worded well. all you really gotta do is try and think up dope concepts for every single line.
vote GOW for not being a noob.
on the ps3 so....
ugh, the battle was nice but i got GoW taking this. both were even pretty much in terms of consistency but i feel that GoW hard a nice mix of hard and comical punches that gave him the edge
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so basically this match was two up and comers...both had a little work to do on their wording and everything but honestly I was digging King's verse a lot more than GOW's...it had some lines that just struck me as a lot more personal and heavy hitting whereas GOW tried to take the nonchalant/swag approach too much to win here...I'm going to have to say King ends up winning this in the upset...good shit fellas
vote - King
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Stage's set for the Grand Canyon of battles, 8th wonder of text
Let the whole web site-see...
...........................n they'll hear "King's Margin of Victory's on the left"
Little stretched, I liked the creativity of the concept though as a whole
We share a crew, but forget the awkward moment ya facin'
This battle will be the last time God see's himself in a Sticky: situation
Not feeling
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
made me smile lol
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
Okayish... kinda weak because it wasn't a close battle imo
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
This was a decent flip on a very played idea
In ya afterlife you might have fans but as of now, none
Cuz God isn't liked enough to have dickriders....but his Ghost has a ton
Ehh
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
Cool.
You get walked on like pavement, but its a fact ya blind to
So let King fill you in..........n try to ignore the cement truck behind you
Aight, not hard hitting
Dude gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho
Live dating is in , you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no
funny
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
Not feeling this for a closer at all.
Vs
if a girl ever loves you, then its not because your loyal king
its because they only let you touch there pussy when u pay em royalties
Not really keen on this
and u try and sell urself as a monster, but ur product is bland faggot
cuz the only thing your verse'll retail, is how ta lose champ matches
Okay
and your a thing of the past, i dont know what u showed for anyways
because king hasnt had a shot at the top since April 4, 1968
This was really, really good. great concept. dope.
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
Decent
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
Eh
and ur family is psychos, there known to get violent with force
i seen your mom go anal........for 25 dollars and a ride to the store
Meh
you like to creep thru FL, weve all seen you in threads
cuz ur known ta ride slow.....and anyone else whose beat u in text
Aight, cool.
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
decent
i drafted you for construct, you was suppose to have savage drops
but you get hammered and drilled so much, uve become our mascot
Not feelin much
n ive got the best text, you shouldnt even step yet
cuz one punch;ll put king in a box on the board......chess set
Weak to me man
This was a VERY hit and miss battle... both of you had very similar verses in terms of consistency. I'm not really sure what to make of this because I expected a clean sweep for GoW but it wasn't like that at all imo. I'm having trouble voting on this if i'm honest.
King... Your bars are creative... and I love that. But they don't hit as hard as they could
GoW... Your verse here wasn't quite as good as i've come to expect from you and King had a suprisingly good verse. You had LOTB with the Martin Luther king shit.. that was a really nice bar but some of the other shit wasn't nearly up to the correct standard.
I really don't know and I'm cool wit you both. Lookin at the other votes this really is close and my vote makes a difference for once lol.
I think GoW edged it. but it was probably the smallest margin i've ever seen in a battle. The martin luther king line probably did it for me. It was dope.
Vote - GoW by the smallest of margins.
Good luck to both of you, props to you both.
Last edited by God 0f War; March 21st, 2010 at 11:06 PM
He's scared I'll blind side him, I got him yearnin' to flee
If one punch connects he'll be Lookin' Over His Shoulder.....permanently
You can't be serious with ya shitty wording n bad structure
I brought my best so we could battle for Real, Champ<--so where's Rupture?
'N you're a weak leader, don't take any credit for the crew
Cuz you didn't start anything dope<----your just lucky they carried you
That's why fag gets votes, even arguing with anyone he sees
This flamer would Beg to differ.....just as an excuse to get on his knees
This guy's spineless, n when I joined Con I was afraid of that
His career is so bound to text, his album would be released in paperback
vs
fuckin poser shouldnt be here, uve never spit no ethered flames
you went from lyrisic to king, and havent lived up to either name
and your musics garbage, youve never left a beat murdered
the only time king'll go commercial, is advertising cheeseburgers
they said u got sin last week, but no ones called you better
cuz after ur contenders match.......kenny stopped em all together
Overall, both were alright I was disappointed with both, seemed like there was a ton of forcing on both parts. I think King took shots from a lot of angles that hit, while God's only lines were really based off nameplays... the ones i quoted were good but gotta have more than that. King had some played stuff like the (spinesless text reference) while GoW had more forces (put king in a box... on the board..) that was just too much. Pretty much even in all aspects but I think King put together a more well rounded verse.
Vote = King
I assume I can vote as a "former champ"... but if I'm not allowed then no worries
C L [A] S H
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