The Ark

[Cody Nash]

The Ark
By: Cry




Here, in the ark...


I'm appeasin' the swell, my rhymes speak for themselves..
droppin' two-toned wording for five people to dwell
and the sky's equal to hell, a lie can be truth
you say there's no one here, but behind me there's two!
unlikely, but proof.. that we aren't what we seem
we take that food for thought, 'cause we are what we eat
partially weak, and yet strong in the same sense
writing stories and poems that are polished by plagiarists
honest, I'm made for this.. I wouldn't change a thing
saying nothing about no one that they wouldn't say to me
too good to remain discrete, I'm in love with the words
my prom date was the coolest 'cause clutching's a verb
her touching returned (with a simile aching to bust)
our tounges were holding tight like embracing a hug!
awaiting the flood, which requires no hesitation
dumping concepts in a boat without desire for destination
the crew for hire? we're levitatin'.. suggestive to get up
writers writing for power? go'n spit from ya head once...
invision, respect/love... put it all in the same crew
start releasing an anchor so you can haul it away, too
makin' faults of blockades, BOOM! earthquake on the Ark
if anything else, write "her" place in ya heart...
burn pages and start from the ideas of THOSE pages
crash into your work, the Ark has NO haven!
no fragrance, 'cause it only smells as you'd imagine
only goes as far down as you felt that you can fathom
you've fell into a passage.. so no rhyme can stop the deep
not one misplaced word is gonn'a feet you off your sweep..
if we're talkin' doctors, no needle drops the beat..
and if there's no intelligence, we're no equals on the speech
ya just feeble, lost and beat... all you got is to read
so what my Ark has to offer is what you've gotten from me.




"The Ark is all I have. Each memory and thought
flowing through a sea of talent and creativity.
Where they come from? There's no shore...

...

and the floods never stop."


I'll probably write about it when they do though.

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...835/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...213/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...920/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...079/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...443/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...386/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...338/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...006/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...162/index.html


...for the special people ^^ this is how you do it.

[Cody Nash]

bump..

[Cody Nash]

Lol...

[Wordz AhGod.]

nice..

and the sky's equal to hell, a lie can be truth
you say there's no one here, but behind me there's two!

This line caught my eye from the begining. youve always dropped some good shit cry.. i liked the relivence between writing and Noahs ark that you dropped in here.. it took a good amount of thought to put this together but I felt that in some parts you really did dumb your scheme down a bit just for the readers which, depending on who's reading it could either have them like "what the fuck" or "I like that" so I guess its all good fam. Im not too good at feeding these pieces but this one was well written and kept me thinking.

[Exodus (12:14)]

This was an excellent piece that presented itself from the beginning toward the end. I can't find many flaws about this except keep writing man. That "food for thought" line was nice as well. Props!

[Cody Nash]

thanks G's... leave links.

[Rivalyn]

I Liked this drop, well planned out but could have been more creative, dosnt matter, i loved the rhyme sceme, it kept me on track, bar by bar,...i could quote my favorite parts but i liked it all..next time throw in some better multies and metas , if you want, anyway not taking nothing away from you, still a pretty nice drop..keep it up..return the favor (thoughts of a slave by riva)...thankz


-riva, 8th plague!!

[Cody Nash]

word I'll hit that up after a while..

[Kodiak]

I'm appeasin' the swell, my rhymes speak for themselves..
droppin' two-toned wording for five people to dwell
superb multi and excellent meta
and the sky's equal to hell, a lie can be truth
you say there's no one here, but behind me there's two!
I like how the lines play on each other
unlikely, but proof.. that we aren't what we seem
we take that food for thought, 'cause we are what we eat
this stuck out to me...loved the word play
partially weak, and yet strong in the same sense
writing stories and poems that are polished by plagiarists
wasent really fellin it but still a above average bar
honest, I'm made for this.. I wouldn't change a thing
saying nothing about no one that they wouldn't say to me
structure/format kinda threw the flow of for me when i read it
too good to remain discrete, I'm in love with the words
my prom date was the coolest 'cause clutching's a verb
this was raw, the concept and excutution flawless
her touching returned (with a simile aching to bust)
our tounges were holding tight like embracing a hug!
it just fit to me wasent special thou
awaiting the flood, which requires no hesitation
dumping concepts in a boat without desire for destination
came back to the ark idea i liked it
the crew for hire? we're levitatin'.. suggestive to get up
writers writing for power? go'n spit from ya head once...
made me think
invision, respect/love... put it all in the same crew
start releasing an anchor so you can haul it away, too
wasen't quite sure exactly what your getting at
makin' faults of blockades, BOOM! earthquake on the Ark
if anything else, write "her" place in ya heart...
I liked this, it was thought provoking
burn pages and start from the ideas of THOSE pages
crash into your work, the Ark has NO haven!
this was just ehh to me i felt it was a filler
no fragrance, 'cause it only smells as you'd imagine
only goes as far down as you felt that you can fathom
this was cool
you've fell into a passage.. so no rhyme can stop the deep
not one misplaced word is gonn'a feet you off your sweep..
took me a second to get
if we're talkin' doctors, no needle drops the beat..
and if there's no intelligence, we're no equals on the speech
ya just feeble, lost and beat... all you got is to read
so what my Ark has to offer is what you've gotten from me.
the last 2 bars was just ok

like the concept,above average structure, it was creative to me SO....a real good piece

[Cody Nash]

thanks. leave links! I'll get em here soon.

[luke illestry]

well dayum wasn't this a good drop ok lemme get into this

multis were there n were enjoyable to read. the topic was well defined but hidden at the same time i had to see thos suttle hints which really got mew more into reading this.
some of my favorite lines were-
too good to remain discrete, I'm in love with the words
my prom date was the coolest 'cause clutching's a verb

her touching returned (with a simile aching to bust)
our tounges were holding tight like embracing a hug!

the crew for hire? we're levitatin'.. suggestive to get up
writers writing for power? go'n spit from ya head once...

cool shit n in a sense this just as good as your regular drops, im going to vote this for hof as its the best iv read so far lol (but then that dsnt always say much about OM)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...406/index.html

[Ink Poyzin]

this shit been up for six days, how did i miss it, damn. i'm sorry, dude. this was a dope piece. i found it quite creative, too.. it was clearly thought out from beginning to end, so good structuring. i hate pieces where the structures are horrible. it destroys a great read completely. the r-scheme and multi's were setup nicely, which really gave this one hell of a flow. i really have nothing bad to say about any of this actually... a great piece, man. i enjoyed it alot.

unlikely, but proof.. that we aren't what we seem
we take that food for thought, 'cause we are what we eat

this was awesome wordplay, diggin it.
these motherfuckin' sleepers need to wake up.

[Wordz AhGod.]

still wack...

..and you don't know how to RTF you pussyhole.

[Genocide]

ya, pretty tyte dog. the whole piece flowed nice -had its ups and downs concerning lines i liked and lines i didnt like. i would quote -but its late homie. just wanted to knock your piece up (no homo) --nasty as always.. when ugonna dumpsuntin more viscious -im looking for raw instead of poetic from u. lets have it homie!!