Lady Friend

[Engivale]

I sit sober to switch over to Bitch know your Role,
This Shit's over my whole soul is a Big Ogre,
Yea, The Monster, I'm alcohol's anonymous sponsor,
And I can't stand being synonymous with this drama much longer,
So I swallow my feelings one shot at a time,
Philosophy's gotten me nothing, that part of me's partially blind,
Each artery's line connects to a heart, but,
I can't get my engine for love to ever start up,
Part Human, Part what? What am I really?
I must be alive cuz I just sliced myself up and I'm bleeding,
Eyes shut but I'm seeing --- the Picture the Noise makes,
Living is Shivering --- lip quivers, her voice shakes,
Two moist lakes her eyes become --- she lies, I'm done,
She tries but I tell her our lives aren't just for fun,
What's done is done --- we'll never be the same again,
Baby, when you stop being my boo you're my Lady Friend...

Well, look at you, you push me I pushed you too,
Coochy Coo - Bitch that was the last shit you'll put me through,
Whoopsy Doo, You called me I called back,
Just when I'm out of love you want me to Fall back,
Yea, you're all that, that's why so many guys want you,
You lost me, I could care less what you've gone through,
Your actions define you, The ones you wish I was blind to,
The expressionless text messages and your venomous feminist mind, too!
Take that, Fuck your meaning of payback,
How could I stay with a woman that hates rap?
I'm the most talented person you'll ever be with,
But it's lurking beneath with every uncertainty's secret,
Baby I'm a freak with the pen and the paper,
I ended it now so you couldn't have ended it later,
So since it's a favor could I ask for one back from you?
This is actually true --- I want you to forget me and be happy, Boo.

[Engivale]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...998/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...091/index.html

[Bruklor]

Baby I'm a freak with the pen and the paper,
I ended it now so you couldn't have ended it later,



Dope!

[sintense]

fire!
this whole rhyme was dope, decent flow, on point use of words, real good multis. fire!

Part Human, Part what? What am I really?
I must be alive cuz I just sliced myself up and I'm bleeding,
Eyes shut but I'm seeing --- the Picture the Noise makes,
Living is Shivering --- she quivers, her voice shakes,

dope!

[Soule]

Holy fuck dude, I am going to drink before I write from now on. You drunk mastermind. Wording was really good in this piece, and I really enjoyed the rhymescheme and flow. I read this outloud in class and all my friends were like 'wow! that's fucking awesome!' The concept was cool, I actually can relate right now which makes it even better dude. Emotion was great, imagery was solid. Dope as fuck read, probably my favorite from you so far. Also, amazing ending.

[Possible]

I ended it now so you couldn't have ended it later,


Like that, just went by the same philosophy breth...keep on keepin on

[Engivale]

I was sober when I wrote this. For once. LoL.

It's funny. The end of this has actually caused me to not drink. This is my rhyme-therapy from the end of something that had been very good for a while for me.

It sucks, but at least I'm old enough now to realize when things won't work. It hurts but with age... gets easier to fall out of love, I guess... The heart is hardened.

Kinda sad and surprising how easily I cut my emotions on this one. Used to be a girl would have to chase me off with a chainsaw to get me to leave her alone.

[Josh M.]

The first set was kinda boring. Wasn't feelin' it much. That's about it for that.

Second set was MAD fire! Shit had so much emotion and passion in it

Well, look at you, you push me I pushed you too,
Coochy Coo - Bitch that was the last shit you'll put me through,
Whoopsy Doo, You called me I called back,
Just when I'm out of love you want me to Fall back,

That was some Eminem type shit man. Makes you sound crazy as fuck.

Your actions define you, The ones you wish I was blind to,
The expressionless text messages and your venomous feminist mind, too!

Multis were real dope on this. Killed this part.

Baby I'm a freak with the pen and the paper,
I ended it now so you couldn't have ended it later,
So since it's a favor could I ask for one back from you?
This is actually true --- I want you to forget me and be happy, Boo.

You ended it tough, man.



This shit would be beyond great if the first set didn't bore me. But ABSOLUTELY killed the second half. Good shit.

[Damz]

Yea, The Monster, I'm alcohol's anonymous sponsor,
And I can't stand being synonymous with this drama much longer,
So I swallow my feelings one shot at a time,
Philosophy's gotten me nothing, that part of me's partially blind,
Each artery's line connects to a heart, but,
I can't get my engine for love to ever start up,

Dope bars man, Your whole drop was completely amazing, I'm printing this out,
I have this girl im in mad in love with and this just completes it perfectly. Amazing drop

[STACKSSS]

Nice from start to finish

[yungskeeme]

That was hot. I really liked the wordplay and vocabulary you used. This part really got me

sit sober to switch over to Bitch know your Role,
This Shit's over my whole soul is a Big Ogre,
Yea, The Monster, I'm alcohol's anonymous sponsor,
And I can't stand being synonymous with this drama much longer,
So I swallow my feelings one shot at a time,
Philosophy's gotten me nothing, that part of me's partially blind,
Each artery's line connects to a heart, but,
I can't get my engine for love to ever start up,

nice man

[sILLable]

well were to start......i liked the entire thing so i wont quote any bars,very emotion filled,i loved your wording,multis were phenomenal,a real gem.....both your heartbreak and spite were very evident....

Eyes shut but I'm seeing --- the Picture the Noise makes,
Living is Shivering --- lip quivers, her voice shakes,
Two moist lakes her eyes become --- she lies, I'm done,

i lied about not quoting anything...i really dig this part...it was all flawless to me,i have no complaints,this piece was well polished and a very solid read,as usual a very enjoyable read from the notorious ENG....keep droppin dope.1

[Engivale]

Thanks for the feed, all. Last up and I'll get to some RTF's tomo.

[phillyrider807]

Well, look at you, you push me I pushed you too,
Coochy Coo - Bitch that was the last shit you'll put me through,
Whoopsy Doo, You called me I called back,

Loved the word play. Def should be recorded.

[phillyrider807]

Well, look at you, you push me I pushed you too,
Coochy Coo - Bitch that was the last shit you'll put me through,
Whoopsy Doo, You called me I called back,

Loved the word play. Def should be recorded.