Wordz AhGod - What we whent through.

[Wordz AhGod.]

War does not determine who is right - only who is left. ~Bertrand Russell

What We Whent Through..



1954, I was just 16 livin with momma in Chicago
The city didn't sleep and the girls always followed
Workin at Giordano's flippin pizzas and making quarters
Met my sweet heart there, she was my neighbors' daughter
Flashy hair and muscle cars, we was dancing through the night
February 2nd, 1957 we were pronounced husband and wife
I got an apartment downtown and said goodbye to my fam
But by 1961 Pres. Kennedy drafted me to fight in Vietnam



We Watched em' on the box, as he prepared to address the public
And during his Inaugural Speech, he made sure to address the subject
I remember him pledge to pay any price and bear any burden
Nixon warned him before hand, he would destroy man and hurt em'
But Pres. Kennedy was set, his mind was for liberty
Most of us got drafted and very few went willingly
I was on my way to serve, my wife became a nurse to help
He stood for freedom back home.. I stood in the mouth of hell
I was basically trained, haven't seen my Bonnie in months
We talked about having babies, maybe a girl and 2 sons



Now Im in a cargo plane just nervous with a small platoon
The weathers gotten worse and heard we should be arriving soon
The Lieutenants sitting to my right shouting landing orders
He says our mission'll be taking place along side the borders
The winds blowing so hard I can barely hear a word
He says to check our gear, my fear starts to get worst
In a way Im anxious, I've been training for this very day
So I tighten my LVV and account for my rounds and grenades
The first day was the worst, not knowing what to expect
We got intel that enemies were closing, and its been days since I slept
Frostbite was taking over, food was low as we waited for supplies
Some of the guys we're saying that they were just waitin for us to die



Sgt. Fripp would take charge and have us patrol through out the south
We were spread out through Cambodia, practically in Lions mouth
November 22, 1963.. we heard the news while gooks came at us
President Kennedy was shot dead while driving through Dallas
Vice President Johnson took over, he thought to expand
Said Vietnam was just a small piece of the much bigger plan
So as we chopped through trees and Vietnamese
We lost more troops till it came down to me
I was promoted to Sgt. and had get into things quick
Rainbow agents where sprayed up above and down below troops were sick
There was talk of Nuclear warfare, and we were in the center
I've been here so long, I'm wondering if I'll leave this place ever
1965 I was discharged medically and destroyed mentally
We were in the trenches, sending rounds down to the enemies



A grenade landed at our feet, Private James was the first to notice
Before I could pull him out, he jumped on the grenade and it exploded
I was hit by shrapnel along side my arms and legs
But the fight continued, the Captain took a round to the side of his head
I was med-evacted out and chances of returning wasn't likely
Met my wife at the rear, and I knew she barely recognized me
We suffered from issues.. flash backs of places
I felt my sanity slip away, and be replaced by illusions of faces
My wife and I moved to the Carolinas and tried to live but oddly
The war stuck with me... through my first sons Terrible Palsy.
I became sicker each day, that's how the chemical agents affected me
Blacking out every so often, till it started messing with my memory
Bonnie my dear, I know I wont be growin old with you
But if I could take anything from this world, it'd be the first day I kissed you
Rememberin the names of each troop, the looks in their eyes bring pain
I can still recall the villagers in huts, burning inside with flames
We did bad things for our country.. everything was for survival
1975 I was taken to Hillcrest Memorial Hospital and pronouned dead on arrival

To my dear Bonnie I leave these memories of me, though painful at times
I want you to know I love you and my heart has never left your side..

- SSgt Molnar, Frankie - 1975 R.I.P.

[Wordz AhGod.]

I will add the links in tomorrow. sorry.

[PHARMACIST]

that shit is fuckin dope you really did your homework for this piece great imagery didnt need the pics without them the whole verse described enough to give you the mental picture of being away from home in the midst of battle just being forced to leave unwillingly and to fight a fight that should of never took place \

really deep man had me into it all the way through it never really fell off the more i read the more i kept wanting to read sucks that it ended

stay up keep droppin man

[Speed Ice]

DAMN - I read it through and through.Serious dope stuff!It ran before my eyes like a movie .You write beautifully.Flow was intact throughout.Upping more work.You the Storty-Teller Man

[Kapital J]

you could like get away wit dis in school lol. i learned a lil bit from dis peice...jsut a lil bit lol

[Wordz AhGod.]

Thanks a lot... lost a bit of sleep writing it too. up.

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-399476.html
Letter to "God" - me & Jonathon.. hit that ish up brutha..



this was actually quite dope as far as the storyline goes.. you illustrated shit PERFECTLY.. there were a few minor spelling errors here and there but you probably don't give a shit about that so I won't dock ya for it.. the first half wasn't as entertaining to me as the 2nd half but history never has been my favorite thing to read about haha.. the 2nd half tho had me hooked even harder as I read on.. shit was pretty dope.. the flow was there. could've been improved but I think had you improved the flow then you wouldn't have been able to paint a picture as dope as you did.. so maybe it's good you didn't utilize a more mechanized flow here.. definitely a dope story though.. sad ending like most war stories, but still pretty entertaining compared to most shit being dropped around these parts right now. props..

- Cry

[Wordz AhGod.]

up.

[Issue]

up.

Don't up if ya don't have any links for the piece man

[Wordz AhGod.]

i have 2 links already, one by cry and one by pharmacy but i cant copy and paste at the moment cos im doing all this on my cellphone.

[Issue]

i have 2 links already, one by cry and one by pharmacy but i cant copy and paste at the moment cos im doing all this on my cellphone.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ck-399284.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-399476.html


^^ So it doesn't get closed on you, return the favour sometime

[Wordz AhGod.]

erased.

[Wordz AhGod.]

thanks fam.

[Wordz AhGod.]

updated and finished the story.

[The Seven]

good work dude
i like your respect for these old war vets
i go to va hospital often
and all you see is the after effects
old dudes hobblin with iv trees on wheels
or they sons takin em in to get they medications
its hard to talk to them
but you could get the stories out of them if you pay
the simple pennance of making the approach and asking them
the sadness..the humor.. and the humanity of what they say
is awesome to behold... these vets are a national treasure