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Last edited by Token; March 29th, 2009 at 04:38 PM
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Watch as I wreck the prick, I'll stomp ya mixer and decks to shitOriginally Posted by Eth'Real
Because believe me either way I'm gonna be fucking up ya record bitch
Most unwanted prick in the league and no one's respecting this man
Kidnappers held this bitch for ransom and ended up in debt with his fam
Man I'ma bury ya rhyming, bitch ya consistencies tiring
You should be arrested for putting your best lines in solitary confinement
So I'll vent on this weak fool, his DNA says he can't be cool
I even remember when a lifeguard ordered this bitch out the gene pool
So there's no more cruising I'll maim you, this was as far as your fame grew
You'll get no easy ride now, the medics'll need jaws of life to save you
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
Your crew win? you scammed it, lose limbs n' torso when I rip you
You shoulda quit while you were ahead, but I smashed ya skull into bits too
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
Once upon a time dios lost, then Token rose to be the boss to beat
But to cut a long story short.. ignore his excuses on why he just lost to me........
now gimme my fucking belt
Last edited by Erupt; March 28th, 2009 at 02:42 PM
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bitch ur terrible with forcing, so i'll expose who the worst is
shit, your concepts are such a reach it's no wonder voter's hardly feel your verses
dude aint savvy with the attractive, so i'm hurtin some of his hunches
cuz Com couldn't X a cute one if he was wording one of his punches
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
no one'll search for ur name, u aint honestly imperial
shit, Com's only a tag cuz he's a rip off of quality material
i dont mean to go personal, but ur ugly as fuck n' you know i got you shook right
shit, Com dateable?..
..nah, that's just what his prom date looked like
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
Im drilling fierce fists at ur mouth, you'll get fuckin whored in a burst
Knock all your fillings out so we only have to read 1/4 of your verse
tables have turned, coms now the biggest underdog to ever write
cuz if this bitch was always Bar King.. it's just cuz he's known to never bite
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
the belt stays.
Vs.
Com: very consistent and witty. Just an over all good verse.
fav lines
Most unwanted prick in the league and no one's respecting this man
Kidnappers held this bitch for ransom and ended up in debt with his famSo I'll vent on this weak fool, his DNA says he can't be cool
I even remember when a lifeguard ordered this bitch out the gene poolYo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
eth: good verse, consistent with cool personals and punches. Wording was off on 1 or 2 bars.. but nothing to terrible
fav lines:
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitchi'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger didwe all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
over all// very close battle. kinda hard to judge, but I think in the grand scheme of it, consistency, com came off a bit more consistent.. just enough to edge this battle. Dope showing from the two of you, definitely what i'd expect from a HW match
v/ com
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Man I'ma bury ya rhyming, bitch ya consistencies tiring
You should be arrested for putting your best lines in solitary confinement
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
vs.
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
Im drilling fierce fists at ur mouth, you'll get fuckin whored in a burst
Knock all your fillings out so we only have to read 1/4 of your verse
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
damn.. that was a dope battle. it could really go either way honestly.. i wouldnt be surprised if either of you win. both of yall didnt start out to great, but towards the end of ur verses yall had some nice shit. i think eth had a lil bit more consistency though, so thats who my vote is going to have to go with.
vote - eth
Watch as I wreck the prick, I'll stomp ya mixer and decks to shit
Because believe me either way I'm gonna be fucking up ya record bitch
decent
Most unwanted prick in the league and no one's respecting this man
Kidnappers held this bitch for ransom and ended up in debt with his fam
okay
Man I'ma bury ya rhyming, bitch ya consistencies tiring
You should be arrested for putting your best lines in solitary confinement
coo..
So I'll vent on this weak fool, his DNA says he can't be cool
I even remember when a lifeguard ordered this bitch out the gene pool
lol'ed
So there's no more cruising I'll maim you, this was as far as your fame grew
You'll get no easy ride now, the medics'll need jaws of life to save you
eh..
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
eh, ok.
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
lol
Your crew win? you scammed it, lose limbs n' torso when I rip you
You shoulda quit while you were ahead, but I smashed ya skull into bits too
played ahead shit..
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
lmao.. nice
Once upon a time dios lost, then Token rose to be the boss to beat
But to cut a long story short.. ignore his excuses on why he just lost to me...
coo.. bit ahead of yourself here tho lol
vs
bitch ur terrible with forcing, so i'll expose who the worst is
shit, your concepts are such a reach it's no wonder voter's hardly feel your verses
played
dude aint savvy with the attractive, so i'm hurtin some of his hunches
cuz Com couldn't X a cute one if he was wording one of his punches
aiight
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
lmao I like this...
no one'll search for ur name, u aint honestly imperial
shit, Com's only a tag cuz he's a rip off of quality material
hmm, ok-ish..
i dont mean to go personal, but ur ugly as fuck n' you know i got you shook right
shit, Com dateable?..
..nah, that's just what his prom date looked like
decent
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
coo..
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
lmfao... dope.
Im drilling fierce fists at ur mouth, you'll get fuckin whored in a burst
Knock all your fillings out so we only have to read 1/4 of your verse
nice hit..
tables have turned, coms now the biggest underdog to ever write
cuz if this bitch was always Bar King.. it's just cuz he's known to never bite
eh..
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
hahaha, lol.
pretty much even on the quoteables I suppose.. I gotta edge eth here tho, I laughed a bit harder at his best lines more than I did at COM's..
vote Eth'real
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
vs
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
Im drilling fierce fists at ur mouth, you'll get fuckin whored in a burst
Knock all your fillings out so we only have to read 1/4 of your verse
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
Com came pretty stale here... not much wit and pretty played. A couple of nice punches, but everything else was bland.
Eth had more quotables. His misses were pretty weak however. Decent wording....
v/Eth
AI
Watch as I wreck the prick, I'll stomp ya mixer and decks to shit
Because believe me either way I'm gonna be fucking up ya record bitch
Decent personal..
So there's no more cruising I'll maim you, this was as far as your fame grew
You'll get no easy ride now, the medics'll need jaws of life to save you
Cool concept but it definitly coulda been done alot better..
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
LOL, ok.. but you definitly shoulda included somethin about Fruit Loops in the setup..
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
LMAO, nice..
Vs
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
LOL, good..
no one'll search for ur name, u aint honestly imperial
shit, Com's only a tag cuz he's a rip off of quality material
Decent.. nothing too specail tho..
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
Haha, nice..
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
LMAO, funny, cool finisher..
Ok so this COULD really go either way.. ya'll both were pretty even in my mind.. both had 4 bars that caught my eye.. so overall, it comes down to quality, not quantity.. n I felt like Eth had FEWER things he coulda done to make those 4 nice bars better.. so again, this was REALLY close but I'ma have to say..
\\//ote: Eth'Real by a cunt hair..
P.S:
I told you I'm an honest voter Smoka.. if I wasn't, don't you think I woulda made some bullshit up n gave COM my vote?? cuz it was EASILY close enuff to pull off a fake vote.. anyway, I hope peeps are actually being honest here and not just voting for their crew member.. cuz fairness n honesty is what this league needs before peeps fuck it up with this crew shit.. n this vote right here is a perfect example of honesty..........
Last edited by Barcotic; March 28th, 2009 at 10:02 PM
This battle was great.
COM came legendary in this.. Really think he's getting mad underrated in the voting here... he smashed that shit. Well done mr COM, I really thought you had fell off for good. I was extremely wrong.
Toke.. Dope verse, good to see the consistancy.. I mentioned some rewording that I see you chose not to do, and I think one of the voters pointed that out.. The were a couple of lines that didn't hit right due to wording.. N' being that COM came so dope, it was just enough for him to edge it.
However, DOPE battle.
V/COM
lmao...Nowhere near
Com..
the gene pool line was the only one that stood out to me
Eth..
every almost every line after that x a cute line was nice..
My Fave was the booted out the league line lol..
vote Eth
BAD BITCH STATUS
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So I'll vent on this weak fool, his DNA says he can't be cool
I even remember when a lifeguard ordered this bitch out the gene pool
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
I thought that was dope
those bars stood out to me....had a couple lines in ya verse i wasnt feeling though...but overall a good drop
v.s
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
NICE^
no one'll search for ur name, u aint honestly imperial
shit, Com's only a tag cuz he's a rip off of quality material
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
well I got eth by one quotable here....close battle
but I gotta go with token i enjoyed his verse more
Vote-Token
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
Man I'ma bury ya rhyming, bitch ya consistencies tiring
You should be arrested for putting your best lines in solitary confinement
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
Once upon a time dios lost, then Token rose to be the boss to beat
But to cut a long story short.. ignore his excuses on why he just lost to me......
good wording, some concepts were fresh, other's were hit and miss. I was feeling the setups of the quotes i listed a couple funny bars man
vs
dude aint savvy with the attractive, so i'm hurtin some of his hunches
cuz Com couldn't X a cute one if he was wording one of his punches
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
harsher punches, some funny wp, the combo with the nameplay was nice. pretty nice setups, good read.
v/Ethreal
GreaterDesignGrowers.com
Im not a rapper, im a gardener
Com-
Watch as I wreck the prick, I'll stomp ya mixer and decks to shit
Because believe me either way I'm gonna be fucking up ya record bitch
coo.
Most unwanted prick in the league and no one's respecting this man
Kidnappers held this bitch for ransom and ended up in debt with his fam
okay.
Man I'ma bury ya rhyming, bitch ya consistencies tiring
You should be arrested for putting your best lines in solitary confinement
meh.
So I'll vent on this weak fool, his DNA says he can't be cool
I even remember when a lifeguard ordered this bitch out the gene pool
seen similiar.
So there's no more cruising I'll maim you, this was as far as your fame grew
You'll get no easy ride now, the medics'll need jaws of life to save you
haha.
Yo Coop was stupid as fuck... and apparently Cry ain't fat
I've been through thick and thin to get here now I'm gonna smash through wack
wasn't feelin this
I'm taking the belt I demand it, I'm smashing this bitch he can't stand it
So Toke just follow your nose.... across the room where it landed
nice.
Your crew win? you scammed it, lose limbs n' torso when I rip you
You shoulda quit while you were ahead, but I smashed ya skull into bits too
na.
Bitch I'ma slap ya, since you been gone there's dudes that can snap ya
So you can talk till you're blue in the face but you'll NEVER be him in stature
nice again.
Once upon a time dios lost, then Token rose to be the boss to beat
But to cut a long story short.. ignore his excuses on why he just lost to me
closer coulda been better. this was simple.
vs.
Eth-
bitch ur terrible with forcing, so i'll expose who the worst is
shit, your concepts are such a reach it's no wonder voter's hardly feel your verses
ok.
dude aint savvy with the attractive, so i'm hurtin some of his hunches
cuz Com couldn't X a cute one if he was wording one of his punches
kinda forced imo.
ur just a pussy, and to think u can beat me you must be on some shit
& I ain't gotta incorporate a pause in this line to present that, comma, bitch
haha.
no one'll search for ur name, u aint honestly imperial
shit, Com's only a tag cuz he's a rip off of quality material
meh.
i dont mean to go personal, but ur ugly as fuck n' you know i got you shook right
shit, Com dateable?..
..nah, that's just what his prom date looked like
okay.
i'll connect a punch to your dome, bitch you know i'ma hurt ya kid
& leave you with more loose screws than the failure of the merger did
coo.
you've never entertained us, ur just a stout of the weak
shit, if we ever get a kick out of Com.. it's cuz he booted someone outta the league
eh.
Im drilling fierce fists at ur mouth, you'll get fuckin whored in a burst
Knock all your fillings out so we only have to read 1/4 of your verse
dope.
tables have turned, coms now the biggest underdog to ever write
cuz if this bitch was always Bar King.. it's just cuz he's known to never bite
liked this one.
we all dread your verses, you dont belong here in fact kid
you're just the burden of the league.. minus the decent punches and irish accent
coo flip.
This was a nice battle. both came pretty solid. it seemed pretty even.. but I didn't like com's last punch or two that much. and eth ended strong and was a tad more consistant throughout.
v/eth.
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