W2 Heavyweight Title: Champ Quotient [1-0] VS Avalon [1-0]

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~Link To Rules Thread~

[Brandon Heat]

OH SHIT... Merk Squad vs Merk Squad..? This should be a fuckin nice battle here people...




Get ready...





Avalon...

[AxL is God]

Ha ha. Here we go right here. Good luck fellow Merk member. .

[Brandon Heat]

Let's get this done by tomorrow... I don't wanna make these kids wait naw mean..?

30 lines... max... Don't know what I'm gonna do... *shrugs shoulders...* might do 2 lines... might do 30... depends on how I feel later...


Good luck...


Avalon...

[AxL is God]

Aiight dog. I'll just drop whenever you do and match ya. Good luck man. Merk Squad is in this.

[Brandon Heat]

Let's go... 1 line = 1 bar...




Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...
I'm hostin vital scripts that corrode the hopes inside'a kids
..couldnt make a name for yourself.. so Av provided it...
so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...
you're history dunn.. it's the truth kid.. this victor is heartless
after thanks are given for replies submitted... Q'll no show quicker than Evolve did...
when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...
this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...
ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...
so practice tactics.. I'm usin full force to slice this cunt
once I get this party started.. Av's pull cards 'n spikin the Punch...
fools'll get deaded when Professor Av is schoolin contestants
I'll make you play Russian roulette wit the bullets you sweated...
this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...
Av is the realest with.. rhymes.. so expect me to kill this bitch
way I shut this dummy up you'll think Av's a ventriloquist...
I'll fold-this-fuck & whoever said Him was nice as me
..& after I show-his-blood.. I'll make Hemocyte to see...
this guy's a jock.. face the tyrant & move in a state of violence
you & ya crew are nothin but mimes so I'mma break the silents...
showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league...



GOD DAMN..!


30 lines...


Good luck...


*walks out...*

[AxL is God]

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
I came into this match expecting something but it's all the same
. . Merk Squad blows like a storm, but I'm Rocking You Like A Hurricane//
I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
. . And I'd say I'm a fan of your work man. . but I don't sport an Ava//
Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Av was never in Superb, but it always fronts on Average//
I'm not a net thug but just wait until lead hits
. . Yea I guess that line was dope, at least until I read it//
Avalon is ok but still I stand before him, Quo is tops
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//
Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//
I'll be walking away from this battle. . after Avalon is in a hearse
. . This battle was as miss-matched as the lines I write in my verse//
Avalon is really putting his nose the grind, until I make it as smooth as slate
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//
Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//
Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

[Turtle Nek teddy]

I liked this battle It was very good....good on both parts heres my summary...

Av-Ya verse waz nice...i liked it...mah fav line:
Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

^^^Loved it....anotha of mah fav linez:
so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...
^^^^^Wow....

so ya overall rating..........is........7.5/10
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Quot-I liked ya verse, i fount it very raw and creative...mah fav lines:
Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
^^^^^^^^^RAW!!!!!.....

anotha fav line:
Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//
^^^^^^^^^SICK.......

well everything was very Well structured...bars were alil stretched.but the raw punches made up for it...Overall........8.7/10
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Vote- Quotient


-½-

[Baxter D. Wall]

DAMN! you both tore this shit up. too close to call

[Criminal Intent]

Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//

i really loved those right there, The wordplay was hittin and it was hittin hard. avalon i didnt like yours cuz ya punches were no where man. It was real plain and it just had flow. Nothin really stood out to me..


Vote

quotient

[Soul Theory]

accidental post, i will edit this with my vote.

[Soul Theory]

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

^^^ tight ass punches


ima have to give this to AValon.

ths was a really close battle and both of u had hard hittin punches, but avalons hard hitters hit just a lil harder.

good ass battle y'all.

[Brandon Heat]

1-1... OH BOY..!

[Evolve]

Both you guys came hard. This was a dope battle. It is really hard to call

Av

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...
this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...
ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

Dope ^^^

Q

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started

Nice

So.... Being as i have to pick one.......................
VOTE: AVALON

[MiC ChEcK]

avalon, not being mean but ya gotta read..its 2-2......

and my vote is......*notice tension*....i think avalon took this....


Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...


^^^nasty lines, wish i coulda thought of em.

vote: Avalon