HW Title: $pitacular (23) vs. Daz (11)

[Vaskez]

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[$pitacular]

I'm going 20 or so.

[Daz]

20 is good.

[Daz]

Spit it's a wrap. Your pockets flat & your bitch didn't ask
I told her por favor she started to suck my dick for a stack
Nigga ya wack. Even ya family likes my stanza's dummy.
Grab me a captive audience
Then kill them cuz you have no ransom money
I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out
See me and your wife are both mad, how could she have you a kid?
Got me wanting to kick the bucket, but then where would your family live?
You know it's over. Hoodlum? Nigga ya pussy you can't cloak the odor
So if you were always in the hood, you was just fixing a broken motor
I'm divine. You might have the league's respect but you could minus mine.
I thought you had penskills too. U did like him & bit line for line
You can spit right? I heard your song nigga that shits trife
Cuz bloody chinky & sly describes your face after our fistfight
Your not a champ. Man I don't know a cats that's wacker
You put out so much garbage, they're renting you out as a trash compacter
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
Why forgive? Your just biden your time. You don't pack no quotes
& like him you'll be secondary when the league casts their vote.

..i'll take that belt.

[$pitacular]

Lmao.




Fuck who ya pretend to be. thinkin you're Superman. then I take it with mine
cuz $pit's your arch enemy.. I'm always fuckin up the shape of your spine
you're below par. ya lines are shit. trust I'll send ya head to the morgue
If you're on point.. I haven't dislodged you from the edge of my sword
thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
dog I'm the man in my marriage. Just like I'ma beast with the scripture
n' If you're bitch ain't ya boss, why you wearin a leash in ya picture?
I'm iller dude.. realer too, this is what a Killer do kid I merk this
n' your hoe wants my dick.. cuz you can't filler like you do with ya verses
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular
get wrangled n' stuck, quit bangin ya stuff, from every angle you suck
n' you better brace yourself.. cuz I'm leavin all your teeth mangled as fuck


Goodnight.

[Attack of the Muff]

Hidden Content:

Spit it's a wrap. Your pockets flat & your bitch didn't ask
I told her por favor she started to suck my dick for a stack
(ehh_
Nigga ya wack. Even ya family likes my stanza's dummy.
Grab me a captive audience
Then kill them cuz you have no ransom money
(ehh )
I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out
(ha)
See me and your wife are both mad, how could she have you a kid?
Got me wanting to kick the bucket, but then where would your family live?
(played..)
You know it's over. Hoodlum? Nigga ya pussy you can't cloak the odor
So if you were always in the hood, you was just fixing a broken motor
(definitely played)
I'm divine. You might have the league's respect but you could minus mine.
I thought you had penskills too. U did like him & bit line for line
(ok)
You can spit right? I heard your song nigga that shits trife
Cuz bloody chinky & sly describes your face after our fistfight
(decent)
Your not a champ. Man I don't know a cats that's wacker
You put out so much garbage, they're renting you out as a trash compacter
(ehh rings of played..but put out some garbage is ok flipsh)
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
(LOL..best line so far)
Why forgive? Your just biden your time. You don't pack no quotes
& like him you'll be secondary when the league casts their vote.
(dope close..second best)

overall pretyy cool verse..had some played shit like kick the bucket and in the hood which was bad..but the last two lines were rofliscious


Fuck who ya pretend to be. thinkin you're Superman. then I take it with mine
cuz $pit's your arch enemy.. I'm always fuckin up the shape of your spine
(cool concept..)
you're below par. ya lines are shit. trust I'll send ya head to the morgue
If you're on point.. I haven't dislodged you from the edge of my sword
( a on point line?...it was slick..but nah at this)
thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
(...no)
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
(LOL)
dog I'm the man in my marriage. Just like I'ma beast with the scripture
n' If you're bitch ain't ya boss, why you wearin a leash in ya picture?
(ha)
I'm iller dude.. realer too, this is what a Killer do kid I merk this
n' your hoe wants my dick.. cuz you can't filler like you do with ya verses
(ok)
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
(ok)
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B
(eh ok)
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular
(wow no..wtf @ this..droppin bars man?)
get wrangled n' stuck, quit bangin ya stuff, from every angle you suck
n' you better brace yourself.. cuz I'm leavin all your teeth mangled as fuck
(ok close)


both verses had alot of played shit..thats for certain

so i got..
daz's jaywalker
extra mile for wifer n kid
biden ur time closer


vs

bob marley
leash
arch enemy


wow 3 vs 3

ima give it to spit on consistency coz other than the 3 hits he was more consistent from lookin at my breakdown


i think its close.. tho
wow @ some of the lines u guys used tho ..flashback from 99 and shit


v/spit

[Born To Kill]

Nice battle here...

Spit it's a wrap. Your pockets flat & your bitch didn't ask
I told her por favor she started to suck my dick for a stack
Coolish, but just ok at the same time...
Nigga ya wack. Even ya family likes my stanza's dummy.
Grab me a captive audience
Then kill them cuz you have no ransom money
Good.
I'm divine. You might have the league's respect but you could minus mine.
I thought you had penskills too. U did like him & bit line for line
Good, but it's been said about Spit before...
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
Haha...niceness...

vs

you're below par. ya lines are shit. trust I'll send ya head to the morgue
If you're on point.. I haven't dislodged you from the edge of my sword
Hehe...
thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
Funny...
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
Hahahahaha...
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
I SWEAR..."Spanish Fly" popped in my head a day or so ago...I'd already dropped against Lay, so I was like...I'll save it for next week...FUCKER!!!
Anyway...nice punch.
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B
Nice...
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular
Hahaha, funny shit...

Well...

I really haven't been vibing with Spit's shit the past few weeks...
Haven't hated it, but just wasn't seeing the freshness and wit I'm used to from him...even if everyone else was still seeing it...I wasn't.

This week, however...ouch.
He hit Daz hard, with wit...and repeatedly.

Daz tried...but it just wasn't enough...kinda not near enough.

Vote: Spit

Peace

[Deon]

v/Spit

this was really close seeing as neither really brought anything fresh to the table this week. Daz had the opener which was worded kinda bleh. coulda made that line nice. his penskills line seemed to be a pretty nice personal and his extra mile line was ok. other than that nothing really stood out to me. captive audience line wasnt worded too great. but you had like 3 majorly played concepts. the kick the bucket, in the hood, trash compactor. Spit came outta the gates played. arch/back line? wow n' it wasnt even flipped fresh. on point was played also, but the flip saved it. helium line was pretty straight forward. hit hard. lol@ marley's daughter. the last time i was in the league i had a line for Daz calling him Brian Grant from the Miami Heat ahha. still funny line. spanish fly was just an insult, no relative setup, hit ok. coulda flipped the leash line better. eric b line was ok. the bars line wasnt original at all, that exact concepts been rehashed to still sound the same for years. closer was ok. like i said, this battle didnt do much for me, the concepts were all pretty dated this week. the original shit didnt get executed well enough.

[Savior Self.]

Hidden Content:

$pitacular

speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter

you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B

(This verse wasn't really that hardhitting like past ones, these bars were okish tho)


Daz

I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out

Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid


(these the two I liked out of here, maaaaaaan this verse was newbish as FUCK I mean a trash ¢ompa¢ter AND an in the hood pun¢h lmmfao, ¢ome on man I know u are better than this)


V/ $pit

[FUNΞRΔL PR∅]

Hidden Content:

Fuck who ya pretend to be. thinkin you're Superman. then I take it with mine
cuz $pit's your arch enemy.. I'm always fuckin up the shape of your spine
^i liked this
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
dog I'm the man in my marriage. Just like I'ma beast with the scripture
n' If you're bitch ain't ya boss, why you wearin a leash in ya picture?
^lmao..
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch




vs.


I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
Why forgive? Your just biden your time. You don't pack no quotes
& like him you'll be secondary when the league casts their vote.


overall/-close battle.. by quotes i got spit winning...good read..

V/-Spit

[Richard Parker]

Not a close battle, spits verse was clearly better. Spit's level of creativity is much higher than Daz's. Specifically, material like Daz's garbage/trash compacter, motor/hood, etc, is not as creative as spit's arch enemy line, for example. Not the best verse from spit either, seemed to slack here.

v/ spit

[Warming]

Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
Why forgive? Your just biden your time. You don't pack no quotes
& like him you'll be secondary when the league casts their vote.

vs

thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B

spit had more quotables and his flips were better on average

v/ spit

[Big Question]

Spit it's a wrap. Your pockets flat & your bitch didn't ask
I told her por favor she started to suck my dick for a stack
Nigga ya wack. Even ya family likes my stanza's dummy.
Grab me a captive audience
Then kill them cuz you have no ransom money
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid


vs

Fuck who ya pretend to be. thinkin you're Superman. then I take it with mine
cuz $pit's your arch enemy.. I'm always fuckin up the shape of your spine
thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
I'm iller dude.. realer too, this is what a Killer do kid I merk this
n' your hoe wants my dick.. cuz you can't filler like you do with ya verses
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular


daz had a few decent hits, spit had more, nothing dope from either but spit was way more consistent

v/spit

[Kenny the G]

Spit it's a wrap. Your pockets flat & your bitch didn't ask
I told her por favor she started to suck my dick for a stack
nah. not feelin
Nigga ya wack. Even ya family likes my stanza's dummy.
Grab me a captive audience
Then kill them cuz you have no ransom money
i liked the idea but it didnt hit hard as a diss to me
I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out
lol.
See me and your wife are both mad, how could she have you a kid?
Got me wanting to kick the bucket, but then where would your family live?
played mayne
You know it's over. Hoodlum? Nigga ya pussy you can't cloak the odor
So if you were always in the hood, you was just fixing a broken motor
dumb old. plus the wording was blah. s'going on daz?
I'm divine. You might have the league's respect but you could minus mine.
I thought you had penskills too. U did like him & bit line for line
ok
You can spit right? I heard your song nigga that shits trife
Cuz bloody chinky & sly describes your face after our fistfight
decent
Your not a champ. Man I don't know a cats that's wacker
You put out so much garbage, they're renting you out as a trash compacter
no
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid
lmao. thats the daz i've been expecting
Why forgive? Your just biden your time. You don't pack no quotes
& like him you'll be secondary when the league casts their vote.
not feelin this biden flip, idk.


Fuck who ya pretend to be. thinkin you're Superman. then I take it with mine
cuz $pit's your arch enemy.. I'm always fuckin up the shape of your spine
ok
you're below par. ya lines are shit. trust I'll send ya head to the morgue
If you're on point.. I haven't dislodged you from the edge of my sword
eh
thinkin you hard? I'm poundin ya quick.. homie get found in a ditch
talkin all gassed up.. but it's helium nigga you just sound like a bitch
lol
speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
ehh. not feelin this one much
dog I'm the man in my marriage. Just like I'ma beast with the scripture
n' If you're bitch ain't ya boss, why you wearin a leash in ya picture?
lmao. nice jab
I'm iller dude.. realer too, this is what a Killer do kid I merk this
n' your hoe wants my dick.. cuz you can't filler like you do with ya verses
nah
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
ok, humorous
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B
ok personal
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular
smooth wording helped the punch out imo. made it real slick
get wrangled n' stuck, quit bangin ya stuff, from every angle you suck
n' you better brace yourself.. cuz I'm leavin all your teeth mangled as fuck
eh


i cant lie, i expected more from both sides. for the most part daz came unusually played, dont know if he rushed/didnt care/choked, but whatever the case spit one this on consistency. it wasnt one of his better drops imo, but enough to overpower daz.

v/spit

[Automatic.]

I'm a cannon dunny. You get no pity for what you speak about
your pops was a jay walker too..both of them left before the week was out
Dickrider. Don't say you didn't get hyped, you did.
Spend so much time on meters...
You won't go the extra mile for your wife and kid

vs.

speakin of which.. the fuck is this kid? look your avy for starters
I've faced some odd cats. but I never thought I'd battle Bob Marley's daughter
dog I'm the man in my marriage. Just like I'ma beast with the scripture
n' If you're bitch ain't ya boss, why you wearin a leash in ya picture?
you gotta drug bitches for pussy.. so please just stop with the shots
nigga you liked spanish fly, until ya gardener beat you off of his crotch
got to spit in a studio, ooh wow YOU AINT A RAPPER I ain't carin freak
why you speakin on East vs West? we know you went down South on Eric B
should be arrested for those played lines. But even the cops ain't stoppin ya
cuz you'll be droppin bars in jail showers that'll make you hella popular

i think spit got this pretty easily. wasn't feelin a few of daz's concepts. seemed like a lot was filler. oh well, nice battle anyways

v/ spit