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hey man. 16-20? good luck dude.
Last edited by phlymo; May 26th, 2008 at 03:12 PM
ya sounds good man, gl
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i’ll smash you up against the bricks, fuck leaving me scarred
we’d only see john with phly on the wall in documentaries about retards
n’ you could only get an ugly bitch, quit the damn excuses
ya girl’s got such a dogsbody it makes up for the fact her man’s useless
plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
plus you dress like a fag, and celebrate when nailing men
guys see ya bask in victory, n’ the less special corsets when you fail again
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
n’ your runs at the top make the stats look appalling john
com should try to hide your stretches, like you do with that smaller font
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
i went 20. good luck man
Last edited by phlymo; May 30th, 2008 at 07:37 PM
Hens -2 votes
but extension till tonight granted
Originally Posted by Me last week
^I lied,
Philly's the real contender. So my chances of gettin killed are slim.
I take it back Phly, YOU'D have to add a couple letters to ya name to be as il as him.
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
I murder wack writers, it's obvious that you're lacking in text.
If you put up ya Phly-paper.. i'll leave ya hangin' from the ceiling, attracting insects.
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
I'll hit ya limbs with a machete, since u have a rep that is minimal.
And it'll have a Disarming effect that could help police take weapons from criminals.
As far as bein the best at flippin lines, he's either equal or better.
But his concepts DO unify.. cuz they're the result of mixing different people together.
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
Fuck your stretched wordplay, it'll just blow up with no course.
But you DID bring everything you have.. cuz ya concepts usually show up in full Force.
Take a picture of a real champion. Ya shit's known to stay in the trash.
Like a disposable camera.. i'll use you and then fuckin' throw you away in a flash.
pz.
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cool battle ya'll 2.. Both came fresh n funny.. phly i like the dogsbody n popinjay n corset alot.. John i like the anal the concentration n the full force alot.. But overall John broguht more heat
- I Put on for my city thats a motha`fuckin fact -
full breakdown, you can thank me later....
i’ll smash you up against the bricks, fuck leaving me scarred
we’d only see john with phly on the wall in documentaries about retards
^^nah this was kinda long-winded and indirect 4
n’ you could only get an ugly bitch, quit the damn excuses
ya girl’s got such a dogsbody it makes up for the fact her man’s useless
^^haha kinda funny 7
plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
^^ROFL, a lot of dudes wont get this, but to me this is like one of the best lines this season. ROFL. they gotta know that Check is Nick James and he bragged about his std's lmao. 10
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
^^very well worded, not the hardest diss, but yeah pretty solid 8
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
^^nice 9
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
^^aight, spit style punch 7
plus you dress like a fag, and celebrate when nailing men
guys see ya bask in victory, n’ the less special corsets when you fail again
^^see what u tried but dont really get the victory reference 5
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
^^huh? plus your flow was choppy feigning-to-block-me, straining-to-be-cocky, syllable match is off 3
n’ your runs at the top make the stats look appalling john
com should try to hide your stretches, like you do with that smaller font
^^simple but well-worded, quite clever 7
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
^^sligthly predictable but couldnt have worded it better myself, so yeah pretty solid 8
68/100
vs.
^I lied,
Philly's the real contender. So my chances of gettin killed are slim.
I take it back Phly, YOU'D have to add a couple letters to ya name to be as il as him.
^^naaah, this comes across weak after sayin that, plus it's predictable after seeing the quote 4
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
^^creative, not that hard though 5
I murder wack writers, it's obvious that you're lacking in text.
If you put up ya Phly-paper.. i'll leave ya hangin' from the ceiling, attracting insects.
^^haha, nice 9
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
^^lol 7
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
^^yeah not too bad 6
I'll hit ya limbs with a machete, since u have a rep that is minimal.
And it'll have a Disarming effect that could help police take weapons from criminals.
^^kinda played feel to it 5
As far as bein the best at flippin lines, he's either equal or better.
But his concepts DO unify.. cuz they're the result of mixing different people together.
^^aight 5
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
^^lmao 9
Fuck your stretched wordplay, it'll just blow up with no course.
But you DID bring everything you have.. cuz ya concepts usually show up in full Force.
^^nah, force wordplays are pretty played out 4
Take a picture of a real champion. Ya shit's known to stay in the trash.
Like a disposable camera.. i'll use you and then fuckin' throw you away in a flash.
^^not feelin it 4
man after rating it in words this is mad hard to vote on, I'ma go back and drop how I feel in numbers, marks outa 10
58/100
wow, so yeah looks like I got phlymo takin it. dammit I wanted to vote against him for once, dudes gonna get too cocky with an undefeated season lmao
v/phlymo
Last edited by Vaskez; June 1st, 2008 at 05:56 PM
i’ll smash you up against the bricks, fuck leaving me scarred
we’d only see john with phly on the wall in documentaries about retards
I KINDA SAW IT COMIN, PLUS IVE SEEN SHIT LOADS OF PHLY PLAYS PAST FEW WEEKS, I LIKED THE IDEA BUT IT SEEMED ALMOST PLAYED IF YOU GET ME
n’ you could only get an ugly bitch, quit the damn excuses
ya girl’s got such a dogsbody it makes up for the fact her man’s useless
HEH, KINDA COOL THIS WAS BETTER
plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
PRETTY GOOD HIT, NICK HAVING STDS IS VERY COMMON IN VERSES NOW BUT YOU FLIPPED IT COOL
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
I LIKED THIS, MOSTLY DUE TO THE FRESH WORDPLAY YOU USED ON HIS NAME, FRESH SHIT
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
COOL
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
COOL, SAW IT COMIN BUT NICELY WORDED
plus you dress like a fag, and celebrate when nailing men
guys see ya bask in victory, n’ the less special corsets when you fail again
WORDING WAS AWKWARD, IGET IT THO DUDE WEARS AND BASK IN VICTORY AND A CORSET IN FAILURE. BUT YA WORDING WITH THE LESS SPECIAL REFERENCE MADE IT HARD FOR ME TO GET THIS. BUT STILL FRESH BUT NOT THAT HARD HITTIN
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
I DONT GET WHAT A POPINJAY IS. POPPIN J.HENS?, WHATS THE SPIT STRAINING ABOUT? LOL
n’ your runs at the top make the stats look appalling john
com should try to hide your stretches, like you do with that smaller font
HA. STR8
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
LIKED IT, AT FIRST I THOUGHT IT WAS A BIT FORCED COZ I DID NOT KNOW STUPEFY WAS A WORD BUT YEAH I GOOGLED IT LOL, COOL
VS
^I lied,
Philly's the real contender. So my chances of gettin killed are slim.
I take it back Phly, YOU'D have to add a couple letters to ya name to be as il as him.
LIKE I SAID BOUT PHLYMOS PHLY PUNCH, SEEMS ITS GETTIN OLD ALREADY, BUT YEAH I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT ANYHOW
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
I LIKED THIS ITS ONE OF THOSE PUNCHES WHICH YOUVE GOTTA COMMEND EVEN THO ITS NOT DIRECT IT WAS CREATIVE
I murder wack writers, it's obvious that you're lacking in text.
If you put up ya Phly-paper.. i'll leave ya hangin' from the ceiling, attracting insects.
STOP WITH THE PHLY PUNCHES LOL, HAVING SAID THAT WORDING WAS NICE & SO WAS THE IDEA SO STILL PRETTY COOL
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
ROFL, LIKED IT, CLOWNING TYPE GOOD OLD FUNNY ASS PUNCH.
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
DECENT
I'll hit ya limbs with a machete, since u have a rep that is minimal.
And it'll have a Disarming effect that could help police take weapons from criminals.
NAH, NOT FEELIN THIS TYPE OF PUNCH, SIMPLE
As far as bein the best at flippin lines, he's either equal or better.
But his concepts DO unify.. cuz they're the result of mixing different people together.
OK I GUESS
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
LOL
Fuck your stretched wordplay, it'll just blow up with no course.
But you DID bring everything you have.. cuz ya concepts usually show up in full Force.
THAT WOULD BE DOPE IF I HADNT SEEN NUMEROUS FORCE WORDPLAYS
Take a picture of a real champion. Ya shit's known to stay in the trash.
Like a disposable camera.. i'll use you and then fuckin' throw you away in a flash.
NOT FEELIN, FORCED THE WORDPLAY A BIT TO TIE CAMERA IN WITH FLASH IMO.
TO BE HONEST WHEN I FIRST SCANNED THROUGH THE VERSES I FELT PHLY CAME WITH HIS FRESH WORDPLAY STUFF AND HENS CAME WITH HIS USUAL POLISHED VERSE. HOWEVE BREAKING IT DOWN I SEE I HAVE PHLY ON TOP, A FEW OF JOHNS LINES WERNT AS CREATIVE TO ME.
PHLYMO JUST HAD MORE QUOTABLES AND A FRESHER VERSE IMO.
V/PHLYLMO
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i’ll smash you up against the bricks, fuck leaving me scarred
we’d only see john with phly on the wall in documentaries about retards
(not bad)
n’ you could only get an ugly bitch, quit the damn excuses
ya girl’s got such a dogsbody it makes up for the fact her man’s useless
(creative here)
plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
(didn't get it until reading Vaskez' breakdown, but cool, with clean wording)
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
(i liked this a lot, but there's something slightly off in the wording. still, cool one)
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
(hah, this is something i'd use. pretty cool)
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
(yeah, direct hit)
plus you dress like a fag, and celebrate when nailing men
guys see ya bask in victory, n’ the less special corsets when you fail again
(heh. alright, not bad)
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
(eh, i would've done this differently, but i see where you're going)
n’ your runs at the top make the stats look appalling john
com should try to hide your stretches, like you do with that smaller font
(simple straight shot)
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
(damn, you like wordplay more than i do. yeah, nice one, never seen it)
VS
^I lied,
Philly's the real contender. So my chances of gettin killed are slim.
I take it back Phly, YOU'D have to add a couple letters to ya name to be as il as him.
(i actually really liked the idea of you quoting the punch from last week and flipping it back. gives some continuity to the weeks. cool)
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
(i liked the multis in the wording, cool. not a bad idea)
I murder wack writers, it's obvious that you're lacking in text.
If you put up ya Phly-paper.. i'll leave ya hangin' from the ceiling, attracting insects.
(this is one of the better nameplays i've seen recently, clever and hard and all that)
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
(heh, i've done something like this before, but i like it)
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
(heh, yeah.)
I'll hit ya limbs with a machete, since u have a rep that is minimal.
And it'll have a Disarming effect that could help police take weapons from criminals.
(yeah, i'm not feeling this one either. i've also done something similar to this. but the reason i'm not feelin' is it just doesn't feel direct enough)
As far as bein the best at flippin lines, he's either equal or better.
But his concepts DO unify.. cuz they're the result of mixing different people together.
(creative here, just would've changed the wording a bit.)
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
(hah, fresh)
Fuck your stretched wordplay, it'll just blow up with no course.
But you DID bring everything you have.. cuz ya concepts usually show up in full Force.
(like the other voters said, seen it too often for it to be effective)
Take a picture of a real champion. Ya shit's known to stay in the trash.
Like a disposable camera.. i'll use you and then fuckin' throw you away in a flash.
(creative again, you got that part down pat. not that effective for me though)
so, yo, I really liked this battle, and both dudes came impressively strong, especially right on the verge of playoffs. I really think this is pretty much dead even on terms of impact. neither of you had any really personal jabs, but both had good nameplays thrown in there. I think Phly was just a little more consistent freshness-wise, although John had my favorite lines of the battle. anyway, cool read, but
vote - Phlymo
I've got Phly taking this.
He just came fresher to me. Upon the first read, I think he came better last week but still came pretty fresh.
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
^ lotb
Hens came much weaker than I expected. This actually may be the worst verse Ive seen him dropped here. It just seemed sort of rushed and forced. Alot of stuff that was almost predictable which usually isnt the case.
v/Phlymo
phlymo -
i’ll smash you up against the bricks, fuck leaving me scarred
we’d only see john with phly on the wall in documentaries about retards
- hmm this was okay.
n’ you could only get an ugly bitch, quit the damn excuses
ya girl’s got such a dogsbody it makes up for the fact her man’s useless
- lol weird.
plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
- eh i think ive seen a similar variation of this done before, so it doesnt strike me as fresh.. more simple/predictable to me.
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
- lol, funny.
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
- damn ur mind must bend when you write. well worded, liked it.
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
- lol. liked the concept. woulda liked to see a better setup to reference 'earmarked' .. like books or some shit. ;P
plus you dress like a fag, and celebrate when nailing men
guys see ya bask in victory, n’ the less special corsets when you fail again
- eh not so much
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
- never heard of popinjay, i get the reference .. but it wasnt too appealing to me..
n’ your runs at the top make the stats look appalling john
com should try to hide your stretches, like you do with that smaller font
- heh ok
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
- ha nice.
vs
j.hens -
Philly's the real contender. So my chances of gettin killed are slim.
I take it back Phly, YOU'D have to add a couple letters to ya name to be as il as him.
- ehh this didnt work imo.
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
- lol creative.
I murder wack writers, it's obvious that you're lacking in text.
If you put up ya Phly-paper.. i'll leave ya hangin' from the ceiling, attracting insects.
- this was aight. good use of his name, but overall harshness wasnt there.
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
- hahaha, nice misdirection.
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
- eh not so much..
I'll hit ya limbs with a machete, since u have a rep that is minimal.
And it'll have a Disarming effect that could help police take weapons from criminals.
- this kinda came across as simple. i cant quite pinpoint it, but maybe im just gettin too used to the reading style u form ya punches in.. if that makes sense at all..?
As far as bein the best at flippin lines, he's either equal or better.
But his concepts DO unify.. cuz they're the result of mixing different people together.
- hmm this was ok i guess.
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
- lol sickkk
Fuck your stretched wordplay, it'll just blow up with no course.
But you DID bring everything you have.. cuz ya concepts usually show up in full Force.
- nah not feelin.
Take a picture of a real champion. Ya shit's known to stay in the trash.
Like a disposable camera.. i'll use you and then fuckin' throw you away in a flash
- liked the creative connection, but punch was decent overall.
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Quotables
phlymo
my punches scar like tattoos, but I don’t need them to ruin ya
I could save my jabs for men n’ still give this henna transfer to juniors
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
i smack up fools and look for dope heads who can test my shit
n’ i’ve got ya earmarked, your eyes black and your nose off to the left a bit
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
Hens
I'm classed as elite. I'll have you running home fast in retreat.
Have your feet on a dash so long it inspired relaxing techniques in the passenger seat.
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
Welllll i got phly by one more quotable.. and aside from that, i really think that he also was a little more consistent than Hens was. Phly really had the funny factor workin, and his meticulous wording of his crazy concepts really helped him deliver a nice overall verse. Hens wasnt short on creativity either, but the way he worded some of his kinda turned me off of it. Seemed like he had a few too many 'simple' punches/concepts that he attempted to make complex but couldnt imo. This wasnt a blowout by any means, but i think phlymo's creative edge really won this for him. g/l to both, very enjoyable reads.
v. phlymo
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plus your styles sloppy, lines are choppy, I’m ripping this
last time you had your shit in check, he got diagnosed with syphilis
honestly you lack bitch, your title don’t mean shit in practice
if we chart the way the land lies, you’re just on topographs of wackness
it’s a simple kill, wack fuck ain’t even feigning to block me
shit, i’m popinjay so easily spit looks like he’s straining to be cocky
real witty and well worded punch..surprised people missed this. ^
i’ll leave you flat, I’m just amazed you ever held the cup
bitch I would only stupefy…thought you were actually worth helping up
cool wordplay and a real harshness about the wording ^
vs.
Being gay is what he's likely to embrace, so I'll deny him in this race.
I thought his foundation was shaky, but that's how this fag likes to apply it to his face.
It's like he's on lookout, I saw him spying, scopin' with a zoom.
Fuck concentrating. If he's focused on me.. I musta left the curtains open in my room.
simple but I just found this hella funny ^
Try keepin ya sex life confidential, it just worsens when this kid lies.
He has alot of information on anal, but that's because he has a person on the inside.
lmao ^
I got Phly taking this here. Dude produced the best I've seen from him this season; a really consistantly good verse. Hens had alot of simple punches which were covered up by some great wording. I just felt Phly had the more creative and thought-provoking lines which I think make for a great verse. I was tempted to quote a couple more from Phly.. really solid verse man. Props to both of you... nice battle.
v/ Phlymo.
damn this was definately a champ match...not really in the mood for a complete breakdown but both brought heat here...phly had a pretty nice verse throughout..had sine real dope lines but the ones i didn't feel hurt the verse...john came with heat also..and the lines i didn't feel were ok at best so in the end i gotta give it to hens for consitency but honestly overall..i enjoyed this match more than any others i rea this week..definately battle of the week
vote=john
after vote deduction for lateness Phly wins by KO 6-0 +4
Hens -1
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