**HW TITLE** Kenny the G (31) vs. Lay Fear (15)

[Mariah]

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good luck.

[Lay Fear]

checkkk..wat up ken, hows 20 sound.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-9-368527.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368528.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368530.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368525.html

[Kenny the G]

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-3-368529.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368524.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-9-368527.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368528.html

[Lay Fear]

Baxter..you know I don't speak spanish.

[Lay Fear]

Originally Posted By Kenny the G
whoever dubbed you a legend musta gave up on text and said "fuck it"
you're in the hall of fame...giving me a tour of where I'LL be inducted

Haha..Idk whats more hilarious.

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Kennys as lively as they come.
You haven won..your retarded!..in that sight your the best they'll say.
League will think I'm a cereal killer...cuz its obvious your Special K
I gotta hand it to your mom dude. She's got talent with boys, kid.
Giving enuff hand jobs...to provide EVERY homeless in America wit employment.
Deployin poison to cut some dead weight off this fed dike.
Cuz if smiling burns calories..it's pretty evident you musta lived a depressed life.
U'll get left quite, your the worst thing to happen to your parents its hurts.
Best things in life ARE free..n Ken's done nothin but cost money since birth.
Irack points daily..ya failin to dodge the bombs I left blown.
U'kno ur title streak is over, see...when the troops there would rather U be sent home.
Shit, your bronze at best you know it. In this bout you'll be left out cold.
Cuz if silence is golden..it explains why Kenny's never able to keep his mouth closed.
Your time is out, your surrounded with doubt. You ain't doper so quit it.
Cuz you can either pass the torch.....or grasp on to get handed over with it.


18. G'luck man.

[Kenny the G]

fuck lay fear, i lay phobias....


you're about to get a beating so bad that my NEXT opponent's retreating
dont mind my internal rhyme scheme just worry about your internal bleeding
but something's out of the norm, you're confident & feeling like the top gun
of course you're in rare form..i just stomped out of your usual one
the whole objective's to elevate, how how're you not even close to iller
the only change in your verse is the three quarters of it that's filler
you dig up dope concepts from '01 then re-flip 'em, get lost.
true legends live on while it's true legends that you try to live off
dont hate the player- hate the game, better yet hate your coach
kid'll pick & roll, drive the lane and we STILL wont see a Lay up in votes
fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black
i'll embarass you for being wack and always dropping piss poor,
with my foot on the back of your neck & make you lick it up off the floor
i'm already celebrating another title defense at your expense- check it
i'll have a corona and your girl, both bottoms up in a second

[ramcees]

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.
okish...wording was bad
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Kennys as lively as they come.
dope...didnt hit so hard tho
You haven won..your retarded!..in that sight your the best they'll say.
League will think I'm a cereal killer...cuz its obvious your Special K
setup coulda been alil better but DOPE punch
I gotta hand it to your mom dude. She's got talent with boys, kid.
Giving enuff hand jobs...to provide EVERY homeless in America wit
employment.
nope, concept was ight...u just didnt get it right
Deployin poison to cut some dead weight off this fed dike.
Cuz if smiling burns calories..it's pretty evident you musta lived a depressed life.
u contradicted the "Lively" punch...but nice punch, setup coulda been alil better again
U'll get left quite, your the worst thing to happen to your parents its hurts.
Best things in life ARE free..n Ken's done nothin but cost money since birth.
again weak setup, ur punch was too streched NOPE
Irack points daily..ya failin to dodge the bombs I left blown.
U'kno ur title streak is over, see...when the troops there would rather U be sent home.
no
Shit, your bronze at best you know it. In this bout you'll be left out cold.
Cuz if silence is golden..it explains why Kenny's never able to keep his mouth
closed.
okish weak concept
Your time is out, your surrounded with doubt. You ain't doper so quit it.
Cuz you can either pass the torch.....or grasp on to get handed over with it.
okish again weak

vs

you're about to get a beating so bad that my NEXT opponent's retreating
dont mind my internal rhyme scheme just worry about your internal bleeding
ehh ok
but something's out of the norm, you're confident & feeling like the top gun
of course you're in rare form..i just stomped out of your usual one
okish...too basic
the whole objective's to elevate, how how're you not even close to iller
the only change in your verse is the three quarters of it that's filler
okish...again very basic
you dig up dope concepts from '01 then re-flip 'em, get lost.
true legends live on while it's true legends that you try to live off
okish
dont hate the player- hate the game, better yet hate your coach
kid'll pick & roll, drive the lane and we STILL wont see a Lay up in votes
i didnt really get it
fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
DOPE...perfect setup
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black
okish
i'll embarass you for being wack and always dropping piss poor,
with my foot on the back of your neck & make you lick it up off the floor
ehh okish but nothing in it
i'm already celebrating another title defense at your expense- check it
i'll have a corona and your girl, both bottoms up in a second
nice

V/ Lay...kenny u were too basic, i think lay over did it with his phrases, but he had a much more creative verse, ken ur flow was alot better, but overall u were flipping basic concepts only the "FL" one really stood out,i dont see Lay loosing this one

[Orc]

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.
You haven won..your retarded!..in that sight your the best they'll say.
League will think I'm a cereal killer...cuz its obvious your Special K
U'll get left quite, your the worst thing to happen to your parents its hurts.
Best things in life ARE free..n Ken's done nothin but cost money since birth.

--



you're about to get a beating so bad that my NEXT opponent's retreating
dont mind my internal rhyme scheme just worry about your internal bleeding
but something's out of the norm, you're confident & feeling like the top gun
of course you're in rare form..i just stomped out of your usual one
the whole objective's to elevate, how how're you not even close to iller
the only change in your verse is the three quarters of it that's filler
fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black


V/ Kenny, Lay focused too much on cliches - which have been done to death, Kenny came more creative and his lines were worded better, a decent showing from Lay, but Kenny was stronger in the end.

[-Shift-]

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.
ok
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Kennys as lively as they come.
nice
You haven won..your retarded!..in that sight your the best they'll say.
League will think I'm a cereal killer...cuz its obvious your Special K
ok
I gotta hand it to your mom dude. She's got talent with boys, kid.
Giving enuff hand jobs...to provide EVERY homeless in America wit
employment.
i wasn't feeling this
Deployin poison to cut some dead weight off this fed dike.
Cuz if smiling burns calories..it's pretty evident you musta lived a depressed life.
ok
U'll get left quite, your the worst thing to happen to your parents its hurts.
Best things in life ARE free..n Ken's done nothin but cost money since birth.
naw
Irack points daily..ya failin to dodge the bombs I left blown.
U'kno ur title streak is over, see...when the troops there would rather U be sent home.
nu uh man.
Shit, your bronze at best you know it. In this bout you'll be left out cold.
Cuz if silence is golden..it explains why Kenny's never able to keep his mouth
closed.
ok
Your time is out, your surrounded with doubt. You ain't doper so quit it.
Cuz you can either pass the torch.....or grasp on to get handed over with it.
ehh

vs

you're about to get a beating so bad that my NEXT opponent's retreating
dont mind my internal rhyme scheme just worry about your internal bleeding
ok
but something's out of the norm, you're confident & feeling like the top gun
of course you're in rare form..i just stomped out of your usual one
ok
the whole objective's to elevate, how how're you not even close to iller
the only change in your verse is the three quarters of it that's filler
ok
you dig up dope concepts from '01 then re-flip 'em, get lost.
true legends live on while it's true legends that you try to live off
nice
dont hate the player- hate the game, better yet hate your coach
kid'll pick & roll, drive the lane and we STILL wont see a Lay up in votes
lol nice set up and finish
fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
Nice!
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black
ok
i'll embarass you for being wack and always dropping piss poor,
with my foot on the back of your neck & make you lick it up off the floor
ehh
i'm already celebrating another title defense at your expense- check it
i'll have a corona and your girl, both bottoms up in a second
nice

Lay started out good but fell off at the end completely.

v//kenny

[Big Question]

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.
DECENT PERSONAL
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Kennys as lively as they come.
NICE.
You haven won..your retarded!..in that sight your the best they'll say.
League will think I'm a cereal killer...cuz its obvious your Special K
PLAYED TO FCUK
I gotta hand it to your mom dude. She's got talent with boys, kid.
Giving enuff hand jobs...to provide EVERY homeless in America wit employment.
MEH
Deployin poison to cut some dead weight off this fed dike.
Cuz if smiling burns calories..it's pretty evident you musta lived a depressed life.
IS HE FAT? IONO SO NAH
U'll get left quite, your the worst thing to happen to your parents its hurts.
Best things in life ARE free..n Ken's done nothin but cost money since birth.
DECNT IDEA
Irack points daily..ya failin to dodge the bombs I left blown.
U'kno ur title streak is over, see...when the troops there would rather U be sent home.
NAH
Shit, your bronze at best you know it. In this bout you'll be left out cold.
Cuz if silence is golden..it explains why Kenny's never able to keep his mouth closed.
NAH, TRYIN TOO MUCH WITH THE CLICHES NOW
Your time is out, your surrounded with doubt. You ain't doper so quit it.
Cuz you can either pass the torch.....or grasp on to get handed over with it.
QUITE GOOD


NOT A BAD DROP, SOME UPS N DOWNS. BUT YOU NEED TO DIVERSIFY YOUR STYLE ALL YOUR PUNCHES ARE CLICHE/PAUSE TYPE PUNCHES. I USED TO BE EXACTLY THE SAME, PROLEM IS YOU END UP FORCING PUNCHES AROUND A CLICHE WHICH DONT ALWAYS COME OFF THAT WELL.

VS



you're about to get a beating so bad that my NEXT opponent's retreating
dont mind my internal rhyme scheme just worry about your internal bleeding
EH, ITS OK, BIT SIMPLE
but something's out of the norm, you're confident & feeling like the top gun
of course you're in rare form..i just stomped out of your usual one
EH, SOMTHINS NOT RIGHT, YOUR SAYING THE FORM HES IN IS RARE FOR HIM. BUT YOUR STOMPING HIM OUT OF IT? WORDING EH
the whole objective's to elevate, how how're you not even close to iller
the only change in your verse is the three quarters of it that's filler
THIS CAME OFF LIKE A COMPLIMENT, SAYING HIS VERSE NOW HAS THREE QUARTER FILLER SEEMS TO ME LIKE YOUR SAYING IT WAS BETTER BEFORE, IONO NOT MUCH OF A DISS
you dig up dope concepts from '01 then re-flip 'em, get lost.
true legends live on while it's true legends that you try to live off
BLAND
dont hate the player- hate the game, better yet hate your coach
kid'll pick & roll, drive the lane and we STILL wont see a Lay up in votes
BETTER
fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
OK, BUT AGAIN YOUR JUST SAYING HES FL, THE TASMPA AND JACKS REFERENCE ADD NOTHIN TO THAT, SIMPLE IMO
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black
LOL, BETTER
i'll embarass you for being wack and always dropping piss poor,
with my foot on the back of your neck & make you lick it up off the floor
NAH
i'm already celebrating another title defense at your expense- check it
i'll have a corona and your girl, both bottoms up in a second
DECENT


KENNY THIS WASNT A GOOD VERSE FOR YOU, YOU SHOWED GLIMPSES OFF WHAT YOU CAN DO BUT TOO MANY LINES WERE SIMPLE IMO. IONO IF YOU MAYBE UNDERESTIMATED LAY A BIT OR WHAT BUT YOU CAN DO MUCH BETTER


PRETTY CLOSE ISH, BUT STILL I ENDED UP WITH THE FEELING LAY HAD THE BETTER VERSE


V/LAY FEAR

[Mariah]

The fact YOU said Burd was in the hall of fame..n got amped sooner.
Or the idea you'd be inducted....for strugglin ALL season to actually champ junior.

vs.

fuck WHEREVER you from, i might be in jr but you cant match my skill
because your state of mind is FL like Tampa Bay and Jacksonville
you're a phony, quit swagger jackin' and acknowledge the fact
spent so much time copyin Kenya fooled yourself into thinkin you're black

Close match, the stuff that wasn't quoted was still good and consistent from both, but when it came down to quotes...I think that Kenny had a little bit better of a verse, so he got my vote.

v/Kenny

[Mariah]

Kenny the G wins (34)
Lay Fear lsoes (15)