Dope Addiction [A Dopey Collab]

[Ntalek]

Dope Addiction.
Written By: Ntalek, Decoy and Bobericc
"verses go in order of the names"


Life is a lesson and the mic is a weapon to hide the pain and the stress in.
Music shoots through my veins from entertainers were blessed with.
The speakers are needles pearcing the skin - penitrating the evil.
the antidote's lessens whlie I chew anguish like delicatessens.
upheaveled- by the only drug transparent/see through
but the effects are noticed by people viewing my life from a steeple.
addiction got me praying like a Hebrew-the high times are only in her mind-
if she knew-these spoken emotions would leave her wounds open.
as doom soaks in-decresing the value it's so potent once the leaves brew.
and through what was spoken comes life review as she proceeds through.

It's like I need tunes to squeeze through the day without dismay
As I crank it up and mix it with shuffle with no cards left to display
I stand corrected today, I've never been out of sync with classics
But everytime I think of plastic, vinyl is the only thing that's magic
Rethink the habits we've grown to relive and wrap up into a genre
See, we mash up and settle all the drama minus mention of karma
Politics sits on your face, freedom of speech is a religious debate
So truth that's left isn't food for thought if you're missing the plate
Every mission can pay a visit, but let me listen and pay attention
To that pain and remission musicians try to portray within visions

Rap starts to shrivle me, into the answer it's riddles keep
a little spech.. libral heat spit with a skillfull team,
others are in a pillory, just trying to make their mark
take this rock.. burn in hell when heavens gate is locked
The dope's saved this spot, enthralled rythmn, hiphop critics!
we'll stop this shit, and make ya'll listen, it's cognizant
the pot thickens, that's why the dope is just banding together
demanding what's better then a flow with the worst handling ever
only outstanding can enter, the dope it comes wit taps and shackles
it's like broadway how it gets more praise than a tabernacle




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-368079.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-367960.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ty-368452.html

[Ntalek]

links added...

[Chris Topher]

pwned. nice shit dudes.

[the_origin]

yo this was dope no pun intended.
ntalek imagery was tight and i like ya word choice,
decoy i liked how u bounced ya intro off ntalek ending then flipped into ur own flow
bobericci thought u had the strongest verse it sums it up well

overall nice collab I thought all yall was dope

good shit

o and feed me when u see me

[Ntalek]

Um..thx..real feed pls..

[JUstintime]

damn i liked this alot u were right on mark with everything and your vocabaluary was outstanding also the flow was awesome and it was fun to read

[Ntalek]

um..yeah.. appreciated..ups.

[The Vortex]

well this may be some of my last feed on this site, so i thought i'd check out your's for starters

my fav lines were==

the pot thickens, that's why the dope is just banding together
lol

it's like broadway how it gets more praise than a tabernacle
lol , Damn!

Politics sits on your face, freedom of speech is a religious debate
So truth that's left isn't food for thought if you're missing the plate
dope bar fe'sho


The speakers are needles pearcing the skin - penitrating the evil.
the antidote's lessens whlie I chew anguish like delicatessens.
illmatic ish fe'sho

addiction got me praying like a Hebrew-the high times are only in her mind-
fa sheezy ma neezy

as doom soaks in-decresing the value it's so potent once the leaves brew.
nice line, "decreasing"^,,,,


all in all was nicely knitted together collabo, i'm puffing that dope right now, so i was feelin this joint


nuff said

peez

[Ntalek]

appreciated...ups..

[MAC COAL-B]

havent seen to much thats impressed me on this sight but this is definitly does this is wut rap an hip hop is supposed to be

[Mr.Mister]

that was a really good piece very intriguing yes i enjoyed reading it and how you influenced the whole evil versus good was amazing how fluent it was i hope to see more work from you keep excelling your work and one day you'll make it

[Ntalek]

um..... ups...for some in depth feed..

[Engivale]

Okay, Ntalek, it starts so dope, dude ---

Life is a lesson and the mic is a weapon to hide the pain and the stress in.
Music shoots through my veins from entertainers were blessed with.

The speakers are needles pearcing the skin - penitrating the evil.
the antidote's lessens whlie I chew anguish like delicatessens.
upheaveled-

but then u go and do that with it!!! What the hell? Keep it flowin, dude, that totally threw me off, lol

if she knew-these spoken emotions would leave her wounds open.
as doom soaks in-decresing the value it's so potent once the leaves brew.
and through what was spoken comes life review as she proceeds through.

But, great... u did pretty awesome, man, the first few lines have such a cool meaning, that first line was great, if u could churn out lines like the first on every line, man, you'd be beastly, take your time, lol... Don't always write what comes next =D

Decoy, you brought it even harder, man, if I may so myself. Impressive, I don't remember reading you b4, but this made me smile. First four lines are terrific -

It's like I need tunes to squeeze through the day without dismay
As I crank it up and mix it with shuffle with no cards left to display
I stand corrected today, I've never been out of sync with classics
But everytime I think of plastic, vinyl is the only thing that's magic

Fuck CD's, you like classic, haha, very cool... Loved it...

But this might be the line of the collab:

Politics sits on your face, freedom of speech is a religious debate
So truth that's left isn't food for thought if you're missing the plate

UH! So nice. You should sig that, or something, that is tight shit.

Boberric., learn to spell ahahha, but anyways, you came a little off-paced for me, this line was tight, tho:

others are in a pillory, just trying to make their mark
take this rock.. burn in hell when heavens gate is locked

Nice. but all the spelling and grammar issues were ticking me off, lol, sorry, I just can't stand to see it in writing that is supposed to be being "presented," ya know?

the pot thickens, that's why the dope is just banding together
demanding what's better then a flow with the worst handling ever
only outstanding can enter, the dope it comes wit taps and shackles
it's like broadway how it gets more praise than a tabernacle

Great closer, tho, but u just seemed to get a bit off-topic, lol, the schemes are leading u that way and u even make note of it which is really funny... I liked it, tho, I just thought ur buddies might of outdone ya on this one =D

Came together great, folks, good read... there's the feed you've been waiting for =D

[Ntalek]

word..thankx Eng..I'll get to your piece in a bit..

[Ntalek]

^^^^^^^^^^^..