***HW Title: J.Hens(48) vs. Rule (28)***

[Vaskez]

Make sure you've read the rules as they will be enforced.

Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST (lateness = -2 votes even if your opponent agrees the extension)

Line limit: 14 MIN, no MAX

Must vote on FIVE battles (we will check that they are proper votes: -2 votes per missing vote)

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Hens is defending Champ

[Rule.]

g/l Hens, match whoever drops first i guess.

[J.Hens.]

alright cool, i'll probably be in the 16-20 range. gl

[J.Hens.]

PM i just got

do you just wanna agree on 16?

yeah 16's fine. but ima needa extention till saturday if that's aight with you..

so both tomorrow i'm assuming.

[Rule.]

serrrrriously..

you've been HW for awhile, but fact is ya swagger isnt what ya think..
cus dude's got an ego boost.. that could pass off as a new energy drink.
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It was obvious who won here... but I have to john that CAPS shit is frontlines style...

puttin an end to the stink. LLL's gettin tired of ya, recognize the blunt signs..
'n id capitalize on my verses too, but even Spit knows how ya frontlines.
know how ya live. Hens recycles, he dont bite..but what we REALLY believe g..
is that you got that one-story building .. into a fictional 3-part series.
yep im mean and i state facts. 'n im only bein bleek..
when i put Hens in a double bind, that'd have sailors adapt the knot technique.
see it's easy to kill em, i'll just load 'n bust the shotty..
'n if i leave ANY trace evidence, its just the chalk outline of ya body.
but seriously im not playin. all cliche writers are the same & diluted..
'n since birds of a feather flock together ..its obvious hens is included.
it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.

just 14, sry.

[J.Hens.]

don't get the boos mistaken for cheer, your ish is painful to ears
& IF dudes on fire in here, s'cuz hes been a flamer for years

^ basically you're a flamer, try 'n hide the fact, but its painfully true..
u could bust out ya firearms.. but that'll just prove what we already knew.

the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle

seriously. this kid's a fluke. so after this ya know there'll be trouble.
cus how is it not a crime, when ya text always shows signs of a struggle?

I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.
This fag is in a relationship, with somebody who's wishing for power.
And within a split-second, Rule's boyfriend'll make him hold that position for hours.
You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for his turn.
You lack the respect. I'll leave ya paralyzed, cuz i'm snappin your neck.
Your ability to walk will NEVER return... but I'll be sure to break your Back in a Sec.
I'm a law abiding citizen. But as far as life goes, I prefer it with no fools.
Fuck a nameplay. I must be an anarchist.. I'd do anything for a world with no Rules.



pz.

[Big Question]

you've been HW for awhile, but fact is ya swagger isnt what ya think..
cus dude's got an ego boost.. that could pass off as a new energy drink.
NAH, ITS NOT REALLY DIISSING YOUR OPPONENT
puttin an end to the stink. LLL's gettin tired of ya, recognize the blunt signs..
'n id capitalize on my verses too, but even Spit knows how ya frontlines.
NA, AGAIN ITS A LIL SIMPLE
know how ya live. Hens recycles, he dont bite..but what we REALLY believe g..
is that you got that one-story building .. into a fictional 3-part series.
NOT FEEELIN
yep im mean and i state facts. 'n im only bein bleek..
when i put Hens in a double bind, that'd have sailors adapt the knot technique.
NAH
see it's easy to kill em, i'll just load 'n bust the shotty..
'n if i leave ANY trace evidence, its just the chalk outline of ya body.
OK
but seriously im not playin. all cliche writers are the same & diluted..
'n since birds of a feather flock together ..its obvious hens is included.
THIS WAS DECENTISH
it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.
DEADLINES IS JUST PLAYED W/P MAN

vs

I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
EH, NOT REALLY
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
EH?, BUTLER AS IN THE TEXT BATTLING DUDE?, NAH
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.
DECENT
This fag is in a relationship, with somebody who's wishing for power.
And within a split-second, Rule's boyfriend'll make him hold that position for hours.
OK ISH
You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for his turn.
KINDA FORCED W/P, I MEAN IT DOESNT WORK BOTH WAYS, OK I GUESS
You lack the respect. I'll leave ya paralyzed, cuz i'm snappin your neck.
Your ability to walk will NEVER return... but I'll be sure to break your Back in a Sec.
NOPE
I'm a law abiding citizen. But as far as life goes, I prefer it with no fools.
Fuck a nameplay. I must be an anarchist.. I'd do anything for a world with no Rules
NICE


WOW, IT LOOKS LIKE I WAS KINDA HARSH HERE, DIDNT MEAN IT TO LOOK LIKE THAT JUST IN ALL HONESTY I WASNT FEELING MUCH FROM EITHER. RULE LOOKED LIKE HE RUSHED AND JOHN LOOKED LIKE HE SAW THAT AT JUST KEYED SUMTHIN UP. STRANGE ONE....I`LL HAVE TO VOTE HENS JUST FOR THAT LAST BAR.


V/HENS

[phlymo]

you've been HW for awhile, but fact is ya swagger isnt what ya think..
cus dude's got an ego boost.. that could pass off as a new energy drink.
^^^nah
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Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
It was obvious who won here... but I have to john that CAPS shit is frontlines style...

puttin an end to the stink. LLL's gettin tired of ya, recognize the blunt signs..
'n id capitalize on my verses too, but even Spit knows how ya frontlines.
^^^bit weird in execution
know how ya live. Hens recycles, he dont bite..but what we REALLY believe g..
is that you got that one-story building .. into a fictional 3-part series.
^^^this was pretty odd
yep im mean and i state facts. 'n im only bein bleek..
when i put Hens in a double bind, that'd have sailors adapt the knot technique.
^^^decent
see it's easy to kill em, i'll just load 'n bust the shotty..
'n if i leave ANY trace evidence, its just the chalk outline of ya body.
^^^decent, odd wording
but seriously im not playin. all cliche writers are the same & diluted..
'n since birds of a feather flock together ..its obvious hens is included.
^^^nah, needed more to it
it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.
^^^i agree with Q, i've seen too many deadlines bars and this one didn't stand out

vs


I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
^^^kind of ok, not too punchy though
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
^^^i appreciate it as a personal, but i refuse to believe that in all of the time butler has been around that this concept hasn't been used lots and lots
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.
^^^good
This fag is in a relationship, with somebody who's wishing for power.
And within a split-second, Rule's boyfriend'll make him hold that position for hours.
^^^nah
You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for his turn.
^^^needed better wording/more time
You lack the respect. I'll leave ya paralyzed, cuz i'm snappin your neck.
Your ability to walk will NEVER return... but I'll be sure to break your Back in a Sec.
^^^decent concept that needed more work imo
I'm a law abiding citizen. But as far as life goes, I prefer it with no fools.
Fuck a nameplay. I must be an anarchist.. I'd do anything for a world with no Rules.
^^^yeah straight

this was a fucking odd battle. there was some decent stuff in there but this wasn't A-game shit from either by a long shot. i haven't seen rule online all week and judging by his request for the extension i'm assuming that he had a lot on cos this isn't really close to his standard. dunno about hens, maybe he just went for what was enought or whatever. the verse was decent but lacked his usual polish. a couple of cool concepts got him the win though, i liked the bball line a lot.
v/hens

[Erupt]

it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.

vs

I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.


seen both come better but John definatly edged this one out, he had one more quotable and the rest of his verse bordered on the quotable or not.

vote hens

[Qualm]

you've been HW for awhile, but fact is ya swagger isnt what ya think..
cus dude's got an ego boost.. that could pass off as a new energy drink.
weak
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Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
It was obvious who won here... but I have to john that CAPS shit is frontlines style...

puttin an end to the stink. LLL's gettin tired of ya, recognize the blunt signs..
'n id capitalize on my verses too, but even Spit knows how ya frontlines.
wasn't feeling how this was worded.
know how ya live. Hens recycles, he dont bite..but what we REALLY believe g..
is that you got that one-story building .. into a fictional 3-part series.
ehh
yep im mean and i state facts. 'n im only bein bleek..
when i put Hens in a double bind, that'd have sailors adapt the knot technique.
ok
see it's easy to kill em, i'll just load 'n bust the shotty..
'n if i leave ANY trace evidence, its just the chalk outline of ya body.
again i wasn't feeling the wording..decent-ish
but seriously im not playin. all cliche writers are the same & diluted..
'n since birds of a feather flock together ..its obvious hens is included.
ok
it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.
thought was ok even though the general concensus are against 'deadline' punches.. but i thought this was more personal so..

vs

I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
erm decent
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
liked it
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.
coo
This fag is in a relationship, with somebody who's wishing for power.
And within a split-second, Rule's boyfriend'll make him hold that position for hours.
nah
You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for his turn.
kinda forced
You lack the respect. I'll leave ya paralyzed, cuz i'm snappin your neck.
Your ability to walk will NEVER return... but I'll be sure to break your Back in a Sec.
ok
I'm a law abiding citizen. But as far as life goes, I prefer it with no fools.
Fuck a nameplay. I must be an anarchist.. I'd do anything for a world with no Rules
good

Yeah, Rule and Hens have came way better than this. Rule had some decent but it felt like he was reaching for some and I just felt they were worded too hastily; Just felt kinda rushed. The only line I would consider quoting would be the deadline punch & that would be at a push. Hens had enough to take the win here.. ha had the butler, pass away lines which were pretty cool, and possibly the anarchist line.

v/ Hens

[Warming]

v/ Hens

first half of rule's verse was blah, birds of a feather was decent, sailor knots iight, chalk and deadline flips are wayy overdone

hens was more consistent and harsher the whole way through, roulette could have been a lot nicer, anarchist and pass away were cool

[-Coop-]

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Rule
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you've been HW for awhile, but fact is ya swagger isnt what ya think..
cus dude's got an ego boost.. that could pass off as a new energy drink.
Not too much of a diss
puttin an end to the stink. LLL's gettin tired of ya, recognize the blunt signs..
'n id capitalize on my verses too, but even Spit knows how ya frontlines.
So-so
know how ya live. Hens recycles, he dont bite..but what we REALLY believe g..
is that you got that one-story building .. into a fictional 3-part series.
Didn't like this
yep im mean and i state facts. 'n im only bein bleek..
when i put Hens in a double bind, that'd have sailors adapt the knot technique.
Wasn't really feelin
see it's easy to kill em, i'll just load 'n bust the shotty..
'n if i leave ANY trace evidence, its just the chalk outline of ya body.
Decent
but seriously im not playin. all cliche writers are the same & diluted..
'n since birds of a feather flock together ..its obvious hens is included.
Right...
it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix.
Aight

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Hens
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I know you jacked Ancel. And that's why I'm attackin your verses.
You had a stage of flame-flipping.. that could land you a fuckin act in the circus.
Creative, not too much of a punch tho
Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
Hot
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.
Nice again
This fag is in a relationship, with somebody who's wishing for power.
And within a split-second, Rule's boyfriend'll make him hold that position for hours.
Kinda funny
You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for
his turn.
Coo
You lack the respect. I'll leave ya paralyzed, cuz i'm snappin your neck.
Your ability to walk will NEVER return... but I'll be sure to break your Back in a Sec.
I get it, but didn't do too much for me
I'm a law abiding citizen. But as far as life goes, I prefer it with no fools.
Fuck a nameplay. I must be an anarchist.. I'd do anything for a world with no Rules.
Aight

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it's over and finished, i expect more 'like' punches, cus we all know ya tricks.
'n Vas's right, Saturdays are ya deadlines.. that even life support couldnt fix(ehh...)

VS

Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.
Ok, I'll use basketball to explain why you're getting smashed today.
You always miss your shots.. so you know we'll ALL be happy when you pass away.You don't fire shots, but on that note, I have a game for your concern.
Because if Roullette a trigger go... then I made sure to load the chamber for
his turn.
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Yeah, this was pretty much one-sided. Rule came below par for what he used to be droppin, Hens came better than usual imo.

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VOTE: HENS
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[Erupt]

hens wins 6-0,. rule loses 2 votes for only voting 4 times

Hens wins via KO +4 plus defends +1

rule looses via KO -1