HW Title: J.Hens. (5-0) vs Rule. (5-0)

[Tim]

Regular Rules
Check-ins due Wednesday 11:59 EST
Verses due Friday 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Sunday 11:59pm EST
must vote on 5 battles and LEAVE LINKS
Swaying or feeding = Vote deduction

[J.Hens.]

prolly 16-20

[Rule.]

k goodluck

[Rule.]

henz
benz
no show
oh no.


whatevaa. if he shows, congrats. im not wastin lines for someone thats most likely gunna show saturday anyways. pz

[Tim]

alright you guys have until Sat.11:59 Pacific Time

[Rule.]

ya text is inconsistent. somtimes ya decent, but im tryn to make ya see..
i kinda like to keep things simple, 'n ya verses always seem to agree.
ima let my punches do the talkin. lookin to kill someone slow..
& since John apparently fits the mold.. u can just play Doe.
been sonnin cats awhile huh? well, i hate to be mean..
if ya put anymore EMPHASIS in ya VERSE, its still FAR from OUTSTANDING.
seriously, its a fluke ya even here. next week'll show im right, clown..
which obviously raises the Question.. to bump u right back down.
been compared with the best of the best: demik, frame, 'n $pit..
but john dropping cliches? hah.. his verses couldnt survive w/o it.
poor fuck. you're a has been, its obvious you's a broke fuck bro..
its no shock when he takes a back seat, along with the tires, rims, & stereo.

whatever

[J.Hens.]

your threats are harmless, 'nfact ya no different than FL material.
shit, you wanna talk guns 'n bullets? well kid i'll give ya a ear full.

..Rygar win? Kid ya dead.. bled.. when I split cha thread..
U consider my guns all talk.. then let me put voices in ya head..

I know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
Your record in 1-2 Punch proved one hook could crush ur chin.
Cuz 3-6 is anotha way of sayin 12/18 lines you write ain't good enough to win.
You're the product of no-shows. so i'll blast thru this text geek.
RB's producin questionable contenders. n' i don't face THAT dude till next week.
I'll win in convincing fashion. this kid's getting laid to rest.
But you're convincing fashion... that you'll look like shit any way you dress.
I know gun-lines r old, but i'll drop clean n' attack this brother.
My shotty'll make his brain give the wall a spread not even the Pats could cover.
Face it. you got no chance, not even your camp will believe.
So i'm breakin the Rule. like Tim did just so you wouldn't be the champ of the league.

[Sobe]

ya text is inconsistent. somtimes ya decent, but im tryn to make ya see..
i kinda like to keep things simple, 'n ya verses always seem to agree.
seriously, its a fluke ya even here. next week'll show im right, clown..
which obviously raises the Question.. to bump u right back down.

vs.

I know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
You're the product of no-shows. so i'll blast thru this text geek.
RB's producin questionable contenders. n' i don't face THAT dude till next week.
I know gun-lines r old, but i'll drop clean n' attack this brother.
My shotty'll make his brain give the wall a spread not even the Pats could cover.


nothin really great in this battle

v/ hens

[Undisputed™]

ya text is inconsistent. somtimes ya decent, but im tryn to make ya see..
i kinda like to keep things simple, 'n ya verses always seem to agree.
seriously, its a fluke ya even here. next week'll show im right, clown..
which obviously raises the Question.. to bump u right back down.

vs.

I know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
You're the product of no-shows. so i'll blast thru this text geek.
RB's producin questionable contenders. n' i don't face THAT dude till next week.

decent battle, pretty shitty champ match though....

v/ J.Hens

[Erupt]

poor fuck. you're a has been, its obvious you's a broke fuck bro..
its no shock when he takes a back seat, along with the tires, rims, & stereo.

vs

I know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
Face it. you got no chance, not even your camp will believe.
So i'm breakin the Rule. like Tim did just so you wouldn't be the champ of the league.

very lacklustre here, I think jon just did enough to win knowing him...

vote john hensley, although I thought this would have been better

[Kenny the G]

ya text is inconsistent. somtimes ya decent, but im tryn to make ya see..
i kinda like to keep things simple, 'n ya verses always seem to agree.
seriously, its a fluke ya even here. next week'll show im right, clown..
which obviously raises the Question.. to bump u right back down.


vs

know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
I'll win in convincing fashion. this kid's getting laid to rest.
But you're convincing fashion... that you'll look like shit any way you dress.
I know gun-lines r old, but i'll drop clean n' attack this brother.
My shotty'll make his brain give the wall a spread not even the Pats could cover.
Face it. you got no chance, not even your camp will believe.
So i'm breakin the Rule. like Tim did just so you wouldn't be the champ of the league.

Hens

[J.Hens.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-358647.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-3-358651.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-358655.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-358648.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-3-358794.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-1-358658.html

[Registered]

ima let my punches do the talkin. lookin to kill someone slow..
& since John apparently fits the mold.. u can just play Doe.

vs

I know, I was late. but this kid's wack with rhymes.
Cuz if we all went by the Rule book.. then it'd be okay to flip Fracture lines.
Your record in 1-2 Punch proved one hook could crush ur chin.
Cuz 3-6 is anotha way of sayin 12/18 lines you write ain't good enough to win.

vote- Hensley.
champ match with 12 lines?
i thought it'd be at least 20.

[Tim]

J.Hens. wins (6-0)
Rule. loses (5-1)