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Check-ins due Wednesday 11:59 EST
Verses due Friday 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Sunday 11:59pm EST
must vote on 5 battles and LEAVE LINKS
Swaying or feeding = Vote deduction
g'luck Hens.. prolly around 24ish
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-358007.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-358011.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-358022.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-358018.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-3-358014.html
Last edited by Blue Bayou; January 21st, 2008 at 12:13 AM
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
sounds good
Monster's Ink
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Last battle I killed two bitches, sent em on fire to heaven slayed
This week I’m face’n a fag…& that’s just how JH spends his entire 7 days
Bitch I know ur style,.. and honestly ya rap soft, its jokes
A reaching quote, filler and corny meta’s trying to get passed off as dope
His 1st bars never original, i’ll snap ya spine without warning
Cuz its always just a flip to open like business signs in the morning
Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date
You’ve run some leagues, but ya fell off & now all ur dropping is ass
We never see this modern respect..any ounce he had was lost in the past
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
Ya me n my girl fight.. but your virgin ass doesn’t impress, sorry
s’why I’ve got make-up sex stories, you just gotta make-up sex stories
Don’t ask how I am.. what I’m doing, I don’t wanna hear Hensley speak
Fuck the small-talk..i get enough from ya girl about ur dick every week
You can’t get by me.. I’m the better writer, your not an obstacle dude
So what you lookin for a write of passage 4? I’ll murk u in a topical too
I snatched ur chain & ya bitch..but the one made me wanna hurl Hens
So I’ll give you ya Silverback..not the chain, ur guerilla of a girlfriend!
What are you an Ares? Pieces? If there’s more I’m sorry I missed em
Actually fuck ya Zodiac..i’ll just leave ya dead like one of his victims
22.
Last edited by Blue Bayou; January 19th, 2008 at 04:09 AM
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
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this is the LLL championship?
Where's M~M, Savir, Feebs. the vets who used to run this shit.
Now i'm facin Blue for the title. jesus rapbattles. tell me you didn't come to THIS.
Horrifying. it seems too drastic, but i'll leave him breathin' plastic.
When i direct more blades into Scream than Wes Craven's most recent classic.
He might seem fantastic, this pedophile act very slick, or what?
The square has kids jump in more than the hopskotch game where he picks em' up.
You act sick as fuck, but u flip shit thus., it can only be encaved.
Ya style gives ME the spins? nah..it's also got Frac n' Resin rollin' in their graves.
Your lines are screaming played. i kno my archives live in your head.
Fresh? your shit's an echo of mine. just a fading repeat of what i originally said.
You ain't champ material, no1 this wack is controllin their luck.
The title match is a sight for sore eyes. n' afterwards urs'll be black & swollen as fuck.
It ain't your day. i'll merk you and whoever ur crews aquainted wit.
If it's a Starry Night... then i'ma cut off ya fuckin ear like the dude who painted it.
Battling is ALL you're about. no wonder your rhymes are gay.
Cell designers look to u for inspiration. the way u flip out for text hundrds of times a day.
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
Apparently incest's an idea that someone who's single supports.
But your rash decision making.. is what caused ur grandmothers shingles and warts.
Your dead now. any chance for this dude is over.
Keep spacin. my bazooka'll cause a Star explosion that could classify as a supernova.
pzzz
Monster's Ink
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His 1st bars never original, i’ll snap ya spine without warning
Cuz its always just a flip to open like business signs in the morning [1]
Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date[2]
Ya me n my girl fight.. but your virgin ass doesn’t impress, sorry
s’why I’ve got make-up sex stories, you just gotta make-up sex stories [3]
Don’t ask how I am.. what I’m doing, I don’t wanna hear Hensley speak
Fuck the small-talk..i get enough from ya girl about ur dick every week[4]
You can’t get by me.. I’m the better writer, your not an obstacle dude
So what you lookin for a write of passage 4? I’ll murk u in a topical too[5]
I snatched ur chain & ya bitch..but the one made me wanna hurl Hens
So I’ll give you ya Silverback..not the chain, ur guerilla of a girlfriend![6]
Where's M~M, Savir, Feebs. the vets who used to run this shit.
Now i'm facin Blue for the title. jesus rapbattles. tell me you didn't come to THIS.[1]
Horrifying. it seems too drastic, but i'll leave him breathin' plastic.
When i direct more blades into Scream than Wes Craven's most recent classic.[2]
He might seem fantastic, this pedophile act very slick, or what?
The square has kids jump in more than the hopskotch game where he picks em' up.[3]
Your lines are screaming played. i kno my archives live in your head.
Fresh? your shit's an echo of mine. just a fading repeat of what i originally said.[4]
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.[5]
Apparently incest's an idea that someone who's single supports.
But your rash decision making.. is what caused ur grandmothers shingles and warts.[6]
this shit could really go either way in my opinion ..
..both came with it, really fresh shit ..
but i really have to vote for J.Hens because
almost every one of his lines was fresh or hard hitting.
there were a few of stars lines that had me like .. ?!?
but still a really good battle to read from both.
vote - J. Hens
so barricade ur entrance .. put up some extra fences..
a woman beater, wantend for repeated sex offenses .. chasin dips, take em on long vacation trips, kidnappin em & trappin em in abusive relationships.
His 1st bars never original, i’ll snap ya spine without warning
Cuz its always just a flip to open like business signs in the morning
Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date
You’ve run some leagues, but ya fell off & now all ur dropping is ass
We never see this modern respect..any ounce he had was lost in the past
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
Ya me n my girl fight.. but your virgin ass doesn’t impress, sorry
s’why I’ve got make-up sex stories, you just gotta make-up sex stories
Don’t ask how I am.. what I’m doing, I don’t wanna hear Hensley speak
Fuck the small-talk..i get enough from ya girl about ur dick every week
vs.
Horrifying. it seems too drastic, but i'll leave him breathin' plastic.
When i direct more blades into Scream than Wes Craven's most recent classic.
You ain't champ material, no1 this wack is controllin their luck.
The title match is a sight for sore eyes. n' afterwards urs'll be black & swollen as fuck.
It ain't your day. i'll merk you and whoever ur crews aquainted wit.
If it's a Starry Night... then i'ma cut off ya fuckin ear like the dude who painted it.
Battling is ALL you're about. no wonder your rhymes are gay.
Cell designers look to u for inspiration. the way u flip out for text hundrds of times a day.
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
Your dead now. any chance for this dude is over.
Keep spacin. my bazooka'll cause a Star explosion that could classify as a supernova.
both had tight verses but i think starscream had the harder punches
v/ star
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
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..Starscream!
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Last battle I killed two bitches, sent em on fire to heaven slayed
This week I’m face’n a fag…& that’s just how JH spends his entire 7 days
Nah
Bitch I know ur style,.. and honestly ya rap soft, its jokes
A reaching quote, filler and corny meta’s trying to get passed off as dope
More statement-ish than harsh.
His 1st bars never original, i’ll snap ya spine without warning
Cuz its always just a flip to open like business signs in the morning
One of your weaker comparison punches
Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date
Ok
You’ve run some leagues, but ya fell off & now all ur dropping is ass
We never see this modern respect..any ounce he had was lost in the past
Nice job with the w/p.
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
This was good
Ya me n my girl fight.. but your virgin ass doesn’t impress, sorry
s’why I’ve got make-up sex stories, you just gotta make-up sex stories
Ok @ best.
Don’t ask how I am.. what I’m doing, I don’t wanna hear Hensley speak
Fuck the small-talk..i get enough from ya girl about ur dick every week
Small dick jokes are getting increasingly played out every week.
You can’t get by me.. I’m the better writer, your not an obstacle dude
So what you lookin for a write of passage 4? I’ll murk u in a topical too
More of a threat than a diss
I snatched ur chain & ya bitch..but the one made me wanna hurl Hens
So I’ll give you ya Silverback..not the chain, ur guerilla of a girlfriend!
Pretty good. Good use of the set-up.
What are you an Ares? Pieces? If there’s more I’m sorry I missed em
Actually fuck ya Zodiac..i’ll just leave ya dead like one of his victims
Once again, more of a threat.
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John Hensley
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Where's M~M, Savir, Feebs. the vets who used to run this shit.
Now i'm facin Blue for the title. jesus rapbattles. tell me you didn't come to THIS.
This was pretty mean, but still statement-ish.
Horrifying. it seems too drastic, but i'll leave him breathin' plastic.
When i direct more blades into Scream than Wes Craven's most recent classic.
I was never fond of threatening punches, no matter how creative.
He might seem fantastic, this pedophile act very slick, or what?
The square has kids jump in more than the hopskotch game where he picks em' up.
Kinda funny.
You act sick as fuck, but u flip shit thus., it can only be encaved.
Ya style gives ME the spins? nah..it's also got Frac n' Resin rollin' in their
graves.
Alright.
Your lines are screaming played. i kno my archives live in your head.
Fresh? your shit's an echo of mine. just a fading repeat of what i originally said.
Wasn't feelin this much.
You ain't champ material, no1 this wack is controllin their luck.
The title match is a sight for sore eyes. n' afterwards urs'll be black & swollen as fuck.
I know I've seen some shit similar to this, so I wasn't feelin this either.
It ain't your day. i'll merk you and whoever ur crews aquainted wit.
If it's a Starry Night... then i'ma cut off ya fuckin ear like the dude who painted it.
This was ok, but see above.
Battling is ALL you're about. no wonder your rhymes are gay.
Cell designers look to u for inspiration. the way u flip out for text hundrds of times a day.
Creative
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
Similar to the last punch, but this was better
Apparently incest's an idea that someone who's single supports.
But your rash decision making.. is what caused ur grandmothers shingles and warts.
Lol @ grandmother. This was good.
Your dead now. any chance for this dude is over.
Keep spacin. my bazooka'll cause a Star explosion that could classify as a supernova.
Ehh... nah.
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Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
I snatched ur chain & ya bitch..but the one made me wanna hurl Hens
So I’ll give you ya Silverback..not the chain, ur guerilla of a girlfriend!
VS
He might seem fantastic, this pedophile act very slick, or what?
The square has kids jump in more than the hopskotch game where he picks em' up.
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
Apparently incest's an idea that someone who's single supports.
But your rash decision making.. is what caused ur grandmothers shingles and warts.
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Well, this was pretty close. Blue had the better quotables, but John had the consistency and less bad lines. Which is usually the deciding factor in battles like this. Wasn't a particularly satisfying champ match, but better than any other shit this week. GL to whoever wins, I'll be seeing you in two weeks.
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VOTE: J HENS
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Last battle I killed two bitches, sent em on fire to heaven slayed
This week I’m face’n a fag…& that’s just how JH spends his entire 7 days
nope.
Bitch I know ur style,.. and honestly ya rap soft, its jokes
A reaching quote, filler and corny meta’s trying to get passed off as dope
statement.
His 1st bars never original, i’ll snap ya spine without warning
Cuz its always just a flip to open like business signs in the morning
meh.
Seriously pussy.. when it comes to mackin your the worst, mate
They say chicks dig scars..i might actually help John get his first date
ok.
You’ve run some leagues, but ya fell off & now all ur dropping is ass
We never see this modern respect..any ounce he had was lost in the past
hmm, cool w/p.
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
cool.
Ya me n my girl fight.. but your virgin ass doesn’t impress, sorry
s’why I’ve got make-up sex stories, you just gotta make-up sex stories
neh
Don’t ask how I am.. what I’m doing, I don’t wanna hear Hensley speak
Fuck the small-talk..i get enough from ya girl about ur dick every week
dick joke ehhh
You can’t get by me.. I’m the better writer, your not an obstacle dude
So what you lookin for a write of passage 4? I’ll murk u in a topical too
threats
I snatched ur chain & ya bitch..but the one made me wanna hurl Hens
So I’ll give you ya Silverback..not the chain, ur guerilla of a girlfriend!
alright
What are you an Ares? Pieces? If there’s more I’m sorry I missed em
Actually fuck ya Zodiac..i’ll just leave ya dead like one of his victims
meh.
vs.
Where's M~M, Savir, Feebs. the vets who used to run this shit.
Now i'm facin Blue for the title. jesus rapbattles. tell me you didn't come to THIS.
statement ish.
Horrifying. it seems too drastic, but i'll leave him breathin' plastic.
When i direct more blades into Scream than Wes Craven's most recent classic.
meh.
He might seem fantastic, this pedophile act very slick, or what?
The square has kids jump in more than the hopskotch game where he picks em' up.
meh.
You act sick as fuck, but u flip shit thus., it can only be encaved.
Ya style gives ME the spins? nah..it's also got Frac n' Resin rollin' in their
graves.
meh.
Your lines are screaming played. i kno my archives live in your head.
Fresh? your shit's an echo of mine. just a fading repeat of what i originally said.
no.
You ain't champ material, no1 this wack is controllin their luck.
The title match is a sight for sore eyes. n' afterwards urs'll be black & swollen as fuck.
nah
It ain't your day. i'll merk you and whoever ur crews aquainted wit.
If it's a Starry Night... then i'ma cut off ya fuckin ear like the dude who painted it.
ehh, ok.
Battling is ALL you're about. no wonder your rhymes are gay.
Cell designers look to u for inspiration. the way u flip out for text hundrds of times a day.
meh
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
alright
Apparently incest's an idea that someone who's single supports.
But your rash decision making.. is what caused ur grandmothers shingles and warts.
lmao
Your dead now. any chance for this dude is over.
Keep spacin. my bazooka'll cause a Star explosion that could classify as a supernova.
nah
therefore..
i think star had one more bar i liked.
so, V/ Starscream
You’ve run some leagues, but ya fell off & now all ur dropping is ass
We never see this modern respect..any ounce he had was lost in the past
No bitch is gunna give u her heart, stop lying..ur frontin’s relentless
Only time we’ll ever see Henin love is watchin Justine suckin at tennis
vs
You act sick as fuck, but u flip shit thus., it can only be encaved.
Ya style gives ME the spins? nah..it's also got Frac n' Resin rollin' in their graves.
You ain't champ material, no1 this wack is controllin their luck.
The title match is a sight for sore eyes. n' afterwards urs'll be black & swollen as fuck.
It ain't your day. i'll merk you and whoever ur crews aquainted wit.
If it's a Starry Night... then i'ma cut off ya fuckin ear like the dude who painted it.
Wit this fagot's weak lines, i never hear cats saying your hot at all.
Kayakers could use your skills rapid-decline to help training for waterfalls.
v/ hens
this was a cool, close read though
Closed
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