Tomorrow's History

[Witty]

Seyance - Normal
Witness - Itallics

Tomorrows History aint just born where the martyrs live,
Being taught to be arsonists and blow up like Osama did,
Kids asking where the target is like it's Muhammeds bid
In the Garza strip, thats exactly what you started with..
Next North Korea or China, seriously are you narcassist?
Theres alotta History being made, thats only half of it
Every single footstep.. word and action you bring to life
Creates history in every little thought you think at night,
Every vote cast.. stand you make and opinion spoken..
No matter the size or the change in the end is a token.
So we need to concentrate, changin' our future paths,
Put away guns, violence, learn science & do the maths
Make tomorrow better than the day you have past,
Learn about the world.. don't just delete the mystery
Ignoring the facts will leave man repeating history..
Your probably thinkin, 'Is he speaking this to me?'
The answer's Yes..
Cause the only future i'm seeing is debris..
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'Meet my friend, a normal Iraqi civilian
He was chilling, laid back in his building
When a bomb crashed through his ceiling
The blast, ripped off his arms, killed his wife...
....and made ash of his children....'
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That's tragic! I feel your sorrow, such misery!
But I don't really care...it's just tomorrow's history
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We have, the eyes of a hawk, elegance, prowess & flow
So we talk, but lack of intelligence, won't allow us to grow
Our tracks have been signed, but in the back of our mind..
....We're actually blind,
We can't see the path, that our master designed
Screams jump on our screens, we get bored, and channel flick
Channel four has the Knicks....there's war on channel six
'Hey, there's porn!.....is there anything that can't fix?'
Ignorance, can't see reality...our minds are pacing slow
'Dope! rape, greed, and fatalities.....my favourite show!'
We treat life like a chat show, or fictional tales
Forgetting, these people are REAL that live in these cells
But you won't listen to me....and what I actually say
because this message will just be tomorrow's history...
....after today....

[Witty]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ce-357014.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ld-357214.html

[Ink Poyzin]

WOW this was a fuckin' ILL piece. And the both you had
smooth incredible lyrics. I got to say you two are very
skilled MC's. Witness the way your rhymescheme was
setup was dope. the both you also put alot of
emotion in this... and a imagery that made me want
to read this 2 times. Keep on bringin' the ILL flows.

UPPIN.. This is dope..

[topher]

i thought this was alrite. i liked the vocab displayed here by Seyance, and Witness had perfect imagery. the concept though was alrite, and i felt this could've been executed from a different approach. you both had good multis and such, and here are some of my favorite lines:

Ignoring the facts will leave man repeating history..
Your probably thinkin, 'Is he speaking this to me?'
The answer's Yes..
Cause the only future i'm seeing is debris..

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That's tragic! I feel your sorrow, such misery!
But I don't really care...it's just tomorrow's history


the emotional factor was also displayed very well here, and it was a definate read.

[Witty]

Thanks dudes. Up!

[wizdim]

i was feelin this one....the flow was on...the vocab was nice...subject was dope...creative tho ive herd it befor...

Learn about the world.. don't just delete the mystery
Ignoring the facts will leave man repeating history..
....fav line from seyance

'Dope! rape, greed, and fatalities.....my favourite show!'
- shits comedy

yea..this piece was nice

[Fo Twenty]

This peice was so sick, you both just ripped that shit apart. Vocab was dope as fuck, nicely done.

I just had to holla about that Iraqi bit,

"'Meet my friend, a normal Iraqi civilian
He was chilling, laid back in his building
When a bomb crashed through his ceiling
The blast, ripped off his arms, killed his wife...
....and made ash of his children....'"

That was so tight, definetly gave a descriptive look at the other side of things.

[Witty]

Thanks dudes.

[Witty]

Don't sleep.

[The Vortex]

nice flows and internals from both, seyance i reckon could of had a bit more solid imagery to lift the verse a lil, still expression and intention was there, and you brought a message to the table, so all's good, and was a smooth read

witness was a bit more complex with the internals and visual imagery, and was quite hyper with the flow, i esp liked the part where you was flicking thru the channels, yea that was coolio... and made this joint easily enjoyable to read.


style was illy

pz

[Grizbear]

good shit. this was nice, and real imo. You used some modern-day type stuff here, and pulled it off well. I'm not much into the OM portion of RB, so I won't comment much on the multies, rythm, and such but your conceptual intelligence was shown in this piece. Highly original, with a played topic if you get me.

pz

[Floyd Powell]

seyance verse....

Tomorrows History aint just born where the matyrs live,
Being taught to be arsonists and blow up like Osama did,
Kids asking where the target is like it's Muhammeds bid

^great start.. very dope...

So we need to concentrate, changin' our future paths,
Put away guns, violence, learn science & do the maths
Make tomorrow better than the day you have past,

^thats right... teach these kids..


witness verse...

'Meet my friend, a normal Iraqi civilian
He was chilling, laid back in his building
When a bomb crashed through his ceiling
The blast, ripped off his arms, killed his wife...
....and made ash of his children....'

^fuckin dope... very very dope..

Our tracks have been signed, but in the back of our mind..
....We're actually blind,
We can't see the path, that our master designed

^dope again...


witness and seyance.. amazing collab.. seyance you
started this off with a fresh start and your flow was
just fucking dope all over... and that part where
you said about put the guns away.. i loved it.. then
witness came in and ended this shit dick freshly.
with a hot ass verse that absolutely blew me away...
i really liked your style, dude.. unique.. very ILL collab.
both of you did a good job.. keep it up..

[Grizbear]

rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post6151431

[R. Foster]

Wit murdered this! The topic was sorta bleh, I wasn't feeling it, but you two came with sick verses. Both of you had nice rhyme schemes and flow, Wit was a bit more complex and had great wording. Props to both on a dope piece.

Pz.

[Man of Steel Man]

this was cool...i agree with all the other people...not going to say much cause people dont return on my feed much...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ps-357925.html

^^^hit me and ill check in with more feed