Mystery of Mine- Opus & Mortuus

[P. Mortuus]

This mystery of mine- is dark & entwined
let the truth shine to undo the tangled lines
of scriptures- a fracture in my mind- a fixture
Balancing the fines of fate hating the mixture
of deceit with honesty- are we 1 with sagacity
in Little Haiti I bought hate see- penny a piece
Can be leased- practicality is oblivious to peace
and aunt Agony came over with my nifty niece
who pleased all around- till she came to me- we
shared a bond- we both knew all illusions
will break- when deception is knocked off place
& confusions will ensue with absolutions by disgrace
So we kept our secret & lied to keep us alive
Alice was in wonderland & I was on Earth- why?
Shouldn’t I just stop- & finally view the hidden truth
is hell heaven- or is heaven a hell riddled under clues

[P. Mortuus]

Links.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...10#post6093310
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post6093318

[P. Mortuus]

Now bring the feed......Leave links and I will get to them

[sILLable]

i dig this piece..both verse had a very poetical vibe to them...i dig the way yall underlined society faults...its feels like were all lost in this twisted place.....vocab was on point of course...both verses flowed smoothly,never fallin off....always an enjoyable read from the both of you...stayed on point with the topic,lots of emotion and imagery helped push this piece further...all in all just an intelligent point of view on both parts....

Death is such a mystery
Passing down through history
We walk through the dark shadows creeping
Out of our wounds the blood is seeping
We cannot go on nor can we return
For behind us the past will always always burn

I do not understand this dumb and crazy fate
How did life get to such a fucked up state
Where we give up and just stop breathing
It is ourselves we are deceiving

So I watch the Pain we’re sowing
In my heart forever knowing
That the blood you see is mine
This is the last life sign,this is the last time!!
Death will be a mystery of mine.

This mystery of mine- is dark & entwined
let the truth shine to undo the tangled lines
of scriptures- a fracture in my mind- a fixture
Balancing the fines of fate hating the mixture

in Little Haiti I bought hate see- penny a piece
Can be leased- practicality is oblivious to peace
and aunt Agony came over with my nifty niece
who pleased all around- till she came to me- we
shared a bond- we both knew all illusions
will break- when deception is knocked off place
& confusions will ensue with absolutions by disgrace

Shouldn’t I just stop- & finally view the hidden truth
is hell heaven- or is heaven a hell riddled under clues

favorite lines..keep droppin the hottness.~1~

P.S.-yo mortuus i dropped my verse to vortex for the seasons collab.

[P. Mortuus]

^word thanks for the feed any new links leave them.

[P. Mortuus]

Open for feed people.

[P. Mortuus]

Come on people..........

[sILLable]

i dont know why people would sleep on this ill piece...people not wanting to think and shit...lol

heres a new link to something i dropped yeterday...hit that up when yall arent busy..appreciate it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-355099.html

[P. Mortuus]

^word to that fucking feed.

[P. Mortuus]

Up kinda low and I will not let this die.

[Soule]

Both did VERY nice. I'll nominate this when done.

Wording was magnifcent from both writers. Strong vocabulary and wise placement. Flow was very fluent and flossed right off of the tongue. Imagery was clever, painted a shorty video in my mind. Very nice descriptions fellas. Emotion was sweet, very precise and direct. Concept was original. Keep writing.

[P. Mortuus]

Word thanks for the feed...

[P. Mortuus]

Up.

[P. Mortuus]

Up.

[P. Mortuus]

I will up this three more times if I get no feed I will let it die.