Kill One Stone With Two Birds

[Facts Machine]

Kill One Stone With Two Birds

Land covered in skeletons, crows hover through devilish
shadows that are strangled aside gallows, smothered
with excellence, loose throats get tight from the noose
most fear... called war, all for the might that men choose
to praise. A good warrior prays, his sword in sheath
On the floor, he weeps, asking the lord "what's more
to keep?" but then he stands strong and shielded
his own skin, he peeled it, righting wrongs to feel it;
The guilt of killing what was in that cold environment
Alone, no one wondering where the soul survivor went
He returned to his kingdom painted in blood, he made it,
the hugs from his people amazed him with love
The king congratulated him, but the war was made of sin
What this army of horror wants to take from them
is freedom, even if they contributed to no treason
The king knew he would lose unless the lord of demons
was assassinated, so he decided to attack evaded
Using discretion to have him faded; the plan's debated
Now they decide to use the last battle's soul survivor
and one more warrior as an ally and bone divider

The assassination plan was confirmed, but it was learned
that there was only one warrior left to earn for the burn
They couldn't find someone strong enough, then a tough
new fighter came into town and found it a rush to be rough
This irritated the assassin, cause he knew if only this man
was honorable and good-hearted, it would go with the plan
but instead he had to be arrogant, full of disparagement
The type of gambler that makes fun of happy marriages
Then one day, this hooligan picked a fight with him
Drew his sword to strike at him, but it didn't frighten him
The soul survivor clashed his weapon, wind blew passed
their direction, the sounds of blades smashing lessened
with their stamina as both knelt on the grass and rested
Giving them a lasting impression of this havoc destined
They both stopped and parted ways, the darkest days
were approaching as if the kingdom had magnetic waves
Both warriors bumped shoulders again and met their blades
This became a legendary rematch that questioned fates
How long will this rivalry perpetuate? both were swift
They ran on water slicing at each other's throats and wrists
How far will this rivalry travel to? both could jump
They fought hopping from leaves to branches over trunks
Until both loss energy, parting ways once again
Their battle has come to an end, but the men
were ordered to go to the palace into the king's home
Both stood on the red carpet in front of his throne
shocked to see each other, brought to reach the other
The king suggested them to end the rivalry and be brothers

His royalty must be buried in the soils of hell
His dark reign will be toyed with as well
His sorcery must be spoiled with spells
Only the two of you as allies can boil and melt
his plans; They shall be foiled and dealt with
Our land is in danger so stab this demon leader
in his hairless head and blue lips that breath in ether
Take his head off just like he's done to our comrades
and we'll spawn flags of our people with our second army
who will complete righting these wrongs, lads.

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[Ntalek]

Very well written drop you have here..What I like about your writing is your ability to be very descripitve...placing in overwhelming imagery and just your fitting flow...shit that's everything..it takes to be a great writer..almost..but this piece here was nice...I like how the stroy itself had so much relation to the topic..it was amazing...and the twist you put on the entire drop was good as well..with them teaming up to take one man..whose intentions weren't the best..throughout the drop there were many quotables..but I just think the drop itself was..to well put together to pull them out..so overall..I'd say this was a good drop...not one of your best..but still up to par as far as what I'd expect to read from you..good read..and great write..E.S...word...RTF pls...

Politics As Usual.

[Theorem]

nice drop, your flow was on point to being with, but then at the beginning of the second stanza it lost steam and seemed forced, but your descriptive skills and imagery overpowered the weakend flow and made for a nice read, the rhyme scheme in itself was dope and your flow picked back up towards the end, the subject was somewhat creative and that picture was great, i would love to write to that one day, good shit tho homie

[H.Notik]

this was a good piece. i thought you could have made the first verse mesh with the second a little more in terms of relevance, but it all came together very nicely at the end. good shit.

i'll be on the look out for more of your stuff..... good read!

keep building..

[×QueeN×eMCee×]

this was very well written, i thought the flow in the second verse was better.. but overall it went together nicely. U know how to use words n u dont over do vocab. i understtod everything and yeah.. real nice drop, keep doin ya thing.
peaCe

[Facts Machine]

thanks, folks.

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