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Lethal Lyricists League Heavyweight Title Bout
Champion: Lay Doubt. vs. #1 Contender: Ancel.
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probably like 14, max out at 18.
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word up son. let's do this.
Been a real one.
i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
fall the fuck back.
2 rematches in 2 weeks?
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
:RBman:
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i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
THIS JUST CAME OFF BASIC, STATEMENT
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
THIS WAS BLAND TOO
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
BETTER WORDPLAY, DECENT
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
OK, THIS CAME OFF HARSHER
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
CAUGHT ON IT?...YEAH I GET THE WORDPLAY IDEA BUT NAH
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
WHO? DONT GET IT
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
AIIGHT
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
OK
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
DID HE BITE FROM RIVAL?, IONO ITS DECENT
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
COULD PULLED IT OFF BETTER, BUT AIIGHT
vs
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
YEAH AIIGHT
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
PLAYED IDEA, CAME OFF OK I GUESS, BUT NAH
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
DECENT IDEA, AIIGHT
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
NO
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
JUST DIDNT COME OFF HARSH
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
EH
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
YEAH, BUT SO WOULD MOST, SO NOT REALLY
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
EH
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
GOOD IDEA, DIDNT PULL IT OFF
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
SEEN IT BEFORE
AFTER READING LAYS I THOUGHT ANC WOULD WIN. HE DIDNT, A LOT OF IDEAS IN HERE BY BOTH THAT DIDNT COME OFF AS THEY COULD, BUT OVERALL IMPRESSION WAS LAY EDGED IT.CLOSE
V/LAY DOUBT
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
timothy mcveigh was responsible for the oklahoma city bombings..which abbreviated is OK. and uh, yeah in our last battle he used a line that Rival already used.
Originally Posted by Ancel in our last battle
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; September 5th, 2007 at 03:20 PM
Been a real one.
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
sick
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
ha ha nice. Don't know if kids will catch the T - U thing, but I liked it.
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
lmao
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
ha nice twist on the whole ticket for dropping garbage concept
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
decent
vs
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
ok
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
ha.. cruel.
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
if there was a dude named neutral, this would be hot. instead it's ok
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
ok I guess
Alot of played concepts in both, but I never mind something I've seen before IF it's done better or differently.. but this battle overall was too many corny attempts at personals and not enough solid concepts. Not a bad read, just not HW worthy... but Lay did come with a couple of decent concepts, Ancel only had the fingerprints really, a huge let down compared to last week's verse against Born..
v/ Lay
i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
..haha, not bad for an opener, but this kind'a concepts played. could'a been fresher if worded or made into a better idea, though..
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
..haha, seen mouth off jokes, but u made this dope..
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
..once again, seen shit like this but once again, u made it fresh..
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
..ah. but naw. i get it i just wasn't feelin it..
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
..haha! it wasn't hard but it was funny. coolz..
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
..what what! this was dope..
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
..HOLY SHIT! fuckin sick! lmaoz..
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
..haha! this was just funny, not a huge impact, yo..
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
..oh shit! i got this right off the bat! nice..
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
..coolz. nuttin OMGZ, but straiight..
vs.
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
..not a bad concept. but the idea's kind'a old..
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
..naw, nuttin too witty. seen shit like this before..
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
..ha! this was pretty funny. i liked the imagery..
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
..haha! nother good imagery line. like, murderously clever, yo..
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
..uh, like $pit said, it would'a been doper if there was someone named neutral, but i like the idea. freshness..
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
..naw. not really feelin this..
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
..haha. riight, but nuttin special here..
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
..naw. i've seen lines like this before. i've used one myself in the past, but i think u could'a refreshened it, nawmeanz?..
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
..OH! niceness. was feelin this alot..
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
..haha, aiight. but it wasn't GREAT to me..
ok, pretty dope battle. was feelin both verses. lay, dawg.. it was just punch after punch wit you. u killed that shit. good flow and all. definately a nice verse. ancel, u had a good verse to, just some play'd or weak concepts. s'all good though. u were killin it in some parts. not bad overall. but in the long runz, lay had this. took it completely. good battle guyz.
v/ lay doubt
hey lay- its kind of pointless to sway when your already catching votes dude. rofl
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lol wtf you smokin? i took those questions as if they were directed to me, seeing as it's his response to my verse. if someone doesn't understand a line explaining it to them isn't swaying. and i coulda just posted the albino lines in my verse but i didn't wanna clutter it up. but yeah anyway, get ya shit straight cuz there's a difference between swaying and explanations rofl.
i assumed he wanted an answer. ^
Been a real one.
i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
Lol, pretty funny.
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
Kinda played, pretty funny.
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
Good.
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
Eh.. filler.
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
Ahh, good.
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
Good, but watch yourself with the OKC shit cuzz.
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
LOL
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
LOL
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
OK
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
LOL, good closer.
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
..not a bad concept. but the idea's kind'a old..
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
..no
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
..ha!
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
..haha!
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
..uh, like $pit said, it would'a been doper if there was someone named neutral.
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
..No
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
..haha.
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
ok
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
..OH! nice
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
..haha, aiight.
V/ Lay Doubt
i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
heh, okay.
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
nice concept.. didn't like the wording.
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
rofl, loved this.
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
meh, no.
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
eh.. it's alright.
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
hehe, good.
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
i've seen way too many wireless rollover minute jokes. actually just saw one on television yesterday on that "yo momma" show. lol
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
ohh, shit.. lol.
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
eh... okay personal.
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
eh...
vs
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
heh, okay.
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
eh... nope.
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
okay.
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
it's alright, kind'a cool.
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
i've seen this in different forms.. some also similar.
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
meh.. not really.
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
heh, cool personal, but could also be true for you too.
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
eh...
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
no, not really..
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
heh, cool..
decent battle.. liked a lot of lay's lines and some of ancels.. but i felt this time that lay doubt took this whole match quite comfortably.
vote Lay Doubt
feedback cos I'm nice like that...
i don't have to say how i'm better than you or brag that i'm dope
when your punk ass already did that for me in the mag that you wrote
^^played
this faggot's a joke n if you talk shit i'll end up smacking a bitch
you can try to mouth off..till you realize it's always attached to my dick
^^yeah
hoe you wacker than shit, the funny part is i ain't even trying
cuz even if your talent flares up..
..it'll take more than a distress signal to save you from dying
^^not bad, not amazing
with the heat i'm greatly applying you better pray hard for some luck
i got dopeness down to a tee..but i can't stop u from being garbage as fuck
^^concept is aight, woulda worded it different
you retarded or what? ya material's soft, s'why you never dropping sick
so when there's a list of wack kids..it's no surprise you're always cotton knit
^^not sure I get this
plus all the bombs i spit ensure you won't achieve victory with lay
cuz if you post an OK verse..then i must fucking be Timothy McVeigh
^^pretty creative, but more self glory than insult, you know this
i'm stunned by ya chick n what she weighs, she looks tired n worthless
fuck a bed..that bitch breaks a sweat trying to rollover on her wireless service
^^lol again, but not directed at him, but yeah like it
best admire my purpose, i'm known to get quoted in lots of raps
only time you get recited..it's just another violation for dropping trash
^^yeah aight
don't bother talking back, last battle you got merked cuz i'm tight son
so if you get out of line..you'll just find some more Rival verses to bite from
^^aight
i heard you can write some, but all i'm seeing is various weak shit
and bitch battling me was a grave mistake that left you buried beneath it
^^bit simple but nicely executed
vs.
First Born, now you. battling these whacks has got me impatient
And the only transition in bars was going from old onto ancient
^^bit plain, ok
i always got focused attack, it's straight to the rope for this fag
that could only have the title over me when Smoka posted the match
^^aight
& people see you as crazy! your witty, original and with that said
your mind set goes along perfect with the trophy i made out of your head
^^heh not bad
Jabbin this fag, dippin and diving because you cant get ahead
With a fresh pair of gloves, coverin the fingerprints on your neck
^^aight
When did the league worship this dude? he fell off for a career
fuck taking the driver seat, he's been riding neutral for years
^^aight
You ain't shit hit the curb, you act like a bitch and thats word
even cassidys bitin' his lip thinkin' he's rocked by a her
^^bit reaching there, know what I mean
The weeks bringin' back feelings, seems like the time to hit
post your hardest...and still get your ass outshined by $pit
^^personal, not bad
atleast you kinda hightened the season, yeah we take looks at doubt
and just give you the benefit, to always helpin' broke kids out
^^creative, but bit boring to me
I'm big dog now bitch, your barks make the worst noise from your mouth
'Cause man you pit bull...then just keep dropping a bunch of shit down
^^kinda gave it away early
that's the end of the reign, im cleaning house so deal with it kid
dude made a complete turn around...aka 360 back into still being shit.
^^nah reaching, and similar stuff's been done
well Lay had more high points in his verse...
v/ Lay doubt. will edit with breakdown later.
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