Lay Waste

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Lay Waste


Trapped -

Shackles on my purplish scarred wrist and ankles
Flesh dangles bones broken body bruised, tangle
Severely mangle stuck in a wall of war, wounds
Become sores for a play area of laughing swords
Flies mock my corpse happily buzz encore
Maggots nest and feast internally as blood poor.

Blood drips -

From a deep cut a fractured wrist and journeys
Through the deepest pits of my body, melodies
Of blood hit and feel in the abyss gashes, veins
Are ripped violins orchestrate immense pain
Mouth that was tamed from the desert air
Dares to tare a scream that lips couldn't bare

Skin Rips -

Lips severely damage mouth very dry as I yell
Help my vocals are dealt what the wind repels
Hence I dwell in limbo wrist to ankle shackle
Blood travels narrow passing my belly button
That was gutted from crows who glutton
Birds who wing a halo daily sing blatant

Ears -

Tones now my ears moan from Satan
Musical notes that chokes a swelled throat
And pokes joyfully at my flesh for comical
Relief as the blood flows towards my feet
Into the streets seeping through the cities
Cracks feeding the sewer rats.

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This was a really dope verse. Joker-like all the way. The wordplay was incredible through the whole read. Placed and chosen perfectly. The Imagery was insane. The Emotion was scary. it was a creative and original read. Rhyme scheme was DOPE. Flow was fluent. Sorry for the short feedback but I am a very positive person unless I don't like the piece. But I loved this piece. Nominated.

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