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Aight.
14-16? Idc
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don't matter, either way you lose.
Been a real one.
doesn't this kid come off as an annoying faggot?
you ain't deserving of props n you're mad at how appauling the truth is
you've been named champ..
..but referring to you by that is more illogical than calling you 'coop' is
are you always this stupid? all i saw was an ego with this kid's arrival
now you're a threat to the league..
..by giving it a reputation for being too easy to win the title
but you earned your belt n you've been on a dope binge when ya droppin
^ that's such a bad pair'a lies christopher reeves would cringe in his coffin
i'm rippin ya often, i heard it may take a little effort to toss this hoe quick
so i'll give you my all..but it's just for your punk ass to wash my clothes with
you got a winning streak but to show me some respect would be wiser
it'll be hard to end ya spurt..with blood gushing from ya neck like a geyser
i'm the best cuz i'm nicer, all gassed up but you're dropping weak dude
last time we saw coop on..
..it was just a discount on how many good lines it costs to beat you
you got delusions about being fresh and we can all see the disorder
cuz even if you unleash the dopeness..it would just run to be in my corner
14
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; August 24th, 2007 at 06:06 PM
So yeah... I'm moving into my college dorm TODAY, so can I have an extension till tonight?
If not, my bad, good verse
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dude you must have known you were going to be busy moving in your dorm and you had all week to write something up real quick. i work 40 hours a week and barely get on but i still managed to put up a verse. so now i'm supposed to give you an extension after you've read my verse, when you already know what you have to beat? that's kinda bullshit and if it was a regular battle i wouldn't care, but this is a champ match. i don't expect or want the title..so my idea is for us to be in a three way next week with the winner of the contendership. that seems fair to me. but i'm off to work now..peace.
Been a real one.
I still a bit confused... you takin the win?
I wrote 14 already, but i'm not really clear on what's happenin.
I'll wait for a response from you and/or a mod.
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post the fucking verse. lol.
14
All you do is bitch and whine, so, how could I ever be jealous?
Shit, Lay's been stomped on so much he's developed a fetish
Fuckin groupie. Readin ya shit? Even 'Cassidy the con' wept
Cuz it's sad, even swizz beats any kind of ya cheesy concepts
Sure we've seen Lay wit alotta girls, they must have absurd taste
Cuz we know what this pimp'll do... spread all over this nerd's face
So listen, you ever get a chick in a plane? You betta bend her, fool
Lay'll never be in the Mile High Club, yet always fucked up in general
It's crazy you from Cali, cuz you're acting like your in the best
But ya got such a small future, not even Hollywood
...............................................fit on ya door to success
It's obvious why you work at Sears. Why you gotta pretend for?
He grew outta Barbie, and now his faggot ass just wanted Kenmore
I play to win, and you fucked up by not taking the shameless win
Now when you get the silver, s'cuz we want you to do the same as him
Goodbye
Last edited by -Coop-; August 26th, 2007 at 02:50 AM
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you ain't deserving of props n you're mad at how appauling the truth is
you've been named champ..
..but referring to you by that is more illogical than calling you 'coop' is
stretched.. and im not feelin the concept
are you always this stupid? all i saw was an ego with this kid's arrival
now you're a threat to the league..
..by giving it a reputation for being too easy to win the title
not feelin this either
but you earned your belt n you've been on a dope binge when ya droppin
^ that's such a bad pair'a lies christopher reeves would cringe in his coffin
ehh decentish.. wording messed it up
i'm rippin ya often, i heard it may take a little effort to toss this hoe quick
so i'll give you my all..but it's just for your punk ass to wash my clothes with
Lol funny
you got a winning streak but to show me some respect would be wiser
it'll be hard to end ya spurt..with blood gushing from ya neck like a geyser
na didnt hit
i'm the best cuz i'm nicer, all gassed up but you're dropping weak dude
last time we saw coop on..
..it was just a discount on how many good lines it costs to beat you
played wordplay on him
you got delusions about being fresh and we can all see the disorder
cuz even if you unleash the dopeness..it would just run to be in my corner
ight
ehh not a very good verse nothing impressive most of ya lines were stretched
Vs
All you do is bitch and whine, so, how could I ever be jealous?
Shit, Lay's been stomped on so much he's developed a fetish
na
Fuckin groupie. Readin ya shit? Even 'Cassidy the con' wept
Cuz it's sad, even swizz beats any kind of ya cheesy concepts
Lol ok
Sure we've seen Lay wit alotta girls, they must have absurd taste
Cuz we know what this pimp'll do... spread all over this nerd's face
pimple ish is played out
So listen, you ever get a chick in a plane? You betta bend her, fool
Lay'll never be in the Mile High Club, yet always fucked up in general
decent
It's crazy you from Cali, cuz you're acting like your in the best
But ya got such a small future, not even Hollywood
...............................................fit on ya door to success
not feelin.. concept was blah
It's obvious why you work at Sears. Why you gotta pretend for?
He grew outta Barbie, and now his faggot ass just wanted Kenmore
Lmao
I play to win, and you fucked up by not taking the shameless win
Now when you get the silver, s'cuz we want you to do the same as him
ehh na
decent verse from you a couple ok hits, had enough to take the match though
V/ coop
you ain't deserving of props n you're mad at how appauling the truth is
you've been named champ..
..but referring to you by that is more illogical than calling you 'coop' is
meh
are you always this stupid? all i saw was an ego with this kid's arrival
now you're a threat to the league..
..by giving it a reputation for being too easy to win the title
iight
but you earned your belt n you've been on a dope binge when ya droppin
^ that's such a bad pair'a lies christopher reeves would cringe in his coffin
haha
i'm rippin ya often, i heard it may take a little effort to toss this hoe quick
so i'll give you my all..but it's just for your punk ass to wash my clothes with
lmao
you got a winning streak but to show me some respect would be wiser
it'll be hard to end ya spurt..with blood gushing from ya neck like a geyser
meh
i'm the best cuz i'm nicer, all gassed up but you're dropping weak dude
last time we saw coop on..
..it was just a discount on how many good lines it costs to beat you
never seen b4, but sounds played on him... iight tho
you got delusions about being fresh and we can all see the disorder
cuz even if you unleash the dopeness..it would just run to be in my corner
ight/ a lil bland
Vs
All you do is bitch and whine, so, how could I ever be jealous?
Shit, Lay's been stomped on so much he's developed a fetish
meh
Fuckin groupie. Readin ya shit? Even 'Cassidy the con' wept
Cuz it's sad, even swizz beats any kind of ya cheesy concepts
pointless connecting wordplay, punch iight tho
n i'm assuming swizz was linked with cheese
Sure we've seen Lay wit alotta girls, they must have absurd taste
Cuz we know what this pimp'll do... spread all over this nerd's face
played
So listen, you ever get a chick in a plane? You betta bend her, fool
Lay'll never be in the Mile High Club, yet always fucked up in general
coo
It's crazy you from Cali, cuz you're acting like your in the best
But ya got such a small future, not even Hollywood
...............................................fit on ya door to success
meh
It's obvious why you work at Sears. Why you gotta pretend for?
He grew outta Barbie, and now his faggot ass just wanted Kenmore
rofl, tight
I play to win, and you fucked up by not taking the shameless win
Now when you get the silver, s'cuz we want you to do the same as him
meh
V/lay doubt
barbie punch was a killer tho
you ain't deserving of props n you're mad at how appauling the truth is
you've been named champ..
..but referring to you by that is more illogical than calling you 'coop' is
^^meh
are you always this stupid? all i saw was an ego with this kid's arrival
now you're a threat to the league..
..by giving it a reputation for being too easy to win the title
^^yeah relevant but seen it done before, aight at best
but you earned your belt n you've been on a dope binge when ya droppin
^ that's such a bad pair'a lies christopher reeves would cringe in his coffin
^^not bad
i'm rippin ya often, i heard it may take a little effort to toss this hoe quick
so i'll give you my all..but it's just for your punk ass to wash my clothes with
^^aight
you got a winning streak but to show me some respect would be wiser
it'll be hard to end ya spurt..with blood gushing from ya neck like a geyser
^^yeah pretty cool
i'm the best cuz i'm nicer, all gassed up but you're dropping weak dude
last time we saw coop on..
..it was just a discount on how many good lines it costs to beat you
^^haha nice
you got delusions about being fresh and we can all see the disorder
cuz even if you unleash the dopeness..it would just run to be in my corner
^^not bad again
heated up towards the end, not bad overall
vs.
All you do is bitch and whine, so, how could I ever be jealous?
Shit, Lay's been stomped on so much he's developed a fetish
^^nah bad concept
Fuckin groupie. Readin ya shit? Even 'Cassidy the con' wept
Cuz it's sad, even swizz beats any kind of ya cheesy concepts
^^aight
Sure we've seen Lay wit alotta girls, they must have absurd taste
Cuz we know what this pimp'll do... spread all over this nerd's face
^^played wordplay but flipped freshly
So listen, you ever get a chick in a plane? You betta bend her, fool
Lay'll never be in the Mile High Club, yet always fucked up in general
^^ok
It's crazy you from Cali, cuz you're acting like your in the best
But ya got such a small future, not even Hollywood
...............................................fit on ya door to success
^^not bad
It's obvious why you work at Sears. Why you gotta pretend for?
He grew outta Barbie, and now his faggot ass just wanted Kenmore
^^yeah not bad
I play to win, and you fucked up by not taking the shameless win
Now when you get the silver, s'cuz we want you to do the same as him
^^aight
yeah s'pretty close, but I felt Lay's verse a little more
v/Lay doubt
pls vote on contendors
you ain't deserving of props n you're mad at how appauling the truth is
you've been named champ..
..but referring to you by that is more illogical than calling you 'coop' is
eh.. not really feeling this
are you always this stupid? all i saw was an ego with this kid's arrival
now you're a threat to the league..
..by giving it a reputation for being too easy to win the title
this was alright. but word i've seen this around.
but you earned your belt n you've been on a dope binge when ya droppin
^ that's such a bad pair'a lies christopher reeves would cringe in his coffin
ok this was cool.
i'm rippin ya often, i heard it may take a little effort to toss this hoe quick
so i'll give you my all..but it's just for your punk ass to wash my clothes with
ok.
you got a winning streak but to show me some respect would be wiser
it'll be hard to end ya spurt..with blood gushing from ya neck like a geyser
this was alright.
i'm the best cuz i'm nicer, all gassed up but you're dropping weak dude
last time we saw coop on..
..it was just a discount on how many good lines it costs to beat you
alright.
you got delusions about being fresh and we can all see the disorder
cuz even if you unleash the dopeness..it would just run to be in my corner
meh.. wasn't really feeling this though
vs
All you do is bitch and whine, so, how could I ever be jealous?
Shit, Lay's been stomped on so much he's developed a fetish
bleh.. didn't really like this.
Fuckin groupie. Readin ya shit? Even 'Cassidy the con' wept
Cuz it's sad, even swizz beats any kind of ya cheesy concepts
nah.. i know what ur getting at but nah..
Sure we've seen Lay wit alotta girls, they must have absurd taste
Cuz we know what this pimp'll do... spread all over this nerd's face
no.. seen this around.
So listen, you ever get a chick in a plane? You betta bend her, fool
Lay'll never be in the Mile High Club, yet always fucked up in general
ok this was pretty cool.
It's crazy you from Cali, cuz you're acting like your in the best
But ya got such a small future, not even Hollywood
...............................................fit on ya door to success
ok this was cool.
It's obvious why you work at Sears. Why you gotta pretend for?
He grew outta Barbie, and now his faggot ass just wanted Kenmore
lol. cool.
I play to win, and you fucked up by not taking the shameless win
Now when you get the silver, s'cuz we want you to do the same as him
ok cool closer
overall this was pretty close battle. i just felt la edged this here with his verse being more consistent. both came cool though. even though these champ matches haven't really been what they are supposed to be. but overall nice battle by both. but..
V. Lay Doubt.
Lay Doubt - didn't like the opener at all. threat to the league was meh. christopher reeves line was decent. give you my all was nice. nicely worded. geyser punch was decent. coop on was a little forced to me. maybe because of how i pronounce coupon. okay attempt though. closer was okay. you started off slow but picked it up in the middle. decent verse here.
Coop - opener was okay. didn't like the swizz beats line. see where you were going with it but i don't like it. pimple was pretty decent. mile high club was decent. hollywood was okay. kenmore line was nice. funny. closer? went over my head. sorry. couple of decent hits. the kenmore line was pretty sick. decent verse.
Overall - i have Coop winning here with a little more consistency. good battle.
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