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Last edited by Erupt; July 29th, 2007 at 07:21 PM
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sure..
Been a real one.
so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; July 26th, 2007 at 04:12 PM
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
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so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
NAH, THIS IS BASIC, YOU WORDED IT DECENT BUT STILL.
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
DECENT, DIDNT COME OFF THAT HARSH THO
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
MEH, ITS BASIC WORDPLAY
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
COOL
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
DONT GET THIS...SORRY
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
COOL
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
AGAIN, DECENT
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
AIIGHT
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
PRETTY GOOD CLOSER
vs
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
LOL
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
DECENT
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
DECENT
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
AIIGHT I GUESS
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
OK
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
HMM, OK BUT THE TROUSER/BELT THING BEEN DONE A LOT NOW.
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
OK
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
EH
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
COOL
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
NOT REALLY
LAY DIDNT SEEM THAT HARSH TO ME, CONCEPTS WERE AIIGHT, BUT IONO NOTHIN SEEMED THAT HARD HITTIN. COM JUST CAME MORE CONSISTENT BASICALLY WITH A FEW COOL LINES IN THERE.
V/COM
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
and advisory can't vote, he's been bitching at me all week, I wouldnt trust his vote to be honest
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so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
alright
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
not rlly feelin the execution on this
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
LOl, this was good
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
finally getting better here.
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
ehh.. not feelin this
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
lol, this was cool too
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
good again
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
this was good
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
not feeling the wording on this one.. culda been better, seems played too
vs
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
ROTFL.. this was nice, i like the comedy in ya verses
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
not rlly feeling this one
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
lol, ok
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
lol, ok again
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
lmao, funny again
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
um.. not feelin this one, YES i get it
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
not feelin
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
LOl, ok
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
nice
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
nice, harsh closer
Summary- well this battle was good. Both had quotables and both had punches that i wasnt rlly feelin. Lay dropped weaker then i expected, not as harsh as i was lookin for. COM dropped very funny and witty, and better then i thought. not is best, but i wasnt expecting him to show up.
im not one of those kids who vote gay. but its w/e. jus feedback since i cant vote
Vote- COM.
so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
unless there is wordplay on hallucinate that i am not gettin... too basic
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
aite
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
lol
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
aite
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
s'alright
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
lol
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
s'alright
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
nice
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
s'alright... brusing lines are gettin kinda played/old imo
Nice verse. On point. A couple lines made me chuckle and stuff, nothing that was reeeeal funny or hella hard but consistent throughout
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
s'alright
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
decent
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
s'alright
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
decent/coo personal
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
*goes into thread... finds pics*... s'alright diss, kinda basic
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
nice
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
lol
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
weeeeaaaaak. Usertitle punches be played in Front Lines man. Isnt orange the only word that doesnt rhyme with anything in the english language also?
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
coo
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
coulda been worded better but good
Decent battle. Not great but good. Nothing made me burst out laughing or anything. A couple chuckles here and there. I got Lay edging it out by like... less than a whisker. Had to reread the verses and stuff
v/ Lay
so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
ehh, nope.
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
decent ..
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
ehh, didn't like it. i've seen similar.
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
bleh, lame personal. it's alright.
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
alright.
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
lol, cool.
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
eh, okay. also have seen this 100 times used on COM, Chrit, Vaskez, M~M, BTK ..just seems like a common concept/line.
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
heh, okay.
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
ehh, nah.
vs
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
rofl, cool.
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
heh, again..
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
lmfao, good.
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
alright..
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
ehh, ok.
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
lol, good.
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
hah, okay.
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
mehh ..
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
LOL, funny.
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
eh, okay.
seemed a little obvious to me that COM outclassed in this matchup. i predicted this and it happened ..COM just has more experience on lay, and now that he's as polished as he use to be again, i don't see him being easily stopped.
vote COM
not in this week, but I figured y'all would appreciate a fair and relatively experienced vote
so i heard you take acid com, and dude i'm just taking a guess
but THAT must be the fucking reason you hallucinate you're the best
^^too basic
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
^^good wordplay,. not harsh tho
kids know i can rap n you don't pave the way with passionate rhymes
only a trendsetter cuz your faggot ass wants to work in fashion design
^^not too bad
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
^^played man
you ain't here from more than luck, there's no respect for this gay guy
i ain't seen a bum rap this bad since stoudemire was ejected from game five
^^heh aight
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
^^heh pretty good
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
^^played
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
^^not bad
ya clout is nothing hard, need to stop fronting like you ain't losing real quick
but you'll never show ya true colors..or at least until the bruising heals bitch
^^nice flip on this concept
vs.
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
^^haha nice flip
Think he's the meanest, you're gonna win?, you're just a myth of the past
So keep your head in the sand.. while I'm up here kicking your ass
^^not bad bit of wp
You're gassed, allready past it and you've let your pen goto rot
This is ain't a challenge.. its a time killer till Hens gets a shot
^^played concept, fresh wording
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
^^lmao, went to check this out, see it now
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
^^coulda done this much better
I'll leave you swearing at your browser, you're well aware that I'm louder
So why you wanting the belt? when its clear I'm wearing the trousers
^^played concept, butnice flip
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
^^heh, aight
And It don't matter if he's focused or what this prick has got for us
Because the only title this faggot's getting.. is written in orange
^^ok
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
^^bit reaching, made me laugh a bit tho
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
^^so he worked hard on his verse and he's not dead? eh
just felt Com's verse as a whole slightly more, though it's hard to separate if you look at lines individually
v/Com
n i know you'll probably test me so i better come dope in this match
cuz you're always crossing the line..out and starting over from scratch
Cool...
i laugh at your kind, this is MY league n i'm the one that's storming slut
but you've been consistent for years..as that dude who's 'warming up'
Nice-ish...
pussy i'm expected to stay fly so just disappear and be silent g
title run barely lasted a minute..ya girl'd be laughing in tears at the irony
Hilarious!!!
i'm feared cuz i'm violent see, ya join date got you in need of a massacre
1979 is just how long you've been in the shadows of feebs and spitacular
HAHAHAHAHA!!!
we all believe you're the wackest here and i'm now the one in charge
if you catch my drift..it'd send your frail ass flying about a hundred yards
Damn, nice shit again...
VS.
Bitch you weren't wanted I mean this, and your verse ain't the cleanest
But we learn from our mistakes...so I bet your mom is a genius
Damn, vicious opener...
There's only men on this block..no one gives a fuck about this homeless kid
You had to post your pic in Feebs thread just so people would notice it
HA!
And that lost you this race coz dude your bitch is a disgrace
or is there another reason you posistioned her so we can't see her face
Ouch!
And wow what the fuck happened? ya nuthing short of appauling
Lay was taught to say no to heroin, but it obviously ignored him
Haha!
Ya shit is bitten be honest, this abused prick's just a fad
...and remember if you're in doubt, then you're probably his dad
Gross, but funny...
This fag is craving my worth, you'll get blazed coz ya worse
Hard work never killed anyone, and Lay spent days on his verse
Nice ending...
Com dropped them bombs...
Lay didn't drop bad, some of his shit was really nice.
Just think Com brought more...wanted to keep that title more than Lay wanted to take it.
Com
Peace
dude, i only posted 18 lines and you dropped 20..
i don't give a fuck, feebs did even bitchier shit so i can too..shoulda checked how many lines i wrote man. now there's hella votes in already and you had the advantage of posting an extra punch. sorry..However, if a line limit has not been agreed on, then the second battler to post must match the amount of lines the first battler posted. If this is not done, then the thread will be closed.
Been a real one.
like I give a fuck try that bitchmove, I didnt count your lines, we agreed on twenty.
like anyone is gonna give you the title like this ... I LOL at your face
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well i'm not def not losing..i'm not expecting the title. but you posted more lines..that's your fault for nto checking. so whatever happens happens..
Been a real one.
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