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Verses due Friday 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Sunday 11:59pm EST
must vote on 5 battles and LEAVE LINKS
Swaying or feeding = Vote deduction
sup, 20 plenty?
Last edited by Philly®; March 31st, 2007 at 06:38 PM
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthlessOriginally Posted by Automatic.
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
20
Last edited by Philly®; March 30th, 2007 at 04:53 PM
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
quick 18, i gotta bounce.
Lol@LG for sayin that was quick.. but still u took the time out to find quotes.lol!!!stop lying,ur sayin that to save face if u lose.. now my breakdown.
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
^a bit bland.
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
^no,an the reason i say that is.. it doesnt make sense at all..biology/time of the month?? doesnt match up..
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
^Booo!
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
^Booo!
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
^Boo!
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Originally Posted by Philly® View Post
blah i dropped, the leagues getting closed why try
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Originally Posted by Vaskez View Post
lol you KNOW you tried philly
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
^sorta lol a lil...this was ok.
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
^No!!I used this concept here or on b.boys.
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
^What??
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Originally Posted by Philly® View Post
yes i edit my verse sine i see u looking at it 100x's a day
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
^BOOOOOO!!!
Overall/-one almost decent line.. rest was garbage.period.
vs.
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
^no
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
^didnt get this..dog??.. i dunno..
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Originally Posted by LG. View Post
i think he has a spit style actually but i dont think its him, which is why i said
auto cuz he has a spit style but doesnt do it as well.
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
^pretty cool.. ive seen the wordplay tho.
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
^Lol.Good one.. u won.
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
^Nah.flavorless gum here.
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
^Statementish.. an not witty either
Quote:
Originally Posted by LG. View Post
Thats wrong man... the type of muscle you build through weight training depends entirely on the amount of reps you do, anything from around 12 reps upwards is gonna give you big mass increases, but doing a maximum of say 5 - 8 reps (6 ideally) before failure means your using the optimum weight for strength training, which means you will be getting a high strength ratio to muscle mass. Lifting heavy is the only way to strength train.
yep.
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
^Ha,haaa!i dunno if u were actually talkin bout possible,but if u were good punch
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
^Blah.
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
^Boo!
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
^Playd
Overall/- 2 lines i thought were nice enough.. thats it.
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
vs.
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
Thats it.philly out did him here in all aspects.. LG(wow) atchu for that horrid attempt at dropping dope..an then in turn just being droppings of sum bird shit.
Philly.. bland.. but u had sum lol-able ones..
STONE THEM!!
v/-Philly
^ wtf the quotes were in the chat thread, its not as though i had to search for it :/
Philly
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
its ok
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
nice
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
sucked
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
sucks
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
nope
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
semi ok
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
nice
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
nice
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
not really
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
weak for a finish
Overall - the beginning of your verse was descent but fell off right after that, and then picked back up again toward the end. Descent read and flow but some of your concepts and name flips just didnt do that much, and i'm all for quotes to add to the personals but damn, you posted a novel of them just to drop a single punch on it, but all in all still a pretty solid.
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L.G.
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
ok
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
ehh not worded good
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
nope
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
sucks
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
sucks
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
ok
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
nope
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
nice
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
weak finish
Overall - Well you started off ok and i was expecting it to pick up but i was let down, you had original concepts but you couldnt find the wording that hit the best, you had a few personals too i guess but again, it was either bland or just not hard as a punch. I think Philly edged you out by a couple bars, descent battle but wasnt really close, I expected more from a defending champ.
VOTE - Philly
you better apppreciate detailed feed, hoes else I'ma stop giving it and vote like Meks
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
^^pretty good use but the concept wasnt that amazing, but you made the best of it
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
^^not bad, creative
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Originally Posted by LG. View Post
i think he has a spit style actually but i dont think its him, which is why i said auto cuz he has a spit style but doesnt do it as well.
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
^^I see by us/bias wordplay but dont get the punch
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
^^kinda reaching
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
^^aight
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
^^not too bad
Quote:
Originally Posted by LG. View Post
Thats wrong man... the type of muscle you build through weight training depends entirely on the amount of reps you do, anything from around 12 reps upwards is gonna give you big mass increases, but doing a maximum of say 5 - 8 reps (6 ideally) before failure means your using the optimum weight for strength training, which means you will be getting a high strength ratio to muscle mass. Lifting heavy is the only way to strength train.
yep.
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
^^yeah pretty good, I woulda liked it more if you molded the wordplay in smoother i.e. doing reps doesnt=getting a better rep, feel me?
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
^^nah forced wordplay
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
^^creative, not bad at all just coulda worded it smoother
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
^^haha
vs.
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
^^nah sayin he's neutral aint harsh
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
^^meh
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
^^haha not bad wordplay, coulda done more but still pretty creative
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
^^no wit
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
^^eh
Quote:
Originally Posted by Philly® View Post
blah i dropped, the leagues getting closed why try
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez View Post
lol you KNOW you tried philly
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
^^overused
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
^^wtf? How is he muslim? irrelevant
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
^^nah, baseless
Quote:
Originally Posted by Philly® View Post
yes i edit my verse sine i see u looking at it 100x's a day
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
^^meh, n rhyming the same word is gay unless you rhymed loads of words before it and the last word is "it"
v/Philly obviously
word to your momma's
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
GAY
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
hah cool
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
dont get it
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
not feelin it
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
ok
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
ok
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
dont have any reps makes no sense, but i get what u mean. if u said cuz u dont have one, thatd be cool. but this is just ok.
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
na
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
ok
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
aight
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
witty but not a good punch
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
no
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
meh
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
naaa
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
nope
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
ok
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
naa
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
naaa
philly won this with a more consistant verse and the gl line.
v/ philly
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
decent concept, wasn't feeling the punch...something missing
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
aight, but I think I've seen this done on him before
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
aight.... but it didn't really have any impact, cause your talking about a guy (auto) who to me doesn't have the same aura he had last season
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
not really feeling
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
missed me, sorry don't now what ya sayin' here, LRG?
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
aight.....barely
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
nice
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
cool flip on a played concept
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
decent concept....just wasn't punchie enough
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
naaah
Vs
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
heh
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
naaaah
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
lol
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
naaah, maybe if I go ahead and listen to it, this punch will have the impact, but I'm tired and can't be bothered
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
missed me
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
played, but aight taking into account the quote
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
decent concept, just wasn't feeling the punch
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
aiiiight....
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
played
I got LG taking this, more consistent, better punches and concepts. I don't know Philly you exhausted them Spit/Auto punches, esp the Auto punches, felt ya weren't really hitting him at all with them. I liked ya rep punch though, very nice, but with how well you've been doing in previous weeks, this was your off day.
nice battle here... i got philly takin it he was more consistent.... both had quite a few meh-ish ish but i thought both came iiight... the LG backwards line was kinda played to me i seen it before, used it myself a long time ago gainst him... still being 1x champ was cool, lrg was blah...pedophile ok-ish... fine woulda been better worded correctly... decent at best but kinda weak from u philly... Lg hard drive was iiiight...was ya first good bar...dork/talk, forced as hell on the rhyme.. pre write for spit was the last one i liked....
vote - philly.
Philly
kid can't hurt this, cuz every attempt u have at being dope is worthless
n it'a amazing how your names continues to correspond with wack ass verses
Bleh, ok
post quick n get burnt bitch.. motivations on my side bastard
while god kno's, your gonna need all of your name backwards
lol cool
guy's a actor, n u kno his whole style? god that shit's pitiful newb..
i mean it's ok by us.. but your bias side like your hip to dude
Nah yo
get bashed n brised, for this ass kicking will pound your face to meat
yea u baste lines offa $pit, 's why ALL ur punches are soft to me
Weak wording imo
keepin this discret, i'll make you a fashion trend, i'm mean..
cuz no1 really cares bout a LG.. unless there's a R inbetween
lolz
post n get creamed, while accomplishments aint ya shit, believe it son
YEA! your the "1x HW champ".. n u'll leave the match still being one :/
lol
now the heat comes, n weight training, o man u must be skinny..
so do as many rep's a possible son, cuz u currently don't have any
Nice cool bar
yea 20 lines is plenty, but bitching to ..?.. made me crack a smile
cuz last time u laid down 10.. just helped prove your a pedophile
Cool
i see u back at it fagget, but bitches don't like ugly ass males..
cuz last time u got a DAMN! FINE!.. ur pocket's got empty as hell
Nah
time will tell, if that shit's true^ bitches star at u?, i must begin..
with saying you get the obvious gaze.. proving u like other men
Hehe, ok
L.G.
No way this bitch was made to fight, your attacks? It’s safe to say are futile
Shit…even in school I was taught that PH is best to stay as neutral
aight
Speakin of school, ya girls like a teacher and ill be blunt to ya kid
See, we do biology… all you get is what time of the month it is
Nah weak concept
Ive seen many PC related puns, most are just getting sack less
Im just happy work-in a hard drive… every time ya bitch gives me random access
this stretched but ok
Peeped ya myspace… about Rizzo? Wtf stop ravin n rantin dork
Your music depressed me… but thanks, cuz I ROFL @ ure fake ass gangsta talk
no stretched again and weak
Truth is you aint repped “a hood” in ure whole life… bitch fuck ure band
Dude prolly made his shout outs with an A-Z in his hand
Wtf? nah
Talkin shit about me, when you knew from the start you were in for a bruisin
S’why I aint even dropped… n this pussy already makin up excuses for losing
Ok @ best
Ill smash this gay ass Muslim, punches make u hit the deck n lose ya heading
But Philly’s never register… ^like a last ditch attempt to avoid his forced wedding
Man stretched again
LLL’s closing… it’s came down to this, so best start to recite ya shit
And id say “see you in the playoffs”, but I doubt u got the time to pre write for spit
Lol...but stretched
I always peep ure verses when im writing, but im thinkin to save threads…
Maybe it’s best you mass move em all to the PLAYED thread?
Nah
Okay, LG your style is a bit weird due to the stretched lines which are usually the second, if thats a problem try using a set up in between the lines, and Philly came okay but some was a bit worded weird to where the punch didnt work
V- Philly
Philly kicked LG's ass n takes the belt like he said he would holla
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