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word up. soundz cool.
why you here you signed out?
lmfao shady fucking cheat
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its like,
bouta unfold Untold and expose why he’s such a fluke
But PLEASE make a career of this, and DIE slow from a nuke
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Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
I’m the shit you see, I pm’d him to drop quick with myself
He was just starting school, NO SHIT I thought you were atleast like 12
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
Cocky cunt, to put it blunt you should be hung drawn and quartered
And I don’t wish to alam you, but you’ll be next for the slaughter
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
I desire to be the greatest, you remain faithless, now I’m calling your bluff
A Championship match not pinned? I figured you here is sticky enough.
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i'm here.. gimme a sec.
sorry for the lateness.
haha.. sorry k, but stick with audio.
i ain't sayin shit, k!.. but watch this fag fall
cuz instead of callin u names.. i'd rather not call u at all
.
ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
un's gettin the last laugh, cuz i'm always able to bash fags
i'll leave ya like the grass on my lawn.. cut up and put in trash bags
i'm leavin u wet! a legend? ha! more like the greasiest vet
so it was easy to slide the win past ya.. since u were the easiest yet
its like,
bouta unfold Untold and expose why he’s such a fluke
But PLEASE make a career of this, and DIE slow from a nuke
NOT THAT HARSH
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Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
LOL OK
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
HUH?
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
LOL, TRUE
I’m the shit you see, I pm’d him to drop quick with myself
He was just starting school, NO SHIT I thought you were atleast like 12
OK
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
OK
Cocky cunt, to put it blunt you should be hung drawn and quartered
And I don’t wish to alam you, but you’ll be next for the slaughter
PRETY WEAK WORDPLAY, NOT THAT HARSH
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
LOL, OK
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
LOL,COOL
I desire to be the greatest, you remain faithless, now I’m calling your bluff
A Championship match not pinned? I figured you here is sticky enough.
NOT REALLY
vs
i ain't sayin shit, k!.. but watch this fag fall
cuz instead of callin u names.. i'd rather not call u at all
OK OPENER
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ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
OK I GUESS
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
LMAO, COOL
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
OK WORDPLAY HERE
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
OK
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
LOL, LIKED THIS
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
LOL
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
NOT BAD
un's gettin the last laugh, cuz i'm always able to bash fags
i'll leave ya like the grass on my lawn.. cut up and put in trash bags
NOT REALLY, FRESH CONCEPT, BUT NOT REALLY A DISS
i'm leavin u wet! a legend? ha! more like the greasiest vet
so it was easy to slide the win past ya.. since u were the easiest yet
OK CLOSER
AIIGHT, K U MAYBE HAD 3 OR 4 LINES THAT WERE DECENT. UNTOLD I FELT U FELL OFF TOWARDS THE END A BIT, BUT OVERALL I FELT UNTOLD HAD THE PAPERCHASE LINE AND INSTORE LINES WHICH WERE MY FAVOURITES IN THIS BATTLE, AND THE REST OF UNTOLDS VERSE JUST SLIGHTLY EDGED K`S WITH CONSISTENCY, N K I GOT WHERE YOU WERE GOING WITH THE ANYONE PUNCH, BUT THE WORDING ON IT DIDNT MAKE SENSE TO ME, BUT IT WOULDNT HAVE MADE A DIFF TO MY VOTE, SO IT DIDNT REALLY MATTER.....DECENT BATTLE GUYS BUT..
VOTE UNTOLD
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
its like,
bouta unfold Untold and expose why he’s such a fluke
But PLEASE make a career of this, and DIE slow from a nuke
^Meh....not feelin.
Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
^Decent.
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
^Iight. Didn't like the wording here though.
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
^Lol. Coo.
I’m the shit you see, I pm’d him to drop quick with myself
He was just starting school, NO SHIT I thought you were atleast like 12
^Meh....not feelin.
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
^Lol.
Cocky cunt, to put it blunt you should be hung drawn and quartered
And I don’t wish to alam you, but you’ll be next for the slaughter
^Iight.
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
^Lol. Good.
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
^Lol. Coo.
I desire to be the greatest, you remain faithless, now I’m calling your bluff
A Championship match not pinned? I figured you here is sticky enough.
^Decent.
vs.
i ain't sayin shit, k!.. but watch this fag fall
cuz instead of callin u names.. i'd rather not call u at all
^Iight.
ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
^Lol. Coo.
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
^Haha. Coo.
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
^Decent.
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
^Lol.
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
^Lol. Coo.
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
^Lmao. Good.
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
^Lol. Because I heard one of her songs.
un's gettin the last laugh, cuz i'm always able to bash fags
i'll leave ya like the grass on my lawn.. cut up and put in trash bags
^Decent.
i'm leavin u wet! a legend? ha! more like the greasiest vet
so it was easy to slide the win past ya.. since u were the easiest yet
^Iight.
Basically,
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
vs.
ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
Good battle here. Good concepts and ish from both. But I have Untold takin this one. K, you were a little in consistant is all. And I didn't like some of your wording on your concepts. Untold had better wording and more consistancy which allowed him to have more landing punches. And K, wanted to let you know that the Spit Fire line was kinda Dope.....just not enough to win the battle. So...
\\//Untold
bouta unfold Untold and expose why he’s such a fluke
But PLEASE make a career of this, and DIE slow from a nuke
Filler...didnt have impact at all to me
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Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
Lol kudos on that
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
Wording was like 'eh?'...of two?....
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
Sorry I didnt get this punch
I’m the shit you see, I pm’d him to drop quick with myself
He was just starting school, NO SHIT I thought you were atleast like 12
Straight, but sorted reaching for a personal here
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
Lol
Cocky cunt, to put it blunt you should be hung drawn and quartered
And I don’t wish to alam you, but you’ll be next for the slaughter
Lol
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
Lol
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
LMFAO
I desire to be the greatest, you remain faithless, now I’m calling your bluff
A Championship match not pinned? I figured you here is sticky enough.
Wow...this was blahza at best, sticky hair?....not much of a diss imo
Vs
i ain't sayin shit, k!.. but watch this fag fall
cuz instead of callin u names.. i'd rather not call u at all
Yeah not bad
ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
LOL...ok I dont know if thats true....
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
Yeah its aiiight
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
Yeah....iffy wordplay and wording
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
Ok I dont get this punch...
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
Blah...was like Ghosts...*walk in your shoes* or something punch, too similar so this was blaaaah imo
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
Yeah...aight
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
LOL
un's gettin the last laugh, cuz i'm always able to bash fags
i'll leave ya like the grass on my lawn.. cut up and put in trash bags
Yeah not bad, but was predictable how you were gon end it from *grass
i'm leavin u wet! a legend? ha! more like the greasiest vet
so it was easy to slide the win past ya.. since u were the easiest yet
Yeah not bad...but prolly false confidence here
V/K...to be honest he strung a few consistant bars together where I was LOL all the way through it, while Untold was up and down with his punches. Concepts were ok but some were not appealing to me. So yeah, K takes this on the back of better concepts compared to Untold and better wording w/ the punchlines.
Nice battle guys, stay up.
Man shit, this was pretty decent read. I will comment later a lot more, but I gotta run and just finished reading it, Congrats to you both K and Un. On the short version of the explanation. I gotta go with....
Untold
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its like,
bouta unfold Untold and expose why he’s such a fluke
But PLEASE make a career of this, and DIE slow from a nuke
nup
.
Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
lol meh
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
of 10/of 2 eh alright
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
lol aight
I’m the shit you see, I pm’d him to drop quick with myself
He was just starting school, NO SHIT I thought you were atleast like 12
ok
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
ok
Cocky cunt, to put it blunt you should be hung drawn and quartered
And I don’t wish to alam you, but you’ll be next for the slaughter
naw
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
lol aight
You weak fuck, I’m to tuff all fucked up and hitting higher
Fuck it I’ll even take this match to your face, and ROLF when you spit fire
lol nice... but *ROFL?*
I desire to be the greatest, you remain faithless, now I’m calling your bluff
A Championship match not pinned? I figured you here is sticky enough.
eh
vs
i ain't sayin shit, k!.. but watch this fag fall
cuz instead of callin u names.. i'd rather not call u at all
alright
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ya cock is stale, cuz if u tried to get a bitch, it'd flop as well
cuz u can't be straiight.. makin a thread tryin to find RB's hottest male
meh
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
lolz cool
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
yeah ok
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
okkk
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
lol cool
we'd never watch ya on tv! so u'll never see any fuckin riches
cuz if saw The View u gave us..
..it'd be sittin at a table with a bunch of ugly bitches
lolz
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
ok, i was going to use a paris hilton one this week but decided not to
un's gettin the last laugh, cuz i'm always able to bash fags
i'll leave ya like the grass on my lawn.. cut up and put in trash bags
meh
i'm leavin u wet! a legend? ha! more like the greasiest vet
so it was easy to slide the win past ya.. since u were the easiest yet
ok
ok both of you came decent k had a couple lines that i was feeling and untold fell of a but but i felt that untold had the more consistant verse
V.Untold
v/ Untold ..
This battle was deffinitley a toss up. both of you are near equal in skills if not equal and i figured it'd be really close. K had some nice lines and some garbage lines. but he still managed to get some good ones in there. The 0-3/5-3 line was a bit iffy for me because it wasn't that great of a diss. a weak personal really. and then untold had a line similar to my line on Kempo but it had a different artist and concept on the artist than mine so it was ok. both of you did good, but as you can see i've made my decision ..
Who you kidding here duke? Tolds what LLL’s been missing?
You came from nothing, and inherited your mothers description
i laughed a lot when i read this ..
You don’t fit in, beat com on a shit day, shit gay your threw
ANYONE could beat you often, lmfao even of two
this was cool, could've been worded better i think but cool.
Kids screwd, I’m thinking why not just be called Untold B?
Then I realised, IM Untold = 0-3 down against com and wins 5-3
this one's a bit iffy ..not really THAT great but ok.
Immature child, but fuck the beef son, it really isn’t my taste
ill hold you down, whilst the rest of the league kicks the smile from your face
its alright.
I’m more ofa vet than most, and not to boast but fuck who you beat
I’m not saying your concepts last week were played, it’s the rest of the league
this concept seems played though too ..dunno, seems like i've seen it a couple times.
vs.
ya nuttin pretty to look at, but ur dirt poor 'n fuckin trash
ur only on a paper chase.. cuz it keeps running from your ugly ass
funny, lol.
'n bands aint got shit to with this, but i'll be recitin 'em more, bruh
ur concepts couldn't be brandnew.. if that band was writin 'em for ya
hehe ..cool.
plus ur a snitch, pale as fuck and never winnin this shit
k's so white & nerdy.. weird al dedicated a WHOLE song to this bitch!
bleh at me using this concept THIS week with a diff artist on Kempo.
plenty ya spittin aint worth shit, so it's no wonder ya seldomly winnin
i'd say what u have instore.. but ur broke ass couldn't afford anythin in it
decent wordplay.
'n ya audio's suck ass cuz ur fake 'n can't get live, tyke
but if K's music's good, then Paris Hilton's album deserves to get 5 mic's
ok, decent again. not GREAT but decent.
Untold WINS (1-0)
K LOSES (0-1)
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