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Last edited by Jay Walker; September 20th, 2006 at 02:09 PM
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
cool, I'll only be going 20 due to me having three twelve hour shifts till saturday night...
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ok.
Originally Posted by Lovejuice.
my opinion is best battler = spitacular
but people wouldn't agree.
Ya bout to get stepped through, but keep ya memory in check dude
You only recognised Marv, coz he's the ONLY one who respects you
Your diss was smashed into dust.. your skill's corroded, you suck
Meet the only bitch who ever tried to step on my toes... with his nuts
Called you trash and its sticking.. I'm sick of this quitter bitching
$pit gets the wrong end of the stick..every time he's litter picking
I'm not alone in thinking you're past it n' you're quick to be gassed
Coz since the battles went up..you've been licking my ass,
You beating this kid's in the past, Com'll leave you sprawled with his shit
But watch $pit fight tooth and nail, coz he brawls like a bitch
The prick admits I'm in a zone, about your bitch? dick its known...
...that your only sight for sore eyes.. is when my next fist is thrown
Scruffy ho admit you're lay doubt..no need for the censorship
So bitch you better come clean, or at least spray some scent or shit
Prick you're insane, you've flipped.. lost your game n you've slipped
Coz texting isn't brain surgery.. which is a shame for $pit
I'll fucking maim this bitch, this moron would cheat outta greed
I mean how would you go by the book... when you can't even read?
Smack head and a faggot, if you got a needle $pit'll trade some
N they say charity begins at home, so thank this bitch for the AIDs one
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wtf? a no show?
can I get some feedback please?
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Ya bout to get stepped through, but keep ya memory in check dude
You only recognised Marv, coz he's the ONLY one who respects you
Lmfao
Your diss was smashed into dust.. your skill's corroded, you suck
Meet the only bitch who ever tried to step on my toes... with his nuts
aRgh...miss here, footphuckin' concept?
Called you trash and its sticking.. I'm sick of this quitter bitching
$pit gets the wrong end of the stick..every time he's litter picking
Not bad
I'm not alone in thinking you're past it n' you're quick to be gassed
Coz since the battles went up..you've been licking my ass,
True, true...
You beating this kid's in the past, Com'll leave you sprawled with his shit
But watch $pit fight tooth and nail, coz he brawls like a bitch
Lol
The prick admits I'm in a zone, about your bitch? dick its known...
...that your only sight for sore eyes.. is when my next fist is thrown
>_> miss here....
Scruffy ho admit you're lay doubt..no need for the censorship
So bitch you better come clean, or at least spray some scent or shit
LMFAO....
Prick you're insane, you've flipped.. lost your game n you've slipped
Coz texting isn't brain surgery.. which is a shame for $pit
DAMNNNNNNNNNN
I'll fucking maim this bitch, this moron would cheat outta greed
I mean how would you go by the book... when you can't even read?
aRgH...miss here, woulda been better directed at someone else...
Smack head and a faggot, if you got a needle $pit'll trade some
N they say charity begins at home, so thank this bitch for the AIDs one
Wow...this was pretty good flip..but didn't feel the way you ended it..Aids one?...Maybe I'm missing something...
Dope verse overall COM, if Spit had only turned up, bragging rights woulda been put to rest. Ah well, yall hav to find out in the playoffs or Finals?...
second punch was about me kicking him in the nuts..
the last punch was about an aids charity
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Damn,I was waiting on this battle...sheesh.this week really sucks due to no shows
so drop me some feedback dammit.. no shows are made a lot worse when you get no feedback
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Ya bout to get stepped through, but keep ya memory in check dude
You only recognised Marv, coz he's the ONLY one who respects you
your mum!!!!! teehee but yeah any line with my name in it is dope hollar.
Your diss was smashed into dust.. your skill's corroded, you suck
Meet the only bitch who ever tried to step on my toes... with his nuts
haha very witty indeed
Called you trash and its sticking.. I'm sick of this quitter bitching
$pit gets the wrong end of the stick..every time he's litter picking
think i seen this a couple times before, not that different from those i have seen neither, but good concept nonetheless
I'm not alone in thinking you're past it n' you're quick to be gassed
Coz since the battles went up..you've been licking my ass,
lmao true
You beating this kid's in the past, Com'll leave you sprawled with his shit
But watch $pit fight tooth and nail, coz he brawls like a bitch
hehe
The prick admits I'm in a zone, about your bitch? dick its known...
...that your only sight for sore eyes.. is when my next fist is thrown
seen this a few times before
Scruffy ho admit you're lay doubt..no need for the censorship
So bitch you better come clean, or at least spray some scent or shit
didn't like the wording, potentially a dope punch too
Prick you're insane, you've flipped.. lost your game n you've slipped
Coz texting isn't brain surgery.. which is a shame for $pit
roflmao
I'll fucking maim this bitch, this moron would cheat outta greed
I mean how would you go by the book... when you can't even read?
nyeh didn't like it personally
Smack head and a faggot, if you got a needle $pit'll trade some
N they say charity begins at home, so thank this bitch for the AIDs one
lmfao.
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(Here's some honest feed for taking the effort to post)
Ya bout to get stepped through, but keep ya memory in check dude
You only recognised Marv, coz he's the ONLY one who respects you
(weak opener, it's a diss, sure, but this punch is straight out the factory.)
Your diss was smashed into dust.. your skill's corroded, you suck
Meet the only bitch who ever tried to step on my toes... with his nuts
(wording just threw me off, nice punch)
Called you trash and its sticking.. I'm sick of this quitter bitching
$pit gets the wrong end of the stick..every time he's litter picking
(eh, nice cliche flip, pretty cool)
I'm not alone in thinking you're past it n' you're quick to be gassed
Coz since the battles went up..you've been licking my ass,
(i don't like this but maybe it's a personal id on't get)
You beating this kid's in the past, Com'll leave you sprawled with his shit
But watch $pit fight tooth and nail, coz he brawls like a bitch
(heh, cliche flip again, but not bad. pretty nice)
The prick admits I'm in a zone, about your bitch? dick its known...
...that your only sight for sore eyes.. is when my next fist is thrown
(mix up the cliches with other shit..but, yeah, decent)
Scruffy ho admit you're lay doubt..no need for the censorship
So bitch you better come clean, or at least spray some scent or shit
(didn't like the rhyme on this one, but liked the idea)
Prick you're insane, you've flipped.. lost your game n you've slipped
Coz texting isn't brain surgery.. which is a shame for $pit
(pretty good, except that expression is about giving brain surgery, not getting it..you know? still, liked the wording, to the point)
I'll fucking maim this bitch, this moron would cheat outta greed
I mean how would you go by the book... when you can't even read?
(i've seen better flips on this..)
Smack head and a faggot, if you got a needle $pit'll trade some
N they say charity begins at home, so thank this bitch for the AIDs one
(nah..cliche again..and weak tie-in..)
Sorry, didn't feel this verse much, feel like $pit might've taken it if he showed. not to say that you had a wack verse, because it wasn't wack - just keep expanding your repetoire and getting iller. peace
Last edited by Meters; September 24th, 2006 at 06:11 PM
the second bar is about me kicking him in the nuts...
cheers for the feed its appreciated
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sorry COM
I was busy at work all week and planned to drop on Saturday but ended up doing other shit that I needed to get done at home, sorry man I really wanted to show for this, decent verse, I woulda beat it, but yo I'll take my two losses like a man and see you next week when I sign back in.. figures we'd make some new rule and I'd have to be one of the first to get the punishment lol
and sorry to everyone in the league, I know you guys looked forward to our battle
pz
You beating this kid's in the past, Com'll leave you sprawled with his shit
But watch $pit fight tooth and nail, coz he brawls like a bitch
Scruffy ho admit you're lay doubt..no need for the censorship
So bitch you better come clean, or at least spray some scent or shit
those were sexy... nice verse... shame on the no show
me vs evolve..... GO
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