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    Confessions of a Holy man

    Confessions of a Holy Man

    Our father, who art in heaven
    Hallowed be thy name
    Thy kingdom come, thy will be done
    On earth as it is in heaven
    Give us this day, our daily bread
    And forgive us our trespasses
    As we forgive those, who trespass against us
    And lead us not in to temptation
    But deliver us from evil
    For thine is the kingdom
    The power and glory
    Forever and ever
    Amen


    Father I have sinned, my heart is soiled
    As my blood boils, in turmoil
    And my nerves coil, in to a knot
    I forgot, thy eyes will forever watch
    As I rot, victimized in this plot
    I beg, that thy will forgive
    Satan’s work is intangible
    Unimaginable evil in the hearts of men

    The specifications, of priesthood
    Means that I should, be devoted
    My sugar coated life has imploded
    My skin is eroded, I’m devoted
    To sinning, my chosen path is evil
    People think that my word is
    Believable, unconceivable lies
    Disguise, the flame in my eyes

    The child was merely six years old
    Untold are the mysteries about to
    Unfold. I saw him, lust over came me
    This mere baby, became my joy
    My toy, his soul I destroyed
    I am the object of evil
    Yet also the idol of love
    as dark as coal, and as white as a dove

    Like a bee, I will only sting once
    This fake front, that disguises my life
    My strife, I’ll end it all with a knife
    My whole life has been speculative
    Packages of pain, delivered to my door
    No more will I look at children with lust
    I’ve sussed what it is I need to do
    So now I say good bye to you

    The cold, sharp knife, slices through
    I’m licensed to, perform funerals
    But now someone will perform mine
    Before I, go I have to let you know
    That child did not die, it will continue to grow
    I hope, that it’s life hasn’t been destroyed
    I am truly sorry for the grief I have brought
    Goodbye I love you, My God

    Yours sincerely,
    Father Macnamara

    Father Macnamara was found slumped over his blood stained bible
    The little boy grew up to be a renowned paedophile


    Sin will forever be among us
    But we can learn to fight it
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    A tragidy...my best way to describe it... i liked the way you used the multiples to assist in the flow, however i believe you should have used more metaphores to assist in painting a more vivid picture in the readers mind. That said, i liked the whole vibe this piece gave, really good and the style with which it was writ allowed much capacity for atmosphere. I believe the atmosphere was good and overall this was a good OM. Keep it up and sooner or later a HOF will honour your efforts

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    No probs you my dog so it's natural i'll check out ya pieces

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    word it's appreaciated a lot....uppin for more feed

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    OMG this has been up for 16 hours and only one peice of feed

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    is anybody going to leave feed?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mak P
    A tragidy...my best way to describe it... i liked the way you used the multiples to assist in the flow, however i believe you should have used more metaphores to assist in painting a more vivid picture in the readers mind. That said, i liked the whole vibe this piece gave, really good and the style with which it was writ allowed much capacity for atmosphere. I believe the atmosphere was good and overall this was a good OM. Keep it up and sooner or later a HOF will honour your efforts

    I agree Wit Your a great poetic keep up the
    work and you'll soon be even greater I love
    this piece it grabed my attention and was
    worth readin unlike some poems I read before
    your dope manye sorry this is being slept on..

    Hit my poem Ice on Steel with some feed for
    me................................................ .......

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    thanks for the feed dude,it's appreciated

    and yea I'll leave fee on that now

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