Championship Match: Jay Walker (6-0) Vs. M~M (5-0)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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M~M

Vs.

Jay Walker

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[Mystery~Murdera]

in.

[Jay Walker]

30.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290045
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290049

[direct-flipin401]

its aliitle late but that shit was fresh mystery

[Jay Walker]

i saw ur cheap shots...


n if i was you, i'd go subliminal messages too , quick
it cant beat me but liminals messages are better than u prick
but really, philly was right about the name ridin n shit
cause u aint even drop, n kids is already ridin ya dick
but yo, i lied about the theaters.. i practically snack n board at 'em
a real movie buff.
.. n i dont mean what ya girls watchin to actually have an orgasm
whore, endorse the wreckin.. we endin streaks like the jake do n shit
so when u take my title.. its only because i've made you my bitch
u aint even twenty, unstable wit money n kids..? ur gay for reals
plus ya network.. s'more successful then the job that can pay ya bills
loser.. ya punches are transparent n its apparent ya agin myst
so how you gonna raise attention ?.. when you cant even raise ya kids
shank ya bitch.. you aint necessary, so i'm smashin ya rattle
only M urgency needed.. s'one of those rooms for u after this battle
u cant touch the kid. everybody thinks ur nothin bitch
take a mental note.. for example - even illy thinks ur fuckin shit
second comings runnin this. gunnin A.I., leavin ya layin in pee
u'll never have us on lock... dog all of us have already taken ya key
n dont be mistaken that we. think u'll rip it, n drop a whippin
when feeble said he joined A.I. so he could actually get some competition
dog, stop n listen..cuz not to mention ya best believe we muggin
but its good ur doin big things... cause even nique needs some lovin
check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin
speakin? you cant touch the heathen. drop this guy n for good
i aint into bestiality or anal.
.. so you know what i'm doin when i sodimize in the woods
puss.. i know u've won the league, i know that you're elite here
but no matter how much u've heard bravo. u still cant even eat their
i'm settlin steadily at home, this kid is on feet runnin
the closest u've ever been to home is hittin the delete button
u know ure weak cousin, u cant beat nothin when i floss my verse
have u speechless, u'll drop n voters'll think u're at a loss of words

[Mystery~Murdera]

not no showing. I have 16. I'm going 20 max.
Will post by 1.

[Mystery~Murdera]

J.Nash & Mr. Write are one in the same..




uh huh... yea...



I'm begginnin to rage, u cant stop me when i put pen to the page
Because if THAT verse is workin... we should lower the minimum wage
.
.
.

3. Jay Walker - Yea, thats right... I put myself at three, fuck you gone do bout it punk? lol.

2. Mystery Murderer - Season 4, Undefeated Champ. Would you expect anything less than this? Cause if so, you're stupid. Since this guy came back to the league, he hasnt lost yet. Probably like 20-30 battles, and nobodies been able to beat him yet... so why isnt he at number 1?

Who u steppin it to??? Better get it straight I'm a legend & dude..
havin ur greatest year ever... & YOU still think I'm better than you
I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
SC's some nice ish, quite a few legends I give y'a'll your props dun
Especially u... keepin ur head up when u're the only member who's not one
Just stop son... Key u suck and ur gettin that ass beat i hope you know!!
^^^^^ just what my lines woulda’ looked like if ur opponent showed
the title? you should know ur gone, u'll never be ahead dawg
if Jay Walks... then the league hopes the pitch took his head off
u said all that u can you've got no chance now off my pelvis, dyke
sig aint the first time u had a mike on ur back... <- & I definately spelled it right
Now I'm pinnin you bad, get off my dick I'm not into the fags
Even the Pheonix Suns know the nice Jay's begin & end with Nash
Begin to hash out an excuse for this abuse, now stop breathin
u recycled in preseason… 30 lines of garbage is simply not needed
I got heated and ur receiven a beaten easily, this is me toy’n
joined Second Coming… guess u think if u can’t beat’em, join’em
Tear at your joints & my come backs deathly but it figures dude..
Ur right, I CANT put u under a sheet… the Klan hates wiggers, too
need to listen to the truth… aint feelin nothing you’ve written, gawd
I’ve peeped ur crew roster… SC: Spit…&.. sometimes Chrit or Com
The shit has gone n hit the fan, bout to make your losses abundant
Claim u’re walkin through the league, guess the tart carts under funded
In case you’re wonderin I’m rap royalty, you’re more of a jester
And in terms of skill… you musta forgot to enroll this semester

[Mystery~Murdera]

We can vote now... Shouldn't be any hating
due to crew ish. I expect vets to act like vets
and vote fairly regardless of who won. If I lost
vote against me. If I won vote for me. But none
the less...

let the votes begin & Good battle either way Jay

[schizmatic]

I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
Fucking nice
I'm begginnin to rage, u cant stop me when i put pen to the page
Because if THAT verse is workin... we should lower the minimum wage
haha
the title? you should know ur gone, u'll never be ahead dawg
if Jay Walks... then the league hopes the pitch took his head off
funny
Tear at your joints & my come backs deathly but it figures dude..
Ur right, I CANT put u under a sheet… the Klan hates wiggers, too
lol man oh man
need to listen to the truth… aint feelin nothing you’ve written, gawd
I’ve peeped ur crew roster… SC: Spit…&.. sometimes Chrit or Com
Your a funny mother fucker dude

vs

whore, endorse the wreckin.. we endin streaks like the jake do n shit
so when u take my title.. its only because i've made you my bitch
haha
u aint even twenty, unstable wit money n kids..? ur gay for reals
plus ya network.. s'more successful then the job that can pay ya bills
loser.. ya punches are transparent n its apparent ya agin myst
so how you gonna raise attention ?.. when you cant even raise ya kids
cool
check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin
oh shit


This was close as shit, really liked this battle. Nothing was even close to wack from either. But MM had some stuff I REALLY liked. Jay was comin with all those personals tho, but still, I loved MMs verse. Shit hit hard. And dont think Im being biased with this vote or anything, because I dont care who anybody is or who has a rep, I know nothing about this site and never will.

So vote MM

later

[Philly®]

ok.. first let me say this will be a "who do u prefer battle"

there is no obvious winner

I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
I'm begginnin to rage, u cant stop me when i put pen to the page
Because if THAT verse is workin... we should lower the minimum wage
Tear at your joints & my come backs deathly but it figures dude..
Ur right, I CANT put u under a sheet… the Klan hates wiggers, too


vs

whore, endorse the wreckin.. we endin streaks like the jake do n shit
so when u take my title.. its only because i've made you my bitch
u aint even twenty, unstable wit money n kids..? ur gay for reals
plus ya network.. s'more successful then the job that can pay ya bills
loser.. ya punches are transparent n its apparent ya agin myst
so how you gonna raise attention ?.. when you cant even raise ya kids


V/M~M..

omly cuz i enjoyed his punches more due to humar and hardness..

really great read guy's

[Feeble]

i saw ur cheap shots...


n if i was you, i'd go subliminal messages too , quick
it cant beat me but liminals messages are better than u prick
Erm. No
but really, philly was right about the name ridin n shit
cause u aint even drop, n kids is already ridin ya dick
Alright
but yo, i lied about the theaters.. i practically snack n board at 'em
a real movie buff.
.. n i dont mean what ya girls watchin to actually have an orgasm
Alright, but no chick/mom disses/ etc plz
whore, endorse the wreckin.. we endin streaks like the jake do n shit
so when u take my title.. its only because i've made you my bitch
could've been worded better, above avg
u aint even twenty, unstable wit money n kids..? ur gay for reals
plus ya network.. s'more successful then the job that can pay ya bills
ok
loser.. ya punches are transparent n its apparent ya agin myst
so how you gonna raise attention ?.. when you cant even raise ya kids
played, 13th disciple used this same line way back, chrit then bit it.. you get my point. .
shank ya bitch.. you aint necessary, so i'm smashin ya rattle
only M urgency needed.. s'one of those rooms for u after this battle
good. fresh
u cant touch the kid. everybody thinks ur nothin bitch
take a mental note.. for example - even illy thinks ur fuckin shit
I can't say i get this.
second comings runnin this. gunnin A.I., leavin ya layin in pee
u'll never have us on lock... dog all of us have already taken ya key
its good. not particularly hard hitting vs M~M, but a good line either way... still hits M~M just not a direct approach type thing.
n dont be mistaken that we. think u'll rip it, n drop a whippin
when feeble said he joined A.I. so he could actually get some competition
lol. Good. ditto to my reply above
dog, stop n listen..cuz not to mention ya best believe we muggin
but its good ur doin big things... cause even nique needs some lovin
haha, ill
check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin
nice.
speakin? you cant touch the heathen. drop this guy n for good
i aint into bestiality or anal.
.. so you know what i'm doin when i sodimize in the woods
puss.. i know u've won the league, i know that you're elite here
but no matter how much u've heard bravo. u still cant even eat their
eh and eh
i'm settlin steadily at home, this kid is on feet runnin
the closest u've ever been to home is hittin the delete button
played
u know ure weak cousin, u cant beat nothin when i floss my verse
have u speechless, u'll drop n voters'll think u're at a loss of words
Its either filler or a play on "loss of words". if you were going for the loss on words thing its worded badly. barely recognizable.

jay walkers verse^
Be right baxck with breakdown of M~M's

[Feeble]

J.Nash & Mr. Write are one in the same..




uh huh... yea...



I'm begginnin to rage, u cant stop me when i put pen to the page
Because if THAT verse is workin... we should lower the minimum wage
ok. concept is played, havent seen this variation but its not impressive
.
.
.


Who u steppin it to??? Better get it straight I'm a legend & dude..
havin ur greatest year ever... & YOU still think I'm better than you
decent personal
I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
lol dope.
SC's some nice ish, quite a few legends I give y'a'll your props dun
Especially u... keepin ur head up when u're the only member who's not one
solid personal
Just stop son... Key u suck and ur gettin that ass beat i hope you know!!
^^^^^ just what my lines woulda’ looked like if ur opponent showed
average, its creative but doesn't hit that hard
the title? you should know ur gone, u'll never be ahead dawg
if Jay Walks... then the league hopes the pitch took his head off
avg
u said all that u can you've got no chance now off my pelvis, dyke
sig aint the first time u had a mike on ur back... <- & I definately spelled it right
avg
Now I'm pinnin you bad, get off my dick I'm not into the fags
Even the Pheonix Suns know the nice Jay's begin & end with Nash
alright
Begin to hash out an excuse for this abuse, now stop breathin
u recycled in preseason… 30 lines of garbage is simply not needed
avg
I got heated and ur receiven a beaten easily, this is me toy’n
joined Second Coming… guess u think if u can’t beat’em, join’em
above avg, almost good
Tear at your joints & my come backs deathly but it figures dude..
Ur right, I CANT put u under a sheet… the Klan hates wiggers, too
meh
need to listen to the truth… aint feelin nothing you’ve written, gawd
I’ve peeped ur crew roster… SC: Spit…&.. sometimes Chrit or com
ditto to jay's crew disses: funny, but not hard hitting so avg ...
The shit has gone n hit the fan, bout to make your losses abundant
Claim u’re walkin through the league, guess the tart carts under funded
dont get
In case you’re wonderin I’m rap royalty, you’re more of a jester
And in terms of skill… you musta forgot to enroll this semester
good

vote - will edit


jay: check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin
and the doing big things.
M~M: a lot of solid lines.... then theres the OJ line which was Ill - and a few others which were above average but not quite 'good' .. I'm leaning towards M~M here by a little. reason being, Jay walk had some hot disses...dont get me wrong...but then he also had line after line of nothing at the beginning, and other than his good lines, everything else was just whatever..


although by only a little, and i mean very little...

vote - M~M.

[Automatic.]

shank ya bitch.. you aint necessary, so i'm smashin ya rattle
only M urgency needed.. s'one of those rooms for u after this battle
second comings runnin this. gunnin A.I., leavin ya layin in pee
u'll never have us on lock... dog all of us have already taken ya key
n dont be mistaken that we. think u'll rip it, n drop a whippin
when feeble said he joined A.I. so he could actually get some competition
dog, stop n listen..cuz not to mention ya best believe we muggin
but its good ur doin big things... cause even nique needs some lovin
check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin

vs.

Who u steppin it to??? Better get it straight I'm a legend & dude..
havin ur greatest year ever... & YOU still think I'm better than you
I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
SC's some nice ish, quite a few legends I give y'a'll your props dun
Especially u... keepin ur head up when u're the only member who's not one
the title? you should know ur gone, u'll never be ahead dawg
if Jay Walks... then the league hopes the pitch took his head off
need to listen to the truth… aint feelin nothing you’ve written, gawd
I’ve peeped ur crew roster… SC: Spit…&.. sometimes Chrit or com
In case you’re wonderin I’m rap royalty, you’re more of a jester
And in terms of skill… you musta forgot to enroll this semester

Nice fuckin battle. I have MM winning with one quotable. jay, u cam really nice homie just not good enough to beat MM here. I really liked ur pinch of respect and the competition line, nice. MM i really liked ur OJ and that first personal. I think MM just edged this one out, great battle.

v/ MM

[Mystery~Murdera]

no matter what happens from here on out
Jay this was a good ass battle, I felt.

4-0

[Erupt]

loser.. ya punches are transparent n its apparent ya agin myst
so how you gonna raise attention ?.. when you cant even raise ya kids
shank ya bitch.. you aint necessary, so i'm smashin ya rattle
only M urgency needed.. s'one of those rooms for u after this battle
n dont be mistaken that we. think u'll rip it, n drop a whippin
when feeble said he joined A.I. so he could actually get some competition
dog, stop n listen..cuz not to mention ya best believe we muggin
but its good ur doin big things... cause even nique needs some lovin
check it herb, any respect is earned, n u aint cop nothing meanin...
when u get a pinch of respect, i'm only doin it so u stop fuckin dreamin


vs

I'm begginnin to rage, u cant stop me when i put pen to the page
Because if THAT verse is workin... we should lower the minimum wage
Who u steppin it to??? Better get it straight I'm a legend & dude..
havin ur greatest year ever... & YOU still think I'm better than you
I'm bettin that u think u'll receive the cash prize - ur literally priceless
because I'll never O.J.... but this week I'm sure as hell killin a white bitch
u said all that u can you've got no chance now off my pelvis, dyke
sig aint the first time u had a mike on ur back... <- & I definately spelled it right



nice battle folks,
i got jay taking this by one bar,

btw
I got heated and ur receiven a beaten easily, this is me toy’n
joined Second Coming… guess u think if u can’t beat’em, join’em
^thats crazy.. its the same as the line I used against J when he first joined last word,,
great minds eh?