The Championship: 05'-06'

[Mystery~Murdera]

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Mr.Write

Vs.

Mystery~Murdera



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[Mystery~Murdera]

due Friday of course...
checkin in.

[Mr W.Rite]

check in
im think at least 30

[Mystery~Murdera]

dunno bout you... but i need an extension till maybe sunday?
Cool?

[Mr W.Rite]

sunday is cool
a day or say extra wont hurt

[Mr W.Rite]

why mention this clown as text greatest-he’s only rehearsin for second
go check the forum, the only bitch not to have a verse that’s in legends
glad you made it…im exposing this prude, before u record the final stats
cus all you paved was a way to ensure you’d make it to the title match
this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
thought I lost to Keys, its cool, I’d never let this hoe offend me
knew he’d lose this round, so its only right he vote against me
think im scared of this dude, whatever…yup-im fixin to snitch
you only Big and Bold when your reading ya own signature, bitch
I prefer to come hard, dropping punches worse than ya mouth should get
and I’ll have M follow the L im givin-like he’s reading the alphabet
thought you were too good for text, not comin back-I wish u would
don’t call it a comeback, do us a favor and call it quits for good
the bells rung, the shows over, now you can get the hell on
so next time you do a text man, I hope its on your cell phone
this could go on forever, just be glad constraints would ever end it
you mocked my battled making legends, cus your was never mentioned
keep hiding behind an image..to me he just another odd coward
he probably takes off his shirt to type, and to flex his mod powers
I’ll turn this bitch into the biggest loser..and make u famous dude
best believe I aint no joke, but I cant say the same for you








-W.Rite

[Mystery~Murdera]

faggot i`m nasty with the text, i better see some respect payed
cuz i've murked alot of people
and i'll drop MK two, like Midway did last decade

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it’s all good , except your skills, so just pretend that ya winning
like Sega Genesis, we know MK aint been hot since the beginning

Fucka'...
I…


know bout your weight problem but dunno bout ur prospects
It’s like u cant fit ur frame so u resort to jackin his concepts
I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
A slump that you’re in??? Nahhhh, you can’t even speak
ur room for improvements more of a mansion on the beach
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
Mister you’ve done some nice ish but I’ve forgotten it all
Don’t be mad u fell off just happy you ain’t have far to fall
Aint hard at all, no gimmicks or tricks, ur a fair way writer..
& I’m the type to drop balls all over the fairway like tiger
I’m your idol and I’d like to say thanks for respect
But to properly look up to me you’d have to break ur neck
I’m blatant n yes it seems the voters saw that ur great
But if ur the next legend on deck.. it’s time to walk the plank
There aint a pause or escape, finals? How u got in it dude?
When YOU were MY age I had 5x the accomplishments u do
You’re through and I don’t know what sort of smoke ur toten
But you gotta be the biggest legendary joke since Token

[Mystery~Murdera]

uppin... for votes now...

[Daz]

FIRST VOTER!!!!!!!!!!

iight check.both of you came hard. not the hardest i believe that you could've come but hard enough to define this as a champ match. here's the line mathcup.

why mention this clown as text greatest-he’s only rehearsin for second
go check the forum, the only bitch not to have a verse that’s in legends
this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
thought I lost to Keys, its cool, I’d never let this hoe offend me
knew he’d lose this round, so its only right he vote against me
think im scared of this dude, whatever…yup-im fixin to snitch
you only Big and Bold when your reading ya own signature, bitch
I prefer to come hard, dropping punches worse than ya mouth should get
and I’ll have M follow the L im givin-like he’s reading the alphabet

thats ten for W.rite

Vs.

know bout your weight problem but dunno bout ur prospects
It’s like u cant fit ur frame so u resort to jackin his concepts
I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
A slump that you’re in??? Nahhhh, you can’t even speak
ur room for improvements more of a mansion on the beach
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
Mister you’ve done some nice ish but I’ve forgotten it all
Don’t be mad u fell off just happy you ain’t have far to fall

as for quotable lines. i have it tied. W.Rite had some gems throught his peice. and M~M you had the whole first lines. W.Rite you went back to some filler/ palyed shit like the text/cellphone line etc etc. M~M your second half of your verse was just bleh. Ego lines etc etc. i think based on the lines you both put in equal amount of effort. So.. for now. Vote tIE. ILL BE BACK TO DECIDE LATER.

[B.I.Detained.]

Mr.W.Rite:
glad you made it…im exposing this prude, before u record the final stats
cus all you paved was a way to ensure you’d make it to the title match
this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
think im scared of this dude, whatever…yup-im fixin to snitch
you only Big and Bold when your reading ya own signature, bitch
I’ll turn this bitch into the biggest loser..and make u famous dude
best believe I aint no joke, but I cant say the same for you

Summary:- Nice verse, Write. A lot of quotables and a very
consistent verse. The "signature" bar was the best for me because
it was to the point, and it flowed so fucking good. You had mad
multi's all over the place. I thought if the "alphabet" punch was
worded a little better, it woulda been dope. I just didn't feel it
all that much due to stop/starting. Nice verse though, man.

Mystery~Murdera:
know bout your weight problem but dunno bout ur prospects
It’s like u cant fit ur frame so u resort to jackin his concepts
I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
Mister you’ve done some nice ish but I’ve forgotten it all
Don’t be mad u fell off just happy you ain’t have far to fall

Summary:- Again, a nice/consistent verse. All the punches
I quoted, to me, were hard and dope. You had a spelling error
on the "far to fall" punch, but it still made me chuckle. You forgot
to put "BE happy" lol. Anyways, I thought the bush line was dope
and it actually made me laugh. I did think you got sloppy at the
end though. Which was a bit dissapoiting. But I can't complain..
overall, dope verse.

Overall:
What it comes down to for me in this battle, is comparing the quotables
and see who had the hardest/dopest punches. & its fucking hard!!
BUT, somebody has to win, and for me the person who came out on top
slighlty is..

Vote: Mystery~Murdera

Props.. dope battle guys.

[Jacent.]

Write

why mention this clown as text greatest-he’s only rehearsin for second
go check the forum, the only bitch not to have a verse that’s in legends
glad you made it…im exposing this prude, before u record the final stats
cus all you paved was a way to ensure you’d make it to the title match
this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
thought I lost to Keys, its cool, I’d never let this hoe offend me
knew he’d lose this round, so its only right he vote against me
think im scared of this dude, whatever…yup-im fixin to snitch
you only Big and Bold when your reading ya own signature, bitch
thought you were too good for text, not comin back-I wish u would
don’t call it a comeback, do us a favor and call it quits for good

m~m

I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
Mister you’ve done some nice ish but I’ve forgotten it all
Don’t be mad u fell off just happy you ain’t have far to fall
Aint hard at all, no gimmicks or tricks, ur a fair way writer..
& I’m the type to drop balls all over the fairway like tiger
I’m your idol and I’d like to say thanks for respect
But to properly look up to me you’d have to break ur neck
I’m blatant n yes it seems the voters saw that ur great
But if ur the next legend on deck.. it’s time to walk the plank


man write was hot in his first couple of lines, kinda fell off near the end w/ some weak disses....m~m was pretty coo throughout LMAO @ the walk the plank line good shit from both but i'ma go w/ m~m

[Mr W.Rite]

Nice verse M
shit was dope... that W/bush line had me rollin
should be a close finish man..

think its 2-0 your way right now
but we'll see

[Mystery~Murdera]

same here man... sorry i took so damn
long. hectic week. Mannn... I'ma give you
a personal after the battle closes that
prolly woulda ended me, had you known it.

[dotGod]

I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
I’m blatant n yes it seems the voters saw that ur great
But if ur the next legend on deck.. it’s time to walk the plank

vs

this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
thought I lost to Keys, its cool, I’d never let this hoe offend me
knew he’d lose this round, so its only right he vote against me

v/ M~M

[Vaskez]

why mention this clown as text greatest-he’s only rehearsin for second
go check the forum, the only bitch not to have a verse that’s in legends
^^aight personal, coulda made it funnier
glad you made it…im exposing this prude, before u record the final stats
cus all you paved was a way to ensure you’d make it to the title match
^^coulda worded it harsher imo
this guy is wack…stop spittin ya bars- u barely fittin to spar
only Mystery s’how every mod that runs the league keeps getting this far
^^heh, yeah pretty coo but maybe coulda done more with Mystery wordplay
thought I lost to Keys, its cool, I’d never let this hoe offend me
knew he’d lose this round, so its only right he vote against me
^^coo
think im scared of this dude, whatever…yup-im fixin to snitch
you only Big and Bold when your reading ya own signature, bitch
^^pretty coo
I prefer to come hard, dropping punches worse than ya mouth should get
and I’ll have M follow the L im givin-like he’s reading the alphabet
^^ok yeah works, but kinda simplistic for a legendary writer
thought you were too good for text, not comin back-I wish u would
don’t call it a comeback, do us a favor and call it quits for good
^^pretty nice but coulda been worded harsher
the bells rung, the shows over, now you can get the hell on
so next time you do a text man, I hope its on your cell phone
^^again harsher wording, instead of "hope" etc. woulda made it nicer
this could go on forever, just be glad constraints would ever end it
you mocked my battled making legends, cus your was never mentioned
^^heh better than opener, same concept
keep hiding behind an image..to me he just another odd coward
he probably takes off his shirt to type, and to flex his mod powers
^^ok bit of play on meaning but not really harsh "odd coward"
I’ll turn this bitch into the biggest loser..and make u famous dude
best believe I aint no joke, but I cant say the same for you
^^kinda basic play on words

overall very consistent, nothing wack, but not too many outstanding lines IMO

vs.

know bout your weight problem but dunno bout ur prospects
It’s like u cant fit ur frame so u resort to jackin his concepts
^^pretty coo
I’m just.. comin for the win, must be having trouble with ur pen
…Because even Barbara Bush wouldn’t vote W again
^^lol
A slump that you’re in??? Nahhhh, you can’t even speak
ur room for improvements more of a mansion on the beach
^^heh pretty funny
stampin through this weak, find more lines to be flippin dude
verse took a second to write & second’s what it’s getting u
^^coo concept coulda been worded nicer imo
Mister you’ve done some nice ish but I’ve forgotten it all
Don’t be mad u fell off just happy you ain’t have far to fall
^^haha found this funny, nice flip
Aint hard at all, no gimmicks or tricks, ur a fair way writer..
& I’m the type to drop balls all over the fairway like tiger
^^dont see the harshness of it, maybe it's me, but nice simile on Tiger
I’m your idol and I’d like to say thanks for respect
But to properly look up to me you’d have to break ur neck
^^meh self glory
I’m blatant n yes it seems the voters saw that ur great
But if ur the next legend on deck.. it’s time to walk the plank
^^dont see how it's harsh
There aint a pause or escape, finals? How u got in it dude?
When YOU were MY age I had 5x the accomplishments u do
^^not really feelin it
You’re through and I don’t know what sort of smoke ur toten
But you gotta be the biggest legendary joke since Token
^^aight


I dunno I see it as Write being more consistent (less meh-ness), but out of the quotables only MM made me laugh, so even though Write had less meh lines, entertainment value in the quotables won over consistency, in my book

v/MM