LW Title - KempoMRK (4-1) vs U.Lose (3-1)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 6

Word Holiday Season is over

League has been cut

Each week there will be a boot match giving others the chance to get in...

Usual rules...Check by wednesday drop by friday

any problems pm me

good luck

Happy new year

[U. Lose]

6teen

[KempoMRK]

Yep.

[KempoMRK]

We came into this quite even but you ain't gonna beat me,
Cos my verses are so sweet...that they gave you diabetes,
The voters hate ya man, their breakdowns clown ya text,
Cos u get more "uhh"s than if you were having cyber sex,
Dudes crew's a joke, the image they have is hardly feared,
Cos the banner in his sig just shows us his head and ears,
Gotta stay healthy with food, ya need vitamins they say,
I'll just battle you...then I won't need any fruit all day,
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,
My punches'll smash through a bitch and leave ya fatigued,
You'll die cos of 16...like what'll happen to this league,
I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.

[Possible]

Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,


lmao^

[Piff Jones]

Lol that punch is so dope.

[U. Lose]

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest
before we even faced off i won... just quit shit raps
so this games a clean sweep like a Harry Potter Quidditch match
man im not lyin, u wack 'n weak with a shit flow
^and the TrusHurts. but u already know gettin beat by him 6-0
why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two
u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack
its sad to think of him good at text when this guy is square
Kem. display nice once a year like the Chem. section at a sciene fair
dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope
i'll scare u to death twice, break u in half, believe me bitch
snap K in fuckin half..
......he'll be even MORE Meaning Less like what it'll leave u with |<



ahah, one "dope" line wont beat me.

[.Adept.]

Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,
I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.

lol @ the last line

vs.

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest
before we even faced off i won... just quit shit raps
so this games a clean sweep like a Harry Potter Quidditch match
u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack
dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope

why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two
^^That line was decent too

U.Lose came dope...

v/U. Lose

[Piff Jones]

Kempo

We came into this quite even but you ain't gonna beat me,
Cos my verses are so sweet...that they gave you diabetes,
Ok
The voters hate ya man, their breakdowns clown ya text,
Cos u get more "uhh"s than if you were having cyber sex,
Booo
Dudes crew's a joke, the image they have is hardly feared,
Cos the banner in his sig just shows us his head and ears,
????
Gotta stay healthy with food, ya need vitamins they say,
I'll just battle you...then I won't need any fruit all day,
Nah
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
DOPE
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,
Lol cool
My punches'll smash through a bitch and leave ya fatigued,
You'll die cos of 16...like what'll happen to this league,
Decent
I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.
Was ok



U.Lose

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest
Nice
before we even faced off i won... just quit shit raps
so this games a clean sweep like a Harry Potter Quidditch match
Blah
man im not lyin, u wack 'n weak with a shit flow
^and the TrusHurts. but u already know gettin beat by him 6-0
The truth hurts shit is used all the time.
why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two
Cool concept but didn't hit hard.
u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack
Like this
its sad to think of him good at text when this guy is square
Kem. display nice once a year like the Chem. section at a sciene fair
I see what you tried to do. Didn't work though.
dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope
Ok I guess
i'll scare u to death twice, break u in half, believe me bitch
snap K in fuckin half..
......he'll be even MORE Meaning Less like what it'll leave u with |<
Weak closer.


V/ U.Lose. This was a good battle. both of you had some cool stuff. Kempo finished strong but U.Lose was doing pretty good most of his verse. He was more concistent. This was BOTW though. Good job to both of you.

[U. Lose]

yup.

[Lyrical God]

We came into this quite even but you ain't gonna beat me,
Cos my verses are so sweet...that they gave you diabetes,
nah weak
The voters hate ya man, their breakdowns clown ya text,
Cos u get more "uhh"s than if you were having cyber sex,
Nah
Dudes crew's a joke, the image they have is hardly feared,
Cos the banner in his sig just shows us his head and ears,
Ok
Gotta stay healthy with food, ya need vitamins they say,
I'll just battle you...then I won't need any fruit all day,
Sayin he's gay but wasnt a hard hitter
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
LMFAO DOPE
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,
HAHA good
My punches'll smash through a bitch and leave ya fatigued,
You'll die cos of 16...like what'll happen to this league,
pretty good
I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.
Lol good closer

Vs.

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest
Lol nice
before we even faced off i won... just quit shit raps
so this games a clean sweep like a Harry Potter Quidditch match
Nah weak
man im not lyin, u wack 'n weak with a shit flow
^and the TrusHurts. but u already know gettin beat by him 6-0
Played and weak
why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two
Nice concept
u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack
Nice
its sad to think of him good at text when this guy is square
Kem. display nice once a year like the Chem. section at a sciene fair
Worded badly made it weak
dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope
Lol nice
i'll scare u to death twice, break u in half, believe me bitch
snap K in fuckin half..
......he'll be even MORE Meaning Less like what it'll leave u with |<
Nah weak


Damn this is easily battle of the week, there was a few quotables from both of you...

Quotables


Kempo:

Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,

U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,

I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.


U.Lose

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest

why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two

u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack

dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope


This was a very close battle, and both of you had some dope lines. And although IMO kempo easily got the line of the battle with the mine'll collapse punch, ive got u.lose winnin this by 1 punch. Good battle guys, keep it up

Vote/U.Lose

[Monstrous]

The voters hate ya man, their breakdowns clown ya text,
Cos u get more "uhh"s than if you were having cyber sex,
Dudes crew's a joke, the image they have is hardly feared,
Cos the banner in his sig just shows us his head and ears,
Gotta stay healthy with food, ya need vitamins they say,
I'll just battle you...then I won't need any fruit all day,
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,


vs

i'll scare u to death twice, break u in half, believe me bitch
snap K in fuckin half..
......he'll be even MORE Meaning Less like what it'll leave u with


Are you guys kidding me? one sided.


Kempo-came good, had good play off of words and creativity.

Ulose-came basic as fuck, as alot do in Jr. you usually drop much better then you did this time.

decent

v/kempo.

[Philly®]

We came into this quite even but you ain't gonna beat me,
Cos my verses are so sweet...that they gave you diabetes,
meh
The voters hate ya man, their breakdowns clown ya text,
Cos u get more "uhh"s than if you were having cyber sex,
ok
Dudes crew's a joke, the image they have is hardly feared,
Cos the banner in his sig just shows us his head and ears,
lol
Gotta stay healthy with food, ya need vitamins they say,
I'll just battle you...then I won't need any fruit all day,
meh
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
ok
U.Lose is hardly an apt name when none of ya punches hit,
Your verse must be family...as your bars are relatively shit,
dope
My punches'll smash through a bitch and leave ya fatigued,
You'll die cos of 16...like what'll happen to this league,
ok
I wouldn't imitate ya as your just the type to dodge me,
I'll be copying you though when I fuck your girl, dogggggie.
lmfao


vs.

u'll get ya chest rocked doggie till you chokin with ya breath
i'll make ya Errand quick when i deliver a hard notice to ya chest
ok
before we even faced off i won... just quit shit raps
so this games a clean sweep like a Harry Potter Quidditch match
meh
man im not lyin, u wack 'n weak with a shit flow
^and the TrusHurts. but u already know gettin beat by him 6-0
meh
why pit me against him when i'll just get win 4 dude
shit, at least theres a coincidence since he'll be seeing the 4-Two
nice
u droppin BULLSHIT, rules dont say to fuckin spoil ya rap??
they should state Nobleshit since ya dickriders are so loyal to wack
Nice
its sad to think of him good at text when this guy is square
Kem. display nice once a year like the Chem. section at a sciene fair
meh(wording)
dont see how you got this far fam so below i'll ignite ya hope
every damn battle K-pull-bull since he aint capable of writin dope
Lol
i'll scare u to death twice, break u in half, believe me bitch
snap K in fuckin half..
......he'll be even MORE Meaning Less like what it'll leave u with |<
meh


V/kemp for being more consistant.........both came pretty clever tho......i think kempo's relativly line had this took

[B.I.Detained.]

Kemp:
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,
My punches'll smash through a bitch and leave ya fatigued,
You'll die cos of 16...like what'll happen to this league,

U.Lose:
Honestly, man, I didn't feel anything you wrote. Everything
seemed realy forced. No hate or anything, I've just seen you write
a whole lot better.

Overall:
Kemp', your verse was ok. A couple of quotables stood out,
but a lot your wording was just wrong. But shit like that
can be worked on. U.Lose.. I've seen you write so much better
& I've laughed at a few of your verses but you just didn't
do anything here. Too many forced concepts.

Vote: Kempo.

[Keyser]

Kempo
Your punches are whack, they ain't the type to sting ya,
Mine'll collapse on you...n I don't mean the one in Virginia,

....^real nice, best in the battle you came with consistency but that was your best quote by far

U.Lose
Your verse was decent but your punches were never as consistent as kemps, seen alot better from u in earlier weeks

Vote Kemp (reasons already explained, one sided)