1-2, 1-2..
mic chekc.
1-2, 1-2..
mic chekc.
Last edited by This Aint Beef; December 22nd, 2006 at 03:34 PM
"A war on each street and only in death we rest
To move ahead with haste we sell our souls
We forget our comrades in order to prevail our goals"
^^That was deep.. pretty sick lil write up yo.. flow was nice.. a litte much on tha vocabulary though.. but a tight drop dawg.. keep on spittin like this man.. 1Luv
Peep my shiit "Makin it to tha Top!" http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250051
^agreed"A war on each street and only in death we rest
To move ahead with haste we sell our souls
We forget our comrades in order to prevail our goals"
^^That was deep.. pretty sick lil write up yo.. flow was nice.. a litte much on tha vocabulary though.. but a tight drop dawg.. keep on spittin like this man.. 1Luv
this had sum tight lines i liked the topic...keep writin man..you got potential totally..peace
I was thinkin the vocab was a bit over the top. I can work on that for next time. Thnx for the feed guys... will return the favour.
^^ up
com on yall, hit us up wit some feed... I will return the fav.
the inability to gain feedback....................
This was good man really liked the vocab you had in there, some really nice lines, and your structure was good throughout keep it up
Thnx bro... up
may I please get some feed??
dam its hard to get feed... ^up
last up then.
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