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    Peer Pressure

    .. my friends tryin to get me to do stuff thats cool but that i aint want to do
    inside of my mind i dispute....... thinkin if i should have fun and attribute
    its not a very intricate altercation.. but still inside its a very big complication
    my friends are waitin.. for an answer, and im still in my mind debatin..
    i dont wanna try it, i cant deny it, its somethin thats not right thing to do
    ... i gotta make up my mind soon, but im still askin my self what should i do?
    all i wanna do surmount this confusion, this situation has got me feelin stupid
    this battle between my good and bad side of my mind is gunna make me lose it
    .. i dont wanna be another statistic, but to my friends its hard to admit it
    when i say no to them all that im gonna hear from them is bitchin
    this is it kid.. its the time to make my discision........ im not gunna contribute..
    to the bad acts my friends do, ruinin there lives wit drugs.. if you ask me its stupid to do
    ima rise above this complication, rise above this occasion.. ill quit the debatin
    .. did you know 98% of teens tried or do marijuana in this god damn nation!?
    yeah its messed up, and im fed up.. i aint doin somethin i really dont have a desire for
    ima stop doin what my friends want me to do.. and start doin what i want more..
    Last edited by Mackin'; November 7th, 2005 at 05:12 PM

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    upp..

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    dope structure, lines were about perect in length, not too stetched, not too short, dope imagery and multies were pretty nice too

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    thanks..

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    uppin before i fall asleep. Zzz

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    Pretty dope piece Tuckzz. I was liking the concept of it, because, I, myself, was in this same situation. Obviously, you got through it better than I did... Besides all that, the piece is obvioulsy heart felt to you for the sense you don't want to be a statistic and thats good. But the thing that I wasn't feeling about this piece is the fact that there was no real big vocab. Start using more verbiage in your pieces and I see a brigt future for your OMs. Also, the way the last line flow'd, dopeness...

    Stay up. 0ne.

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    thanks for the feed homie.

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    kinda cool... i like how you hold true to your morals in a way... not much to say on this peice... basics where coverd... short and to the point... nothing really amazing... but defiantly nicely done... nice wordchoice and all keep it up...

    hit up one of my peices... there is plenty.

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    uppin.

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    anybody know a nba team thats sure to win tommorow ?
    While these bitches decend im transcending at this very moment the unwash cannot touch de golden


    It is not only anuff to suceed to suceed others must fail

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    dont freepost fool!

    *smack*

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    upitty up!

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    rhymes were good..pretty complex..this was pretty dope man..topic was cool..interestingt and creative..i enjoyed this the whole way..flow and stucutre is even and smooth all the time..nice drop..keep it up homie...peace...

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    uppin this.

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