Championship Match: M~M (8-0) Vs. Mr.Key (8-3)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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[Mystery~Murdera]

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[Mr. Key]

Check, 20 or more, what ever you wanna do.........

[Mr. Key]

Droppin now, wont have time later, drop soon,

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
Ur left idle n bare, u and ur crew’ll get slayed in burned
But that’s jus the kinda treatment that suits A.I…..like David Stern
In a grave you’ll learn, u cant get woman so this kid’ll be waitin
But im sure u’ll get a date with Maiya, when ur dead as that civilization
Vicious like Jason, n twice as evil, so now you’ll get beat duke
N when Im done u’ll need a Priest, Holmes worse than the Chiefs do
Ima beast dude, my punches swing, provin this fag is no equal
Fist'll be makin so much Contact, Helen Hunt’ll be asked back for a sequel
Then come back for ya people, seriously, Ill clap ya’ll whenever
Cause A.I all together is wack…..but Mystery's just wack altogether
You’ll never get better, s’why I cant respect this foe, at, all
Your style needs a change up, more than a pitcher with a slow, fastball
This fag falls, ugly homo, other gays are sayin it cant work
Cuz Shadows is a fag too….but EVEN HE'S claimin he’s got standards
And jerk, ya baby’s mom's a slut, don’t take to heart her lies
Bitch is like theme park visitors……the way she just parks then rides
But see were both alike…well besides the fact this mans a bore
Cuz I like to kid around…n you got a kid around you cant support

[Mystery~Murdera]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237627
^^^ Jabarri Keys… did I spell ur name right?


I’m…

bout to waste u bad, ur lack of skill just makes me mad
fuck the bullshit I ain’t gotta be Roy Jones to take a Jab
face the facts you’re huntin disaster n cant handle the kill
so usually when I CBS it’s key trying to channel his skill
I’ll dismantle ya will, you cant beat me I don’t bail or fall
don’t get bitchy, I know u got that persona’ – sale at the mall
Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback
I got more facts, fucka fake personal, how the hell is he ill
when those kid punches go well with that elementary skill
All I dos paste the pic of you & ya girl & dawg ur threw…
man it's nice to share your heart but stop hoggin the food
ur league interviews dope, tell niq next time that u see her
that it doesn’t take a fantasy that you can’t win in either
ya girl I been seen her, does she got any friends though’?
musta’ been hard getting that bitch… to leave the kennel
Seems your wins’ll stop here so I guess ur seasons over
Ur last streak was better & it got u fined for indecent exposure
I’m the meanest you know here, no you’re not the best key
if u DO win..loser of contendor’ll have to ghost for u next week
let’s not talk about sex b, I get pussy its best when it’s softer
but u get A.Hardaway in the back more than the Knicks roster

queer


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[Mystery~Murdera]

i'm uppin this

[Sergio...]

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
Ur left idle n bare, u and ur crew’ll get slayed in burned
But that’s jus the kinda treatment that suits A.I…..like David Stern
Then come back for ya people, seriously, Ill clap ya’ll whenever
Cause A.I all together is wack…..but Mystery's just wack altogether



vs


Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback
I got more facts, fucka fake personal, how the hell is he ill
when those kid punches go well with that elementary skill
All I dos paste the pic of you & ya girl & dawg ur threw…
man it's nice to share your heart but stop hoggin the food


same quotes



and both had their bad parts.

Key's Helen Hunt & Priest Holmes lines really urked me.
The baseball line I disliked a lot also. Mentioning his kid
is getting old as well.

I didn't like M~M pulling pic punches when his aint up...that's
just my opinion. And that CBS & streak lines I didn't like
cuz i seen em a few times. *remembers feeble*


I got the ones I quoted as a tie quality wise...so this is a harrrrrd
decision for me.














Vote-M~M



barely man...close battle.

[shadows.edge]

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
if you had worked in the album somehow in the setup, this would be good. a better way to go about this sort of line is to do one line previously about he's ugly, then setup something about the album, then go into the punch.
Ur left idle n bare, u and ur crew’ll get slayed in burned
But that’s jus the kinda treatment that suits A.I…..like David Stern
good wordplay almost, punch nonexistent
In a grave you’ll learn, u cant get woman so this kid’ll be waitin
But im sure u’ll get a date with Maiya, when ur dead as that civilization
meh. different. not terrible.
Vicious like Jason, n twice as evil, so now you’ll get beat duke
N when Im done u’ll need a Priest, Holmes worse than the Chiefs do
i almost like this
Ima beast dude, my punches swing, provin this fag is no equal
Fist'll be makin so much Contact, Helen Hunt’ll be asked back for a sequel
this is horrible.
Then come back for ya people, seriously, Ill clap ya’ll whenever
Cause A.I all together is wack…..but Mystery's just wack altogether
been done to death.
You’ll never get better, s’why I cant respect this foe, at, all
Your style needs a change up, more than a pitcher with a slow, fastball
terrible.
This fag falls, ugly homo, other gays are sayin it cant work
Cuz Shadows is a fag too….but EVEN HE'S claimin he’s got standards
fuck you too. by the way this line sucked hard.
And jerk, ya baby’s mom's a slut, don’t take to heart her lies
Bitch is like theme park visitors……the way she just parks then rides
you expect people to like this? my nuts and bolts line is like infinitely superior to this.
But see were both alike…well besides the fact this mans a bore
Cuz I like to kid around…n you got a kid around you cant support
good cuz its a personal with some wordplay. otherwise would be so-so at best

bout to waste u bad, ur lack of skill just makes me mad
fuck the bullshit I ain’t gotta be Roy Jones to take a Jab
ok.
face the facts you’re huntin disaster n cant handle the kill
so usually when I CBS it’s key trying to channel his skill
i think last time this was done people were complaining it had been done.
I’ll dismantle ya will, you cant beat me I don’t bail or fall
don’t get bitchy, I know u got that persona’ – sale at the mall
eh.
Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback
could have been worded better but i really like the concept a lot so i give this one like a B+.
I got more facts, fucka fake personal, how the hell is he ill
when those kid punches go well with that elementary skill
no.
All I dos paste the pic of you & ya girl & dawg ur threw…
man it's nice to share your heart but stop hoggin the food
not so much.
ur league interviews dope, tell niq next time that u see her
that it doesn’t take a fantasy that you can’t win in either
meh
ya girl I been seen her, does she got any friends though’?
musta’ been hard getting that bitch… to leave the kennel
no man
Seems your wins’ll stop here so I guess ur seasons over
Ur last streak was better & it got u fined for indecent exposure
concept been done
I’m the meanest you know here, no you’re not the best key
if u DO win..loser of contendor’ll have to ghost for u next week
pretty generic
let’s not talk about sex b, I get pussy its best when it’s softer
but u get A.Hardaway in the back more than the Knicks roster
again another concept that coulda been worded better but i liked.

Tough to vote on... m~m had clearly better concepts, neither of you should have gone more than ten though, because you both had crappy generic filler as the majority of your verse. m~m was more consistantly meh, Key had some truly terrible lines and some decent ones.

I'll vote later.

[Blackflags]

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
Vicious like Jason, n twice as evil, so now you’ll get beat duke
N when Im done u’ll need a Priest, Holmes worse than the Chiefs do
In a grave you’ll learn, u cant get woman so this kid’ll be waitin
But im sure u’ll get a date with Maiya, when ur dead as that civilization



Vs.



face the facts you’re huntin disaster n cant handle the kill
so usually when I CBS it’s key trying to channel his skill
^ OMG, That's So Fucking Dope
Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback
Jesus Mystery, Where Do You Come Up With This Shit??? iLL
I got more facts, fucka fake personal, how the hell is he ill
when those kid punches go well with that elementary skill
All I dos paste the pic of you & ya girl & dawg ur threw…
man it's nice to share your heart but stop hoggin the food
Seems your wins’ll stop here so I guess ur seasons over
Ur last streak was better & it got u fined for indecent exposure
let’s not talk about sex b, I get pussy its best when it’s softer
but u get A.Hardaway in the back more than the Knicks roster





Hmmmm. Lemme Think....Definately Gotta Go With Tex....

I Just Feel His Punches And Personals Were Twice As Dope.......His Structure For The Verse Just Seemed More Complex.....And His Text Flowed........Key, Your Verse Was iLL Son, But You Have To Have Some Form Of Flow, Even Though This Is Best.....But Best Of Respect To Both Emcees For Putting On A Good Battle


But I'm Gonna Have To Go With Tex!!!


So, Vote-- M~M



Pz.

[Mr. Key]

Word thanks for the votes so far, uppin...........

[Frame]

M~M I know i voted on this shit why was my vote deleted?

[Zed Peace]

Key:
In a grave you’ll learn, u cant get woman so this kid’ll be waitin
But im sure u’ll get a date with Maiya, when ur dead as that civilization
Then come back for ya people, seriously, Ill clap ya’ll whenever
Cause A.I all together is wack…..but Mystery's just wack altogether
But see were both alike…well besides the fact this mans a bore
Cuz I like to kid around…n you got a kid around you cant support

vs.

MM:
Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback
face the facts you’re huntin disaster n cant handle the kill
so usually when I CBS it’s key trying to channel his skill

At first read it looked like a dope battle. But reading some of the punches it wasn't actually that great. both had some really decent lines. The cbs line m had sounded corny but was actually quite good imo. I liked key's closer. Key just went more consistent i think. more quotables. so vote goes to him. good here.

v/ Mr. Key

[J.Hens.]

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
Ur left idle n bare, u and ur crew’ll get slayed in burned
But that’s jus the kinda treatment that suits A.I…..like David Stern
But see were both alike…well besides the fact this mans a bore
Cuz I like to kid around…n you got a kid around you cant support

vs.

Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback


yea, these are the lines that stood out to me. you both had some played lines, especially sports ones. key had the priest holmes one, and the change up one. then i wasnt feelin the park and ride ish. but MM had alot of wordplay i've seen, the CBS concept been flipped ever since Chino XL dropped it quite awhile ago. The fantasy line, seen that alot. And the hardaway, it was a flip, but the wordplay is really old. the streak concept was played too. same with the bitch/female dog references. I'm not trying to be mean here or anything, i'm just being straight forward. Basically it came down to lines i thought were original, and that hit harder. even though some of the lines key quoted were kinda simple, like that AI line, i liked it. and the beautiful struggle line was really well worded. MM's jockey line was dope though, liked that subtle wordplay.

anyways, vote- Key

[Mystery~Murdera]

Frame... I didnt delete your vote so unless
somebody else did it you must be confused.

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Your ugly as fuck, one look at u leaves our eyes in despair
So if the battles a beautiful struggle, its obviously a one sided affair
Vicious like Jason, n twice as evil, so now you’ll get beat duke
N when Im done u’ll need a Priest, Holmes worse than the Chiefs do
But see were both alike…well besides the fact this mans a bore
Cuz I like to kid around…n you got a kid around you cant support

Vs.

face the facts you’re huntin disaster n cant handle the kill
so usually when I CBS it’s key trying to channel his skill
Death suits u nice tailored n all, this makes it worse that
The league wouldn’t jockeys if we battled on horseback

Shit. Dope battle but i think Mr.Key BARELY got this.

v/ Mr.Key