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Thread: HW TITLE MATCH: Savir. (6-1) vs J.Hens. (6-1)

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    HW TITLE MATCH: Savir. (6-1) vs J.Hens. (6-1)

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    come out swingin.

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    i'm in.
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    my tounge i'll beat ya 2 death, put a knife in ya chest, by God im blessed, holding the british crest, from the underground of southampton town, holdin the crown of da british sound, and where proud fuck the euro keep the pound, dont adjust your sight, yeah im white spit lines the are tight, i'll do it all night, you aint nothing to me, your lines are empty, y'all only flea, i'll make you go crazy, how can show your face, cutting off below your waist, you disgrace...
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    i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
    & turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
    n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
    he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
    this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
    so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
    sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
    people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
    now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
    that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
    fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
    spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
    so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
    see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
    can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
    hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
    sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
    if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later


    sorry..lol..i just COULD NOT come up with the 20th line
    because of these mexicans in my house....they do no
    stop talking.
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    I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
    If you plan on goin toe to toe..
    ... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
    With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
    Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
    Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
    No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
    And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
    Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
    I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
    It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
    .. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
    We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
    Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
    I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
    I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
    MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
    See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
    You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
    Spit said come out swingin...
    ... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
    .
    .
    This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
    But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
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    lmao@ the two come out swingin lines, good shit Savir, good luck.
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    I figure a champ match always deserves breakdowns. So here we go...

    Quote Originally Posted by Savir.
    i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
    & turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
    some peeps may like it, i wasnt feeling it.
    n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
    he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
    lol. cool. i SWEAR i was gonna use a dame dash on industry this week. maybe we were seperated at birth (thank god )
    this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
    so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
    cool.
    sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
    people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
    LMAO.
    now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
    that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
    dope.
    fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
    spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
    hahahaha, cool.
    so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
    see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
    nah.
    can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
    hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
    ^...
    sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
    if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later
    cool.

    sorry..lol..i just COULD NOT come up with the 20th line
    because of these mexicans in my house....they do no
    stop talking.
    vs.
    Quote Originally Posted by J.Hens.
    I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
    If you plan on goin toe to toe..
    ... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
    dope.
    With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
    Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
    nice wording, cool punch, but i've just seen grave danger types to much.
    Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
    No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
    cool personal.
    And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
    Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
    uh...i'll ignore this one.
    I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
    It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
    .. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
    decent.
    We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
    Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
    lol. cool.
    I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
    I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
    dope.
    MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
    See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
    direct effect is played.
    You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
    Spit said come out swingin...
    ... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
    cool, i personally liked his better.
    .
    .
    This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
    But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
    lol.
    I dunno. First thoughts, I'm saying Savir took it... which is really surprising to me. It just didnt seem like you [Hens.] put the time you normally do into a verse. You didnt seem as creative as you usually come, and then you had a few played lines, ie. grave mistake, direct effect. I'm gonna go with the weed, and say Savir, but I'll come back later to check it out again, make sure I feel the same way.

    vote - Savir
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    i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
    & turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
    Nah
    n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
    he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
    nice
    this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
    so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
    Nice
    sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
    people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
    LMAO, Nice
    now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
    that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
    Not feelin
    fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
    spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
    LMFAO, Dope
    so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
    see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
    Lol, nice
    can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
    hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
    alright
    sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
    if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later
    nah

    I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
    If you plan on goin toe to toe..
    ... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
    Nice
    With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
    Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
    Seen the concept before, nothing special
    Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
    No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
    Lol, nice
    And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
    Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
    Nah
    I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
    It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
    .. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
    Lol, nice
    We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
    Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
    Dope
    I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
    I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
    NICE
    MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
    See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
    Coo
    You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
    Spit said come out swingin...
    ... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
    .Nice
    .
    This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
    But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
    Dope


    I got Savir taking this one. Ive seen Hens come much better. Savir surprised me. Hens came more consistent, but Savir came nicer, The lines of his that i liked, I liked more than Hens`s. If you know what i mean. Savir came harsher.
    Nice battle

    v/Sav
    Last edited by Violent.; October 1st, 2005 at 03:51 PM

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    honestly, that breakdown made no sense cannabarz.

    your breakdown of hensley's lines:

    Nice
    Seen the concept before, nothing special
    Lol, nice
    Nah
    Lol, nice
    Dope
    NICE
    Coo
    Nice
    Dope

    your breakdown of savir's lines:

    Nah
    nice
    Nice
    LMAO, Nice
    Not feelin
    LMFAO, Dope
    Lol, nice
    alright
    nah

    figure it out. =/
    Last edited by Lay Doubt.; October 1st, 2005 at 03:48 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.
    honestly, that breakdown made no sense cannabarz.

    your breakdown of hensley's lines:

    Nice
    Seen the concept before, nothing special
    Lol, nice
    Nah
    Lol, nice
    Dope
    NICE
    Coo
    Nice
    Dope

    your breakdown of savir's lines:

    Nah
    nice
    Nice
    LMAO, Nice
    Not feelin
    LMFAO, Dope
    Lol, nice
    alright
    nah

    figure it out. =/
    i was thinking the SAME thing. lmfao

    wtf stop copying other people's vote and make your own damn decisions

    trendy newbie voting muthafuckas
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    n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
    he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
    this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
    so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
    sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
    people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
    now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
    that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
    fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
    spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door

    vs

    I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
    If you plan on goin toe to toe..
    ... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
    With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
    Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
    I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
    I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
    MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
    See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
    You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
    Spit said come out swingin...
    ... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.

    LOL, i liked both of the Come out swingin punches, nice flips on that, anyway, this was close, Savir came dope, and for a guy who seems to hate wordplay, u used it alot and pretty well. Hens started off fire, but kinda started to weakin through the rest of the verse, He finished strong though. I would like to jus say its a tie, but nobody wants that, so ima reread the verses again.......*Plays Jeopardy music*....................shit, after rereading the verses i felt Sav's other lines that werent quotable were > than Hen's so my vote goes to Savir for consistency, good showing by both, but I felt some of Hen's other lines were to bland IMO. Good battle foos
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    Try reading underneath. I said i felt the lines i liked of Savs > Hensleys.

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    i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
    & turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
    this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
    so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
    sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
    people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
    fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
    spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door

    vs.

    I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
    If you plan on goin toe to toe..
    ... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
    With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
    Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
    I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
    I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant

    v/ sav

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