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    Please stay

    Girl i love you why you leaving
    a life without you,i ono if its even worth breathing
    Please baby im bleeding my soul to you,A tear runs down my cheek
    i cant see in to the future but i can see it looks bleek
    maybe if a tweak certain aspects of my life?
    Would you then stay,then grow to be my wife?
    this is like a knife if my chest im on my my knees
    baby im begging you,baby baby please
    stay here with my i pray
    sleep on it dont make desicions on the anger of today
    Il spend more time with you,and run life around ya
    My heart beat like a drum that day i found ya
    I was sure it was rite,in my head and my heart
    we an amazing team baby,i knew that from the start
    but now you wanna leave me for sum other guy
    and there nothing i can do about,part from sit here wit tears leaking from my eye.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89#post2936089
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...90#post2936090

    Okay thats one of my more emotional pieces please rate

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    dude, do yourself a favor and let her go. If she is leaving you for another guy, and you still want her... there is something wrong. I can understand missing her. but she betrayed your love and trust, and if it happened once, it can happen again. I know love is a world of ideals, where everything will work it self out. But in truth, reality is still spinnin' even if your head is. Man, everyday it will get easier, this was your first love, huh? Just try not to think about it, even though you still will 90% of the day, but get mad at yourself when you do. Your a good man, I can tell just by this piece, and she doesn't deserve you if she can act like that. Gaurunteed in a week or so you'll have found another young lass to philander with, and that will get you 3 steps closer to being over it. I understand your pain, went through it myself about a month ago. It does get easier. You'll be alright.
    peace

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    Yeh Don't Chase Pussy It's Nothing Fuck Her If She Left You For Him She Goin Leave Him For Another Nigga Dats How Hoes Are ~1~

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    yea dont stress it...sounds so cliche..but there are more (bitches) uh i mean fishes in tha sea...elevate your flow though.~1~


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    Yo thnx,but this piece was written bout 5months ago a few weeks befor a i turned 15,so what yall think of this like lyricaly nd yeah im well over her now!

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    nice drop... very deep........
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