Hey there!

It looks like you're enjoying Rap Battles Forum but haven't created an account yet. Why not take a minute to register for your own free account now? As a member you get free access to all of our forums and posts plus the ability to post your own messages, communicate directly with other members and much more. Register now!

Already a member? Login at the top of this page to stop seeing this message.

User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Introduction

  1. August 10th, 2005, 12:06 AM #1
    EvOLuTioN
    EvOLuTioN is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    Location
    New York City
    Age
    35
    Posts
    337
    Battle Record
    5-1

    Introduction

    Ah... I'm pretty new here so heres just a lil freestyle to pick up some weight..

    I'm tha ill rappa here to shut u out/
    All my fame and glory is enuf to make u pout/
    they call me Tha Evolution and ime here to roc tha mic/
    my skillz so tight they'll take one glance at me and tell yo ass to take a hike/
    They set a date for last week for u to go on tour, ten minutes lata u here dem bitches nockin on muh door/
    I also got the l00kz to score/
    while you sittin there thinkin how the hell do i fuck this whore/

    well anyway let me kno wat u thinkin mayb ile cya around the forums
    EvOLuTioN iz fo Da BesT

    !.::OPEN MICS::.!


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    !.::BATTLES::.!




    !.::GRAVEYARD::.!


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.




    "I'm not cocky, I'm confident
    So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment    "
    -JADAKISS

    I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
    Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
    -EvOLuTioN
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. August 10th, 2005, 01:07 AM #2
    sILLable
    sILLable is offline
    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Houston, Texas
    Age
    40
    Posts
    5,316
    Battle Record
    15-10
    you really need to elevate..your rhymes have simplcity disorder...na but for real..elvate your whole flow...and read tha rles bfore you post in here....you need two links to two replys youve made to some ones pieces on this site.~1`


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. August 10th, 2005, 07:27 AM #3
    Woganeen
    Woganeen is offline
    Since 1990 Woganeen's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    Location
    Australia
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,333
    Battle Record
    5-2
    well i do freestyle so i can say this, u need 2 elevate, ill read more of ur shit when u get better. peace

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    Overall Net Record= 28-13

    W-O-G
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. August 10th, 2005, 07:33 AM #4
    SunSpit
    Guest
    Yea homie i agree. Your vocab is 2 simple. Ur structure was ok but u flow was off at a lot of timez. But you can get betta. Juss keep droppin n elevatin.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. August 10th, 2005, 07:35 AM #5
    X-treme
    X-treme is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title! X-treme's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    London, U.K
    Age
    35
    Posts
    68
    Wot can i say really,you need to elevate and no real detail allthough the flow wasnt to bad the rest of it wernt gd homeie jus keep elevatin
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. August 10th, 2005, 05:31 PM #6
    CrazyCarl
    CrazyCarl is offline
    Dune Methane CrazyCarl's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Age
    37
    Posts
    1,866
    Battle Record
    3-0
    Take some time to compose a written. It will give readers a better feel for your true style, and the feedback you get will be more pertinent. This was simple, as people have said. Writing to a topic will help to become complex.
    Return the feedback
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=219649
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. An Introduction
    By ...Fini... in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: July 10th, 2008, 02:25 PM
  2. Da Introduction
    By Da-Gipht in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: February 4th, 2006, 04:33 PM
  3. My Introduction
    By Malicious Jynx in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: January 16th, 2005, 03:55 AM
  4. Introduction of Myself
    By Stealth Assassin in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: January 7th, 2005, 08:30 AM
  5. Introduction...
    By Kinetyk in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: December 19th, 2004, 12:32 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules