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    There Is No Light Without Dark

    There Is No Light Wihtout Dark

    our world is divided by two shades of life; light and dark
    each represent their own mysteries and journies to embark
    both kindle separate sparks, both create unique tales
    and when one of them flourishes...the other one fails
    a constant battle, between two sides of nature
    one symbolizing hope, the other brewed from hatred
    each having patrons, who are only there for guidance
    but you choose your path, just depends on your mindset
    whatever you choose, you're always opposed by the other
    conjoined like brothers, with time being the mother
    but when the darkness falls, everything becomes unclear
    it appears what we cant see, becomes all that we fear
    shedding tears of purity, but the black is thick
    imaginative noises seem to make your stomach sick
    and the clock doesnt tick, stuck in a false state of mind
    your voice doesnt echo and your eyes have gone blind
    all these combined, seem to have an overwhelming power
    to make even the bravest of heart, back down and cower
    till that final hour, where the light breaks through
    shining brightly, flowing through your veins reviving you
    thriving you to push through, since this is all just a phase
    dont end up in a craze, cause the cycle happens everyday
    beat the deamons, break the chains, spread your wings and fly
    stomp out your devils, and feel the warmth of the sky
    but feelings of hate arise, darkness brings upon strife
    but realize the fact that its a necessary part of life
    so next time you want to dismiss the dark, i suggest you resist
    without it, all things good and true would probly never exist
    cause if it wasnt for light, we'd never have a reason to fight
    and if it wasn't for dark.......we'd never be seeing the light

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    aight, lets get some feed

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...49#post2381849
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post2381862

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    tight ass flow I was really feeling this
    captured my mental and the words embraced my thoughts
    the structure was straight and it had a nice theme
    keep it up.......peace

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    This was a real nice piece the concept was original so you get props for that.
    The imagery in the verse really stood out but your vocab was excellent each line flowed right into the next it was a great read i'll be looking out for some more of your verse keep writing.

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    thanks, i'll check it out in a bit

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    bump

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    good stucture nice flow. but i thought you could have used multiples cause you lack multis. your vocab was interesting decent vocab i liked it though. very good imagery your imagery was what held the peice together and made it very interesting. but i really think you could use multiples in your peice

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    whatever.....:sigh:......bump

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