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Thread: Flow Around The Globe Pt.1 ( can't fuck with me flow-wise )

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    Flow Around The Globe Pt.1 ( can't fuck with me flow-wise )

    in a topical-deep way I may not always find the right approach but u sure as hell can't fuck with me flow-wise....that's word
    ready for a lesson kidz....


    Verse 1:
    I start right where I sit....close my eyes and go on this trip
    I don’t drive, fly or flow on a ship....I just go high of a dro while I spit
    8 mile I rip with no loss of style then I scrape by Lil Flip n toss him a smile
    na I don’t love men but lyrically...he’s a lost little child
    speakin’ of child I’ma sneak by MJ’s trial to see what it cost to sleep with a child
    Take off to Boston in time, meet Pierce and Walker at the doorstep at nine
    Throw a couple balls and then climb...back in the austin n rhyme
    Ready to drop by the great Falls with a dime
    N of course we’ll ride horseback....with no horse in sight
    No shores, no remorse she’ll rip the clothes of my spine
    Got a couple more shows to blow so I’ma go ghost with no bye-line....


    Bridge:
    Come light that dro with me
    Get yaself high n ready to flow with me
    How many of y’all....wanna go with me....
    We’ll go in a minute there’s no limit
    When the plans grow and the weeds at it’s cinit.....


    Verse2:
    Disappeared now I reappear in no hood....I see skyline
    Mitsubishi, Honda s 2 tripple zero with the golden flame highlight
    Red dot on white ground...why lie?
    I’m in Asia ready to blaze ya but it’s not my stage and day to amaze ya
    I’m here to praise da....high-tech, playstation games and lasers
    Chinese food and Geishas, phasers and slanted eye faces
    Bruce Lee and blades that’ll cut bitch rappers off stages
    No Stoppin’ cuz flow poppin’s conteigous
    My brain faces vagueness....which way shall I take next?!
    To make this a great text and cop a new tapedeck cuz mines wrecked
    Some say my minds wack and that I don’t rhyme correct
    But they been blind yet...to stupid to find that I’m from Germany
    Right back...I hide behind black shades cuz the sun’s burnin me
    Turnin’ me into a tanned cat, put the pen away n empty my shoes....sand?...yep
    Hours of walkin’ and no fan yet...damn that
    Fuck the desert...water’s shortly measured, almost treasured
    Wouldn’t stay here forever if aprhodite would still do pleasures
    Sail to pleasure island or even better....go back home
    Cuz ain’t no place like it plus my weed is empty n I lost my match to light it....




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    it was nice man...in some parts i found it a little simplistic for my liking,but ya know i like deeper pieces...i liked that it flowed real good;nice use of multis all over the places...they gave a real boost to the flow fam.the rhymescheme was predictable,you should work on make that a little.vocabulary was kinda basic and you could upp a bit some words...oh,and nice bridge man.it intergrated good with your verses...overall a nice read.keep it up fam!
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    Das ist seht gut Berlin! Krank! Just plain krank man. Good multis and a sense of flow and a good old fashioned 'don't fuck with me' concept. I think the hook was lacking a little but the verses made up for it in sheer hostility.

    good work, keep posting fam.

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    was no hook fam..it's a bridge...lol
    thx anyway..

    to K9: dog I really didn't care bout vocab...besides if u look at Fab or Lloyd Banks u'll notice that they ain't workin'the vocab that much neither and still both r good musicians....nahmean
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    Berlin...it seems everything u write is true as fuck.....straight vocab...i like the bridge....good concept too.....overall pretty good shit...

    keep reppin...

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    I will....Y'all gotta stop sleepin'
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    wtf....up
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    come on y'all get ya wack asses to write some feed....pz
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    thats so dope man like good job on that drop

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    diz was coo, coulda came a lil harder, i was feelin some of ya linez, keep droppin ya shit

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    the only thing cool bout that was yo bitch got a big ass botty

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    ^^
    lol u fag....moving on
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