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    Exclamation A.F.S Anthem

    Yo here go tha Another Forbidden Sickness ANTHEM!!!



    AFS ANTHEM

    Gucci^
    Niggaz make way for Another Forbidden fucking Sickness
    Yall shake n quiver behind ya post but in text impose on illness
    We tight sons..like Siamese stepping to us is a terrible cause g
    Like toxic waste just doubled our punches..& cause the textual contastrophy
    Volitile ur throat and like seat belts we'll leave u strapped in
    This is my ship and im the captain..floating flows with rhythm
    We are a Forbidden Sickness..so be warned dont fuck with us
    We knockin out these light-weight crews.. like we kickin up dust


    Tha Joka
    Nigga sickness comes to me..before i collapse
    Lyrical beast..runs through my blood..forbidden time lapse
    As i begin to become anotha dope emcee runnin a squad
    Hurt ya mind like it was ya legs in P.E. doin squats
    Don't hate me shawty we come by the ill-ness
    You hate non-stop but fall back when we prove we ta ill-lest
    I called you out so where you at nigga...you aint hard..I causes a trag-edy
    Followin me will only sow Anotha Forbidden Sickness..fucked up you imposter emcees


    Red_
    Eliminate light in blackness, cuz AFS is still ill acquainted
    Conditions unstabled, We enable release of fables
    cuz our neurological cables can't even contain it
    Leave the net tainted, red painted, blood splashed when the pain gets sorted
    Delivered to victims in sizeable proportions leaving brains passed distorted
    no gratification, but leave the sane contorted, with spinals sprained, report it!
    Subjects the same? Deported, we think of new ways to attack
    cerebellums that lack, the experience to pick up the pieces and react
    we give mortal fatalities, aftaeffect is cranial cavities drained like batteries
    the planet's gravity we bend-with-ease... you think with sanity?
    So understand half of this piece, you'll understand tha AFS disease
    rhyme scheme mastered in the rehearse when "emcees" submit to our defeat!


    Lyrically Insane
    When it comes to us spitting hard hitting mathematics,
    we break lines down thoroughly like rocks to crack addicts
    With feasible feedback, we make dickriding emcees defeatable,
    we ‘unkillable’, we cease-wack, empty and…. repeatable
    Leave’wack-cees’ stacked and torsos on meat-racks,ready-and-eatable,
    We gots tight tracks, our mind is the heat-packed plus unbeatable
    Yo...our verbal attacks" blaze mics to portray actual facts
    our tactical tracks receive awards like graphical plaques
    Cause when we rap, we break the boundaries of lyrical graphs
    Overaccomplished sacrete the way we treat the unworthy and cheap
    AFS never sleep, we works on our "Mic Disease" by fighting defeat
    Forbidden Sickness, now we're resurrected kuz we can’t go undetected
    We come through your krew spitting and leaving all yall minds "affected"!


    FUCK!that shit was hot yall.......!And thats tha end for tha rest of tha krews.....lol!


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172219
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172886
    Last edited by lyrically_insane; February 26th, 2005 at 01:27 PM
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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    I Couldnt Really See Flaw Joka Got Me And Lyricly Was Fire Gucci Came Nice
    Red Was Impressive But Seams A Lil Lacking Never The Less There Wasnt Any Real Weaknessess And I Got To Say Blended Very Well Next Step Audio
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ayo ya'll fellaz reppin fo us aint it? lol that was pretty good, ya'll. im glad to see we doing something and yall doing something HOT keep it up

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    yo good shit AFS

    this was sum FIRE!,all tha verses were dope but i was feeling my CUZ INSANE's verse tha most though,

    This show how AFS roll!..if you dont rep AFS!you aint shit!LMFAO

    UPPING THIS!

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    mayne, that shit was straight FYA! niggas,i'm tellin you, can't fuck w/ that shit right there.

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    HELL YA!...straight FYAH!

    this woulda been better if you was in this PROPHET,too bad...well anyways

    UPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    eh, holla at me if you do anotha one...i had what i like to call writers constipation.

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    LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    yeah i know what you mean homie!!!...LOL

    UPPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    I Most Definetly Gotta Thatshit Was Blazing Im New To The The Site So I Need To Be Broken In Please Set Up A Battle For Me Asap Someone.

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    baby i'll 'break' you in...lol....................

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    yo ya'll that shit was fucking sick ya'll got that shit on lock i wish i was still a part of the crew ya know for the good shit like this yo red you need to pm me and me and you can drop a collab werd nigga and if you cuz is down we can do that 2 all three im out
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    ya'll hit these up

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173044

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171974

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    word up good shit niccaz

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    AFS ANTHEM

    Gucci^
    Your shit was aiight man...i think you could have done better on your flow...but your structure was fine...umm..your content wasnt all that bad..you could have worded your lines better..but they werent bad..your overall rhyme scheme was ok...i dont like alot of your rhymin options though..i think you should have come better there..

    Tha Joka

    Your shit wasnt all that bad either...i think you and Gucci matched in criteria..you layed pretty much what he laid..but you had one dope line..i thought was very good

    Don't hate me shawty we come by the ill-ness
    You hate non-stop but fall back when we prove we ta ill-lest

    Dope shit

    Red_

    ^your not all that bad man..but you talk too much about nothin..like it seems every line was the start to a new topic..your words werent worded all thaat well..but i give you props on your vocab..i think you can handle big words good...overall ok verse


    Lyrically Insane

    I think your prolly the best in your crew..i think you do very well on your rhymes..i liked your flow and structure..i think you word all your lines pretty good..your vocab wasnt bad..overall good job man..

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