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Thread: im still here and an asshole

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    im still here and an asshole

    yo im going to spit it absolute for you label egotistical dumb shits.......

    Your label be dick riding you cause they think you cute
    Low budget emcee wouldnt get signed if their rep's were mutes.
    Every line is a movie fallowed by 15 sequels…
    For feeble emcees to continue to see they aint equal….,.
    In other words who ever dissess me gets 16 punches to sample
    In laymens I'll rattle u with every verse I disburse as it’s own epic battle.
    The laws of mathamattics will bend and fold
    After I subtract you from the game and break the mold
    half ass Nas clones want to talk shit hoping to genarate gold?
    I’ll beat your ass one time for each unit ILLMATTIC sold.
    The deference between us is my lyrics have spirit and stay tighter
    while yours hold the spirit of your ghostwriter
    Fragile bitch you wouldn’t even battle me on a game of street fighter.
    Want beef ? it’s done as quick as it begun.
    Cause Most of you are just fags callen me out hoping I’ll cum..
    But when I do you’ll see custody suits for everyone I son.
    Plus child support payments after the arrainment and I aint even done…
    Your banned from the mic….fuck that
    I’ll murder you in a rap… leaven you dead banned from life
    acapells leave you like the devil banned by Christ.
    Anything I write will resite like smut on you fake fucks
    You can earn your stripes?
    Leaven a rainbow on my dick cause you suck.
    NONCENTZ then next level of emcee… you can’t compare
    Let alone add up like retards equating mc=squared
    I wont back down so don’t dare….. double dare….
    Me to take it to air… battling on ep’s promoted on radios waves…
    Just one verse will have your imaginary friend booing you off stage.
    Ticket prices will reduce after I say im better then you and show proof.
    Even your GOD will sport a t-shirt promoting the emcee SATAN produced.
    Jump in the booth ....I spit flames when angered.
    Then turn the 2nd hand smoke to your only ventalation in a gas chamber
    They say keep your friends close enemies closer mines stay in arms reach
    a means to an ends I diss them both with no chance for trust to be breach
    Weather on mics or dykes… im fucking so much you should bar code your ass
    So I can recognize who im ripping or infecting when I act rash.
    Call a truece but it aint all good…you weak and phony claiming the hood
    My vocal leave yours scewed..literally Im worth the weight like chinese food
    Get the MSG? When my mood swings every one dies.
    Ya’ll some maggots that will never evolve to being fly.
    Last edited by noncentz; February 22nd, 2005 at 09:10 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i spit it off the head 77 greenside mobb let em know who it be when i open the heat and c the meat hangin when im bangin' east oakland a hard place but i'll turn ya into waste but b4 i go i gotta give ya a taste bcuz its so fresh the way they guess and contess bcuz they know im the best i gotta let it off my chest and pull the heat up from out my vest and let it spray then pray bcuz i know i den sinned today

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    ^^^what da fuck!!!!!!

    well anyways dawg..tight drop homie,i liked the topik lol liked the flow and rhyming concept on this one....it alos had sum punches in this one too

    well i just got one favor to ask oyu....can you please read and leave feedback on:
    A WORLD FULL OF ATTROCITY
    COLLAB

    plz dawg!...thnx in advance
    VERBAL INTERCOURSE

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    Yo, that shit was dope and tight and dandy fine.
    Keep it up nigga nigga. Holllaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    I especially like the rhymes and flow
    The message is also kicken like finger licken chicken
    Last edited by DrFunkMD; February 23rd, 2005 at 04:25 PM

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    Overall i think you did a really good job on this..i loved the topic..the structure and flow was pretty good,....your imagery was pretty strong..i liked the way you worded your linez also...your vocab was descent...overall good job

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    i THOUGHT THIS WAS A HOTT PIECE.. IT WAS ' WORDED-PERFECT '. VOCAB STOOD ON POINT.
    YOUR CONCEPT WAS KEPT ON TASK, i LIKE THE WAY IT JUST FLOWED THRU;
    IT WASNT COMPLICATED TO READ, SO IT KEPT ME INTERESTED, YOU WERENT JUMPING AROUND LIKE I SEE ALOT OF OTHER TEXTEES DO...
    I'D LIKE TO READ MORE, KEEP IT UP.


    KALIKOZE911...

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Word~Perfect= Ill.

    Another nice drop man, as usuall did ur thing. Vocab and flow were solid. Enjoyable read.

    Hot line:

    The deference between us is my lyrics have spirit and stay tighter
    while yours hold the spirit of your ghostwriter

    ^lmfo .... *saves post wearing goofy grin*

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    sum hot shizzle ma nizzle

    punches going crazy... phew!

    half nas clones n shit....damn!


    from maggots to flies... yeah


    shit iz streezy ma neezy

    1up

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    this was ill

    too many dope lines

    real nice shit, try to add more multies tho, flow would seem much better, but still, this piece was crazy as fuck...

    keep it up

    peace

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    inkthesis i think your write i worried so much about punches not enough on vocab or multis thanks pop i appreciate a sincere critique and i will work on it.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    anyone else
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yea this could use more multis,but u know how i am man,i like ya shit thaough man,ill piece,ill vocab, real dope lines,and wordplay,loved tha topic, i liked tha imagery,this shit was all in all bangin as u know,keep droppin tha hottness god.~!~


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